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Title: Chapter 5

Please continue this story.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/05/13 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 5

Update please 

Reviewer: Kai Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/12 07:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoying this story. I know you haven't updated since last year, but I hope you decide to finish this story. 

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/12 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow great chapter plz hurry soon with the next one

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 11:53 am

Title: Chapter 5

OK...that was a strange twist to this story.  I'm still loving it.  Carmel need to stop seeing Rod till he gets himself together.  He is so wrong for using her and cheating on his wife.  Both females are at fault somewhat too by supporting what he is doing.  Rod has no respect for females along with Dex.  How Rod going to claim somebody like a pimp when he is married.  Get rid of him Carmel!

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 5

What the hell is he?  I wasn't expecting the paranormal aspect of this story.  Is Jean Claude visiting Darren?  This is good!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Why do I have the feeling that somethings about to go down....

I am eagerly awaiting the next update!!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 1

More Please! Love it! Love it! Love it!

Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 4

OMG!! "This was no time for twenty fucking questions!"   LOL!!!

I wasn't too much into the spanking part, but OMG this story is just so lovingly over the top that you got me hook line and sinker!  I have re read it at least ten times.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

More More More!!!!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/11 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I would love to read Holly's point of view.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/11 12:46 am

Title: Chapter 4

Love it!!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 07:55 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Mmmmmmmmm ! More please ! ;-)

Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Are the kids really his? I have a feeling miss Holly is not that inocent. other than that great chapter :D

Reviewer: Vivian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Girl i'm loving this kinda of writing it's so nasty and wild Rod is a sexy mofo and ghetto as all getup MORE PLZ!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 08:14 am

Title: Chapter 4

Rod's in love, good, golly, miss molly!!!  All I want to know is when he is going to divorce Holly?  I have the feeling that Holly will try keep him away from his children.  Why would you marry a woman that you don't love?  This was good!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh yeah, I'm enjoying this!  Thanks for the fix!!!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 4

Loved it as always. I got kinda confused at first about who her "Valentine visitor" was...but don't worry I got who it was.  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 3

Great story, I can definately relate to those christmas times. Good Times!

need some more chapters pronto, also I usually don't comment or care if any writer has errors as long as I can understand it and read it it's all good to me.  but a some paragraphs and thoughts were a lil incoherent and all over the place so it was a bit confusing when reading but other than that the story is amazing and I'm totally hooked can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/09/11 07:11 am

Title: Chapter 2

Hmmm.  No protection...any pregnancy coming?

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 07:21 am

Title: Chapter 3

I have to admit...I still laugh to I cry when I see who you got playing D'lishus (***tears be rolling**) I have to make a comment on one reveiwer about Urban Fiction and is this a satire or such.

Some of...well most of the urban fiction out there right now is 10 times more crazy than this one here. I don't read urban fiction on the regular...I guess I'm just ol' skool like that, but there will be a few that catches my eye and then I become a fan.

The reason I like this one here is because its new and you don't see much of this type of writing on this site, sista you busted the door open wide open with this one. I like it & Bring me more!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait for the rest...it's so different from the norm. I don't think I would do it their way but I do feel their pain.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 11:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

Yum Yum!LOL

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 08:03 am

Title: Chapter 3

i am enjoying this story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 3

Marrying a ho because she give any until you get married crazy, but to marry woman that you don't love is stupid!!!  I do hope that Carmel is not developing feelings because it would get ugly if he tried to divorce that frigid ho Holly.   I love Rod is so fine!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 3

I am really loving this story.  I dread when the two of them get caught!  More please!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 01:35 am

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