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Title: A new Face

I thought this was off to a great start. I am interested in learning more about Valarie since she comes off a bit vapid and insecure. I di d have  a couple of laugh momemnts which were definitly good. I am interesed in seeing where this could go and I like not knowing fo rnow. 

 Reviewer: Fatal Mars Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/14 06:33 am
Title: A new Face

Curious to know... How is this story completed?

 Reviewer: Emerald Taurus Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/12 05:21 pm
Title: A new Face

This is a one-shot story which ends in this chapter #3; however, it does not convey the posted summary:  the addiction that is supposed to happen to Valerie from calling the escort agency did not happen, actually she never called.

The get together of friends in this chapter was nice and i liked Valerie's attraction to Caleb, they could possibly make a good couple!

 

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 05:09 pm
Title: Wanna be loved

Yeah!  Aiden is fine!  A mighty handsome man, Teresa is very pretty, maybe she'll break down and take a piece of Aiden, just say to hell with her ego for just one night!, LOL

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 04:53 pm
Title: Cast

Who is the very cute and lovely chocolate girl in the banner.  In the cast photos I see Valerie, whom i presume to be the leading lady in this story, from the photos she is a very light skinned girl, really could pass for any race, but certainly is not the Black girl in the banner, who grabs my attention!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 04:37 pm
Title: A new Face

I guess with a little more work this will be better, but right now it is alright! But compared to what I have written in my life (which is zero) this is great.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/11 03:30 am
Title: A new Face

So far, this is simply amazing. I really can't wait to read more~ 

 Reviewer: Demain Soir Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/11 03:52 am
Title: Wanna be loved

good

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 06:00 am
Title: Cast

You need to write more. I loved your one shot and wish it was longer so I'm happy that your redoing it but since I kinda know how its gonna end i want to know how you will progress with the story. So I will be waiting for what you have next, I;m sure it will be great.

 Reviewer: ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 12:00 am
Title: A new Face

i like this new story plot now there is so much more to look forward to and see instetad of just a one shot omg keep it coming 

 Reviewer: underrestrains Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 11:38 pm
Title: Cast

nice

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 06:07 pm
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