I clicked thru coz I've read something similar at Literotica, but your story is different enough and interesting enough to stand on it's own.
I liked it all. Good work. Keep going.Going to read the next chapter now.
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/10/11 12:38 pm
Great start, please continue.
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/10/11 12:36 pm
LOL.... great start... love it. Obviously this time what happened in Vegas isnt about to stay in Vegas. :D
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/10/11 12:15 pm
You stole this story from bbs reloaded. The same exact story is on there and it's called color of love !!!!!
Author's Response: Well, I don't know about that. I originally wrote this story for Justin Timberlake along time ago. You can check it out on both of the NSync fictin websites. My username is JRTSNUBIANBORICUAQUEEN. Maybe the story is similar, but this is def 100% mine...lol Reviewer: Aye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/10/11 11:13 am
A very interesting start. Please continue with the story. Can you update your other stories as wallpaper. I love it
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/10/11 10:25 am
Very good start! Already have a mystery!
Reviewer: Faye Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/10/11 09:07 am
interesting story.please continue. update soon.
Author's Response:
I happy that you find this story interesting. I will be updating soon. Thanks so much for the review!
-Rina
Reviewer: nichole Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/10/11 08:49 am