This was a fantastic read i wish however that Michelle wouldn't just tell all her business without knowing ppl and Christian didn't fuck everything in sight and to know that both Chrisitan and Ben deserved to die if they killed those babies. Now that this read is completed i wished it could have told the fate of Michelle, Victoria if she dared to go to that house, Christian, Sean, Julie and the rest of the ghost.
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/01/12 12:17 am
Excellent last chapter! So glad Michelle and Wilbur got out of that damn house! Lmao about the dead lion in the house. I hope he eats Victoria up!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/11 12:38 am
This story didn't end like I thought it would, Michelle is still stupid. When she and Sean left that house the first time she should have stayed gone, then the babies would have still been alive. Now she's married to another rich man. I am wondering is she capable of love. Why did she send Wilbur away to boarding school> I don't like her at all, she should have died!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/11 11:27 pm
I don't feel sorry for Christian or Julia and as for the murder house it wasn't going to let Michelle leave with the twins NO ONE EVER leaves the murder house.
Reviewer: ReadingFan21 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/11 06:20 am
I don't know what to say about these people, but Michelle is so stupid. As soon as all that strange mess started happening I would have been gone, as a matter catching my husband in bed with his ex would have been the end of our marriage. Julia I wanted dead. but not Sean. Now Christain is dead because of Michelle's stupid mistake. This is not going to be a happy ending!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/11 03:48 am
Michelle you have lost your mind!!! Constance is crazy and dying didn't help cure her.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 12:33 am
Christian should come and burn the house down.... It's funny how Michelle is still mad at Christain for sleeping around when she is doing the same thing and she doesn't even know who her babies daddy is, it might be said that Michelle deserves better than Christain but i think Christain deserves better than Michelle.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/11 10:30 pm
CHRISTIAN MICHELLE and WILBUR need to get out that house and never return, and i pray that she's carrying Christian's babies and not Ben's
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/12/11 05:35 am
This story is really getting crazy!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/11 05:29 am
I am still stuck on the fact that they are still living in this house. I hope that nothing happens to Wilbur because of his parents stupidty. Awesome!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 06:31 am
I am soooo invested in this story!! ** claps hands *** Best line ever=" Where there any sites about women getting pregnant by sexy looking ghost?"
Brilliant.
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 05:18 am
This is soooo good! I am truly impressed and entertained. I loved Nip/Tuck and American Horror is my guilty pleasure. The combo is just devine!
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: 13/12/11 05:54 am
Your story is just a twisted as the show. Which is why I love it. I'm really rooting for Michelle and Wilbur to get out. Ben is such slime and so is Christian. That why they should understand each other instead of being rivals.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/11 08:24 pm
THe only person that I like is this is Wilbur, so please protect the baby. Now that Michelle knows the truth about that house, why is she still there? Is she stuck on stupid and glued to dumb? I can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/11 07:30 am
Well durn I definitely didn't see that coming I thought it would have been Julia. Hayden is twisted she was twisted in life and more twisted in death Ben was a fool to get involved with her and on top of that after his wife caught him the first time with her he went back which ended with her getting pregnant with his child.
Nora is twisted too. I wonder why we don't see the doctor, Nora's husband on the show because she killed him in the house.
Thank you for the great update
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 06/12/11 12:43 am
Yes, I noticed that and I was wondering about that as well with Julia not seeing Moira with the blind eye and aging.
Hmmmm is Julia attracted to the maid as well? Interesting very interesting.
I don't know if anyone has watch the previous and most current update but it is getting good....I don't want to spoil it for anyone just in cause they haven't watched it but Ben is getting on my nerves with a passion and so is Violet dumb behind.
Thanke you for the update.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 06/12/11 12:14 am
Oh, why must everyone in this story be stupid? Why would you move into a house and not do any research on previous owners? I feel so bad that Matt died, why couldn't that ho Julia die? That lying tramp wouldn't be missed!!! Thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 05/12/11 06:45 am
Poor Matt. Hayden really gets off on killing. Ben is such a liar and cheat. Hypnotizing Michelle so he can sleep with her is disgusting. Sean and Julia are weak! I'm glad Michelle told them off. This chapter was so fun to read!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/12/11 09:26 pm
I love this story so far please update soon :)
Reviewer: nikki Signed [Report This]Date: 04/12/11 12:21 am
Still trying to understand why Michelle hasn't done a search on the past owners of that house. There are just too many strange occurrences for not to even be curious. I don't want anything to happen to Wilbur because his parents are stupid. Who is this Tate fool and why are they scared of him? They are all dead now so he can't really be that powerful. Michelle frustrates me!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 03/12/11 12:06 am
Your story is a hoot! Love it!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/11 11:46 pm
Wow, Ben sure made his move fast. I am still trying to understand why Michelle is trying to make this farce of marriage work with a man ho? He can't keep it in his pants, Michelle take your son and leave. Please!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/11 07:51 am
Excellent, please continued.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/11 09:01 pm