This was a great story. Glad that Tom and Christina did come full circle. This is the ending we fans wanted since TNT is not going to give us our happy ending. I look forward to reading more from you should you choose to write more.Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 04:32 pm
Thank you both for sharing this wonderful journey of Tom and Christina with your readers. The story was touching and the updates were regular. Do hope you two will work together again and come up with another lovely romance.........soon.Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 07:59 am
Wow, Tomif angry with himself for falling for Jessica. That was your choice Tom, not the hospital staff. Not Christiana's, just you felt ignored you made the decision to begina relationship with Jessica. Get help Tom, before you Christina too far.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/11 03:50 am
Yes they got Jessica, that ho dersserves to spend the rest of her life in prison. I can't wait for them to find out that she isn't pregnant. I know that that crazy ho was lying!! Another great chapter.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/11 04:18 am
I am so glad that Brenda had enough sense to call the Detective LeShay about the photos and map to find Tom. DId the police tell Christina not to alert to hospital to Tom's disappearance? When are they going to put out an APB on Jessica? The know that it's her, so what is the hold up? The format is a lttle bit betterand I was able to follow the flow of the story better.
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Date: 01/10/11 06:43 pm
Wow, I can't believe that she didn't call the detective when she found out that Tom didn't come back to work. I am so pissed at Christina, they both deserve each other. I hope that they put a tail on her, and I not believing that Jessica is pregnant. I do know that she is crazy and that the detectives will need to watch her like a hawk. I want her so dead.
I read one of the other comments by another reader and she is write this story would be a better read if it were reformatted. It is hard to follow as it's typed now, I found myself rereading lines over and over again, it's starting to really irritate my eyes.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/09/11 06:37 pm
Kaleah, please look into reformatting your story. These long block paragraphs are almost impossible to read. You should separate the dialogue out from the rest of the scenes. If you check out other stories on the site I'm sure you can get some suggestions on how to reformat your story to make it easier to read.Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/09/11 09:00 pm
For such educated people they make some dumb decisions. When detective Le'Shay mentioned Jessica they should have told him about Tom's affairs and Jessica's subsequent pregnancy. I don't understand why they didn't tell it, oh why why didn't they tell the police about that letter? Hello when they ho got pregnant you didn't sleeping with after having a drink, so why would you drink something else in her presence? My teeth are itching here!!! I can't wait to read more, I hope that this ends with the death of Jessica and her goons!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/09/11 05:28 pm
Have been shedding tears for the past few chapters, lol. Hope to see some tender loving moments that will help to build up their relationship now that they are temporary away from stress and troubles!Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/09/11 08:23 am
Glad both of them have finally decided to give their marriage another chance. Hope to read more about their attempts to improve the relationship and family bonding. May their love and support for each other helps them to overcome all obstacles and bring them a HEA!Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/09/11 03:55 am
YOu didn't mention that Jessica was wearing any gloves, so hopefully if the Crime Scene officers did there job they would print the knives and the broken glass from the back door. I wonder how many other men has that heifer stalked and harrassed?Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/11 03:21 am
FIrst I need to say that that Jessica bitch is crazy, I mean the type of crazy that would require institutionalization for eons. But she is in complete control of facialities and should be placed under the jail. I still think that she's either faking a pregnancy or the baby is someone elses. On to the good stuff I am so glad that Tom followed her to Virginia Beach, she would have kept on avoiding and nothing would have solved. I am glad that she found it her heart to forgive and work on their relationship again. I was so happy that she said that she wants them to leave Richmond as a family.
Jessica makes my teeth itch, please kill her off!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/11 03:05 am
So, this Jessica chic is crazy. I hope she does not hurt Christina or boil any rabbits!!Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/09/11 09:18 pm
I knew that that bitch was trying to get pregnant by Tom and he dumb self fell into her trap. He needs to make sure that she is really pregnant and that the baby is really his. I wouldn't put it past her to inseminate herself with sperm from another man to pass it off as Tom's. HOw much can their relationship take before it is demaged irrepairably? I am still pulling for these two deeplu flawed people. What will it take to get rid of Jessica? Have her die in a accident of some sort after her lie is discovered. I know that there is somthing fishy about this pregnancy, Tom has no memory of that evening. That doesn't come from simply being drunk. I think Jessica drugged him after getting him back to her place. That ho makes my teeth and ass itch!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/11 06:29 pm
What an emotional roller coaster ride!
My heart bleeds for this lovely couple. When Christina asked Tom if he is having an affair, he taunted back by saying that's her department. I know it's tough for Tom to truly forgive and forget. But Christina is trying her best to make this marriage work by being a great mum, loving wife and competent worker. I feels for her when she confessed to Brenda that she does not know how much more this marriage can take. Though I still hope against hope that Tom did not actually sleep with Jessica, having the table turned now might make him realize the pain and despair that Christina had been through earlier on while trying to seek for his forgiveness.
BTW, thanks for the regular updates and am certainly looking forward to more twists and turns. You are truly an awesome writer!Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/11 03:56 pm
Why oh why can't these get it right? Tom, why couldn't you just talk to Christina after the kids birrthday party? That is an experience as a father that you will not back. Your stupidity is going to cost you your family. When you will you two get it together? Will get my HEA? I hope that that ho didn't get pregnant, that would destroy Tom and Christina!!! These characters are killing me!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 05:20 pm
Well, that was a nice twist. I was waiting for Christina to get her backbone straight and she certainly did. I'm enjoying the story a lot and thanks for sharing!Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 05:44 pm
Tom you are so wrong and stupid. Christina made a mistake two years and has since tried her best to make your marriage work. SHe even faced a difficult pregnancy and you repay her by cheating. I had a bad feeling when she was introduced into the story. I was hoping that Tom would remember what it felt like to be cheated on, but he still fell for the bannana in the tale pipe. He needs that tell ho that it's over and stay away from her. She needs to get fired!!! Or better run over by a mack truck!! Christina and Tom are both stupid thus they are both perfect for each other!! Kudos I love this chapter even though it pissed me off!!! Be a man Tom!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 05:36 pm