When you coming back? Manny and Corrina deserve a sweet baby and that pistol Molly needs to explore her Christian faith. When you coming back?Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/01/17 01:50 am
Great story. Thnx.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/01/17 06:21 am
AH! The complete beauty of a man, in all its divine sensuality and architectural form is a wonder to behold, as Corrina has now discovered. I love the beautiful description of Manny's maleness that Corrina delighted in discovering, as she never before really knew the body of a man. Her only previous intimacy being with her selfish ex-husband who never made love to her nor allowed any true sensual union, instead just coitus.
This has been an absolutely Fantabulous story; excellent writing and very well drawn strongly interesting characters whom I felt each so personably, even the very wicked villains.
But, of course those characters whom I loved gave me joy, laughs, and inspiration for the great value and strength of love. The eroticism in this story was also thrilling! There were also laughs along the way as, well, as my fears for the couple, especially Manny in his determinative fight against Racism to have his love and marriage with Corrina, he never weakened in his resolve. Manny was indeed a wonderful Hero, who amazed me!
Thank you so much Brenda1257 for sharing your Superb talent with me and others to write this wonderful adventure of life and love that once I began reading I could not stop until completed next day. I was so personally involved in the characters and what would happen in their lives.
Thank you for your kind review. I loved the movie and I just let my imagination run wild. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I appreciate all reviews which makes it worth the work. Thanks again!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/12 04:46 pm
DAMN! They are a great couple and I'm glad Corrina finally got a man who loves and also appreciates her. I'm happy for Manny too, he's survived his grief for his deceased beloved wife and now moved on, in-love anew; I'm sure his wife would be happy for him!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/12 02:23 pm
DAMN! I really Loved Manny's love making, also he was so patient with Corrina's shyness and he educated me right along with Corrina; more in-depth about the delights of oral sex as part of love making, even about the beauty of the Black vagina with its contrasting beautiful internal rosy pink color. Regardless of all my several years of sexual experience as a Black woman, I've never been aware. Like Corrina it's strange what we don't know about our body nor really appreciate.
Thank you Brenda1257 for this beautiful and delicate writing of Love's sexual expression! I really enjoyed the trip!
Date: 25/01/12 01:24 pm
WOW! That was Really HOT!..I see Manny cannot restrain his desire any longer; actually I see no reason for him and Corrina to refrain from having sex. They both have admitted their love for each other. But, I give Manny extra points for pleasing Corrina with hand sex but seeking no fulfillment for himself. Still, I wonder how long he will be able to continue to wait, he's been voluntarily without sex for 1 and 1/2 years due to mourning his wife's death. Now, that he's in love again his body has become very much alive and wanting Corrina.Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/12 05:06 am
WOW! Manny's mother's strong warm demonstration of acceptance of Corrina, casting aside her prejudice, that must have been cut from the reduced version of the movie I watched on TV. But, I'm extremely glad his mother saw deeply realized the value of Love. Yeah, the death of her husband definitely brought home that truth!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/12 04:20 am
Three weeks is a very long time to be absent from school, Corrina was wrong in that she also did not first discuss it with Molly's father!
This is a beautiful very sweet story that I love. I'm sure the death of Manny's father forcibly brought the realization of the importance of Love is far greater than his present anger at Corrina and to his mother that it is far greater for her son Manny to have the happiness of his heart instead of being restricted by her and other's prejudice.Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/12 03:57 am
I really liked this chapter. It ended on such a positive note. Like that Manny gave Frank advice on his sex life and that Frank acted on his advice. Funny to see that Jevina really liked it after some of the comments she made. Molly is happy and is thriving. Great story!
LOL. Frank took Jevina by surprise. He told her that he wanted to show her just how much he loved her and then he laid it on her. LOL. Needless to say, she liked it very very much. she was grinning for days. LOL. So much for the things that their mama told them...Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/11 08:10 pm
I sooo loved this movie when it came out and watch it everytime i catch it playing, and have always wondered what life had instore for them when the credits roll ...i must say i love ..love ..love that you have given me a peek into the beauty of there relationship, hell i pop popcorn and eat everytime i see a new post ..hehe ..thank you love this fic ...cyn~
I loved this movie too! I still watch it on youtube and I have the dvd. Thanks for the review!Reviewer: cynn333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 05:48 pm
Man!!! Corina sure got a lot to learn amd Manny is just happy to be the teacher. It's gonna be a honeymoon full of sex education and Corina is gonna enjoy every minute of it. LOL.
LOL YOu are so right. Her ideas and conservative beliefs are going right out the window. I enjoyed this chapter because my mother (who's 78) told me growing up that she was told a lot of this stuff by her mother and I've had other's confirm it. LOL My, my...how far we've come!Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 05:01 am
Lay it on her Manny!! Make her speak in tongues!!! Corrina don't listen to your sister Jervina anymore. Corrina is about to experience sexual freedom and mind blowing sex, Whoo-Hoo!!! Corrina ride that cowboy!!
LOL I think Jevina's voice faded in the background. Jevina? Uh, Jevina who?Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 04:11 am
That was sexy, Corrina let go anf just love your man and allow your man to love you his way. Manny is not freak he just loves sex with the woman that he loves and that woman is you. Just enjoy the ride!!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 04:06 am
More, more, more!!!! You can't stop here, we have to know what Corrina thinks about making love with a white man and vice versa!!!!!
I'm working on their sexy honeymoon (both perpectives) as we speak!
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/11 12:52 am
Brenda i do have to say you've spoilt us with the amount of updates! This story is brilliant! Follows the movie with your lil twist which i love! Is it bad to say im bessotted with this! Your work is amazing! God bless :D
Thanks Chatty: My eyes are watering from so much reading and writing this weekend. Your comments make it all worthwhile.Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 12:58 am
Too bad Jenny doesn't put all that effort into finding someone else to be happy with instead of messing with Manny and Corrina. I think Harold has bitten off more than he can chew. The man taking pictures should be ashamed of himself. Great chapter.Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 01:32 am