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Title: Three

 Good update.  Now what is to follow.  How will the hook up or unhook up...(if that is a word)  smile

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 09:22 pm
Title: Three

Oh wow this is crazy lol and fun. It sad she feels so low about her self. Her ex must treated her badly. Jordan looks like he want to be run over by a car right now lol and their two best friends are still a trip lol. but for some reason these two in a way need each other. I hope they stay together thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 02:43 pm
Title: Three

Yeah, now the fun begins....

 

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 02:20 pm
Title: Three

You got me:  hooked, line and sinker!

I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Bring it on BABY!

 Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 02:03 pm
Title: Three

lol, no way to lie about it now. Cameras are everywhere.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 01:36 pm
Title: Three

please carry one cnt wqit dfor the next one xx

 Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 11:04 am
Title: Three

Brooke is a hot mess, now Jackie getting drunk and marrying is a good thing because it's Jordan Armstrong.  The heifer is off her rocker.  Those to need to sit down and talk.   Jordan needs to realize that he and Jenna (the ho) aren't meant to be.  I am truly hooked on this story!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 09:01 am
Title: Three

ooooooweeeee what's gonna happen next?! exciting!! Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 08:55 am
Title: Three

Nicely done!

 Reviewer: ammalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 08:35 am
Title: Two

LOVE IT UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! I CANT WAIT ANYMORE

 Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/10/11 01:25 am
Title: One

I'll tell you what I think... I love it so far!!! Keep up the good work

 Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/10/11 11:50 pm
Title: Two

Brooke is a hot mess but Sam has got her number.  I love those two!!  I love how Sam introduces the mister to his missus!!  Fabulous!!!  Please keep it coming.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/11 06:10 pm
Title: Two

please carry on would like to see longer chapter great work love to see what happen next x

 Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/10/11 02:55 pm
Title: Two

Wow so husband and wife finaly meet each other let the love flow lol. I love  jordan and Jackie best friends lol they are a tirp. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/11 03:27 am
Title: Two

Oops! I guess I shouldn't read your story while at work! I just laughed out loud and everyone looked over there cubicle to see what I was laughing about.I can tell,  Oh My Goodness, this story is going to be hilarious! Just this installment has got me cracking up! Keep it up, and I can stand to read atleast 20 installments of this story! Also, unless I was so busy laughing that I didn't notice, but I did not see any grammar errors so I will give you 5 stars and a 10 rating!  And we haven't gotten to the sex yet!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/11 12:46 am
Title: Two

Brooke is a bit caustic. Well as least Jackie knows who her "hubby" is. Nice chapter!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 06:31 pm
Title: Two

Dun Dun Dun! They meet again this time sober.

Thank you for sharing,

Happy writing.

 

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 03:37 pm
Title: Two

oh Noooo! A cliffhanger. Loved the update though - light and funny and with Brooke being a totally insane character. Just briefly I wondered, why Jackie and Brooke just didnt head to the hotel instead of trying to find the bar - the scene of the original sin. Jackie did leave the hotel in the morning, but then I guess she didnt know the room number either. What a hot mess and I am loving it. Hey, please dont let us wait to long for the next chapter. lol

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 01:44 pm
Title: One

I like the start.  Thank you for sharing.  Can't wait to see where this story goes.

Happy writing.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 01:27 pm
Title: Two

Loving these characters so far.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 11:59 am
Title: Two

I am loving this story so far.....can't wait to read more:-)

 Reviewer: kwajeraspen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 11:55 am
Title: Two

LOL   I love this!  MOre please!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 11:43 am
Title: Two

I'm loving it!

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 09:55 am
Title: Two

Brooke is so annoying! Can't wait to see what happens between Jackie and Jordan. :)

 Reviewer: tahti-bunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/11 08:16 am
Title: Two

Loved the update. Brooke was a trip!! Had me cracking up!

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Date: 21/10/11 07:48 am
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