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Title: Chapter 3

what the hell? i hope he doesen't kill just because he has a crush on her

 Reviewer: tamshipper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/09/11 05:37 am
Title: Chapter 1

love story, that man is mean as hell, i hope she turn his world upside down. Break him before he break her.all in all love story.

 Reviewer: pocket Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 06:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. Only one thing I would say is just try to watch your grammar and spelling. Otherwise this could be a masterpiece.

 Reviewer: Nakia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 07:03 am
Title: Chapter 3

Can I have more Coffe please ;-)

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 02:39 am
Title: The Cast

Oh, see you changed the casting.:-0

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 02:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this story.  I hope he doesn't just "run over" Coffee girl and I hope that perhaps he has met his match in her.  I love twists and turns and I hope that there will be plenty in this story.  Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 09:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE it so far!! Please don't stop,I've been waiting for more since you last pasted an incarnation of the Coffee Girl story. This story is begging for many more chapters and an awesome ending!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 05:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Who cares about typos, I gotta to find out what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, I know what is going to happen, Next.

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 03:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Okay ! your Hero is one scary dude , I don't know how you're going to humanize him.

This seems like it could be a really good story, but MAJOR editing is needed for this chapter.

Keep going you got a diamond in the rough !

 Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 03:29 pm
Title: Chapter 3

love it, love the detail.

more please and soon.

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 11:01 am
Title: Chapter 3

I am enjoying this story so far....The only advice I can give is to make the female character strong not week...To many times writer have a tendency of making us as weak minded women, we are tough bunch that can hang with the big boys when pushed to protect the ones we love.

P.S.  Saw a hint of her toughness  keep up with the good work

 

Good job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 09:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

It's very good so far,so keep up the good work, but you need to at least re-read it 3 times becuase I caught a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that could esaily be noticed if you re-read it...  other than that, good job. I really really really like it, you're a good writer. Nice ideas :)

 Reviewer: Hellogoodbye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 07:05 am
Title: Chapter 3

I love it. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 07:00 am
Title: Chapter 3

whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 06:55 am
Title: Chapter 3

Supreb, I need more.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 06:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

gald this stroy is back can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: phillybaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 05:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

PLEASE! update soon!

 Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 03:59 am
Title: The Cast

love the chracter that were chosen for the story.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 06:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

great more please

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 06:33 am
Title: The Cast

Great Cast all the guys are devastingly handsome and gals are beautiful

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 06:29 am
Title: Chapter 1

WOW I NEED MORE ASAP!!!LOL



Author's Response:

Omg I feel like a Celebrity NiaZ.. I will update Asap 

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 05:29 am
Title: Chapter 1

I m glad your story is back and I hope you will continue to update.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 04:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

Please update this story. I hope your muse continues to the end. I liked the first 2 versions and I know I will like this one.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks I hope you like this one but be warned this one is way more adultish then the first two.

 Reviewer: Zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 04:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

Love it, update soon! ;)



Author's Response:

I will have a update either 2mara or Thursday.

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 03:31 am
Title: The Cast

I so love the second male lead that have casted in your tale.  He is hot!!!



Author's Response:

I know right. Lol

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 02:47 am
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