Great story, I can definately relate to those christmas times. Good Times!
need some more chapters pronto, also I usually don't comment or care if any writer has errors as long as I can understand it and read it it's all good to me. but a some paragraphs and thoughts were a lil incoherent and all over the place so it was a bit confusing when reading but other than that the story is amazing and I'm totally hooked can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/11 07:11 am
I have to admit...I still laugh to I cry when I see who you got playing D'lishus (***tears be rolling**) I have to make a comment on one reveiwer about Urban Fiction and is this a satire or such.
Some of...well most of the urban fiction out there right now is 10 times more crazy than this one here. I don't read urban fiction on the regular...I guess I'm just ol' skool like that, but there will be a few that catches my eye and then I become a fan.
The reason I like this one here is because its new and you don't see much of this type of writing on this site, sista you busted the door open wide open with this one. I like it & Bring me more!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/09/11 03:23 pm
Can't wait for the rest...it's so different from the norm. I don't think I would do it their way but I do feel their pain.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/11 11:26 am
i am enjoying this story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/11 05:27 am
Marrying a ho because she give any until you get married crazy, but to marry woman that you don't love is stupid!!! I do hope that Carmel is not developing feelings because it would get ugly if he tried to divorce that frigid ho Holly. I love Rod is so fine!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/11 03:49 am
I am really loving this story. I dread when the two of them get caught! More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/11 01:35 am