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Title: Chapter 1

You named a grown assed man D'lishus. I should have stopped reading then, but I didn't.

There are no words. Please tell me this is a satirical expose on what urban fiction has become and not your idea of good - entertaining fiction. Please. If your answer is no - I can't - this is ridiculous.

 Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Amber Rose's smutty face had me ready to puke, but this story is kinda like FIAH. Very interesting.

 Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 09:17 pm
Title: Chapter 2

hummm...this seems so unrealistic to the point Carmel reminds me of a stripper or a trallop. I don't know if I like it though

 Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 07:51 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow this is certainly a different outlook. Can't wait for the rest.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 11:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

GEEEEEZ , That Rob is an awful guy ! HOT , but a DOG !  I LOVE this story ! Please write more !

 Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 2

Whew! That was sizzling. Can't wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 03:05 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Rod is a piece of work, ain't he?

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 12:25 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Damn! Da,m! Damn! 

That was beyond hot!  OMG!  I wants more of this one!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 12:23 pm
Title: Chapter 2

HAWT can never begin to describe this one right here!! Bring the rest I'm READY!!!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 04:04 am
Title: Chapter 2

Damn that was hot, I love me some Eddie Ciberian!!!  That man is so damn  fine, I don't smoke but I need a cigarette right now!!  I can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 2

FINALLY A STORY WITH QUALITY. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT

 

KEEP IT CUMMING

 

 Reviewer: HRH Queen Xtacy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this story started with a bang!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 01:55 am
Title: Chapter 1

This is so good.  Gon be EPIC

HRH

 

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Date: 07/09/11 01:03 am
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