Please continue this story.Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/05/13 05:43 am
OK...that was a strange twist to this story. I'm still loving it. Carmel need to stop seeing Rod till he gets himself together. He is so wrong for using her and cheating on his wife. Both females are at fault somewhat too by supporting what he is doing. Rod has no respect for females along with Dex. How Rod going to claim somebody like a pimp when he is married. Get rid of him Carmel!Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 02:20 am
More Please! Love it! Love it! Love it!Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 04:14 am
OMG!! "This was no time for twenty fucking questions!" LOL!!!
I wasn't too much into the spanking part, but OMG this story is just so lovingly over the top that you got me hook line and sinker! I have re read it at least ten times.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
More More More!!!!Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/11 12:30 pm
Are the kids really his? I have a feeling miss Holly is not that inocent. other than that great chapter :DReviewer: Vivian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 03:53 pm
Rod's in love, good, golly, miss molly!!! All I want to know is when he is going to divorce Holly? I have the feeling that Holly will try keep him away from his children. Why would you marry a woman that you don't love? This was good!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 04:39 am
Great story, I can definately relate to those christmas times. Good Times!
need some more chapters pronto, also I usually don't comment or care if any writer has errors as long as I can understand it and read it it's all good to me. but a some paragraphs and thoughts were a lil incoherent and all over the place so it was a bit confusing when reading but other than that the story is amazing and I'm totally hooked can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/09/11 07:11 am
I have to admit...I still laugh to I cry when I see who you got playing D'lishus (***tears be rolling**) I have to make a comment on one reveiwer about Urban Fiction and is this a satire or such.
Some of...well most of the urban fiction out there right now is 10 times more crazy than this one here. I don't read urban fiction on the regular...I guess I'm just ol' skool like that, but there will be a few that catches my eye and then I become a fan.
The reason I like this one here is because its new and you don't see much of this type of writing on this site, sista you busted the door open wide open with this one. I like it & Bring me more!Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 03:23 pm
Marrying a ho because she give any until you get married crazy, but to marry woman that you don't love is stupid!!! I do hope that Carmel is not developing feelings because it would get ugly if he tried to divorce that frigid ho Holly. I love Rod is so fine!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 03:49 am