that was so funny ole girl is a trip, i loved it. update soon.Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 05:10 am
Aubrey is still stuck on stupid and glued to dumb, so James won't stand a chance. Aubrey is dumb, dumb, ditty!!! There is no words to describe the level of Heather's stupidty. There is hope for Aubrey because her stupidty is based on being a sister living in America, Heather was deprived of oxygen for a very long time. Heather is hopeless!! I love this story!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 04:36 am
what the heck is going on you kinda have a good outline but its outta wack read this over edit and please get a beta it has potential.
I thought it made sense to help explain why Aiden acted the way she did. But maybe I'll just delete this one and post the next chapter.Reviewer: jemmy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 02:57 am
It's enjoyable now!
I like how you started the story without a lot of history and backloading, trusting us to figure it out.
They seem like two good people.Reviewer: an Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 05:57 pm
I think Aubrey's low self esteem has her so afraid that someone like James could love her that she's running for the hills. She's already emotionally attached to him and she's scared to death.
I hope that James can break through that shell of hers. Love those cast pix. I can't figure out why she thinks she's fat and ugly. She's neither as far as I can see. Did someone really mess with her head like that?
I can't wait for the update!Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:23 pm
James should ignore Aubrey for a while. Leave her alone and let her come to him. To me Aubrey is pathetic and overly dramatic. I can understand that she may be embarrassed about what had happened between her and James. But she being way to extreme. They have been friends for a while, can't she at least give the guy a break and trust him.
And she needs to work on her low self esteem. Its VERY unattractive.
Date: 02/11/11 04:38 pm
I am really loving this. I feel sorry for James. He is going to have a hard time convincing Aubrey of his feelings because of her low self esteem. I anxiously await the next update!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:41 am
A beautiful start to this story. I really like your writing in this story and I think the plot really works well. I also like the characters:) They are so adorable. I especially like that the James is a gentleman. Awh. Keep up the good work!Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 07:54 am
dude its getting hot please update it ! really really good and steamy lemon sceneReviewer: jaysaybay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 05:58 am
ohhh wat gona happen next oh i feel srry for jame dat other is evil :<Reviewer: dede Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 05:55 am