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Title: You Can Run But You Can't Hide...

that was so funny ole girl is a trip, i loved it.  update soon.

 Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 05:10 am
Title: You Can Run But You Can't Hide...

Good grief...what is her problem? How can she just diss her friend like that.  I guess she wasn't too much of a friend.  Hopefully she will give James a chance.

 Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 04:39 am
Title: You Can Run But You Can't Hide...

I love this story but its killing me man Aubrey needs to finally talk to James jesus I'm dyinggg lol

 Reviewer: underrestrains Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 04:38 am
Title: You Can Run But You Can't Hide...

Aubrey is still stuck on stupid and glued to dumb, so James won't stand a chance.  Aubrey is dumb, dumb, ditty!!!  There is no words to describe the level of Heather's stupidty.  There is hope for Aubrey because her stupidty is based on being a sister living in America, Heather was deprived of oxygen for a very long time.  Heather is hopeless!!  I love this story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 04:36 am
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

OMG!  This chapter was way too funny.  Imagine having that conversion in a public place. 

 Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 04:21 am
Title: Everything has Changed

what the heck is going on you kinda have a good outline but its outta wack read this over edit and please get a beta it has potential.



Author's Response:

I thought it made sense to help explain why Aiden acted the way she did. But maybe I'll just delete this one and post the next chapter.

 Reviewer: jemmy Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 02:57 am
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

It's enjoyable now! 

I like how you started the story without a lot of history and backloading, trusting us to figure it out.

They seem like two good people.

 Reviewer: an Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 05:57 pm
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

I love the beginning. Please don't keep us waiting too long for more.

 Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 02:46 am
Title: Cast

She really is overly dramatic!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 01:47 am
Title: Everything has Changed

I think Aubrey's low self esteem has her so afraid that someone like James could love her that she's running for the hills.  She's already emotionally attached to him and she's scared to death. 

I hope that James can break through that shell of hers.  Love those cast pix.  I can't figure out why she thinks she's fat and ugly.  She's neither as far as I can see.  Did someone really mess with her head like that?

I can't wait for the update!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:23 pm
Title: Everything has Changed

Aubrey really flipped out! James is right, why shouldn't he be attracted to her and with there close friendship, she shouldn't be surprised of them hooking up. I hope they start to get it right.

 Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 07:54 pm
Title: Everything has Changed

Aubrey is being really childish. She is a grown woman act like it. Ever heard of communication. Tell James your feelings. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:55 pm
Title: Everything has Changed

James should ignore Aubrey for a while. Leave her alone and let her come to him. To me Aubrey is pathetic and overly dramatic. I can understand that she may be embarrassed about what had happened between her and James. But she being way to extreme. They have been friends for a while, can't she at least give the guy a break and trust him.

And she needs to work on her low self esteem. Its VERY unattractive.

 Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 04:38 pm
Title: Cast

Wonderful story. I love the pics. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 02:32 pm
Title: Everything has Changed

I am really loving this.  I feel sorry for James.  He is going to have a hard time convincing Aubrey of his feelings because of her low self esteem.  I anxiously await the next update!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:41 am
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

She should be the one to go to him. The ball is in her court. Can't wait to see what happens.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:26 am
Title: Everything has Changed

Excellent start. Can't wait for the next chapter

 Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 10:47 am
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

A beautiful start to this story. I really like your writing in this story and I think the plot really works well. I also like the characters:) They are so adorable. I especially like that the James is a gentleman. Awh. Keep up the good work!

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 07:54 am
Title: Everything has Changed

Wow, what a start! More please. They seriously need to talk as there's some miscommunication/misunderstanding going on here and that needs to be clarified.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 07:29 am
Title: Everything has Changed

Next chapter please! :)

 Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:31 am
Title: Everything has Changed

Will you post cast pictures?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:25 am
Title: Everything has Changed

I am enjoying the story...

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:02 am
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

I love the start of the story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:01 am
Title: Everything has Changed

dude its getting hot please update it ! really really good and steamy lemon scene

 Reviewer: jaysaybay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 05:58 am
Title: Another Day Another Billable Hour

ohhh wat gona happen next oh i feel srry for jame dat other is evil :<

 Reviewer: dede Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 05:55 am
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