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Title: Rain Dance

more please

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/10 07:27 pm

Title: Rain Dance

Wow, this is one of your best stories. I was thinking that the things they do for each other straight away is something more than what best friends do.

It’s very touching how much they’ve been through and all they’ve done for each other, most people fall apart at that and relationships break apart, they’re together and that says something.

At first I was quite surprised that she lies to get him there, a bit disappointed actually that she has to be deceitful but on the other hand he knows and still goes, which means she is more than a best friend to him! I reckon they should get together and soon, well written, great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you again for reviewing my story!!

This was one of my fav stories to write. I love these two characters.

I use to watch ATWT when they were friends and of course I wanted more.

I was also contemplation on making her lie but I knew her Paul wouldn't mind :) 

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 06:14 am

Title: Rain Dance

That was great.  I obviously need a male best friend.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! Male besties are the best especially Paul!

Reviewer: Yh Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/09 02:24 pm

Title: Rain Dance

Okay, you have me interested.  Sorry to say that I been stopped watching ATWT a loooonnng time ago.  But I have to say that Roger Howarth is a doing Paul justice.  I LOVE him even though I miss the old Paul.  Plus, I didn't even know he and Bonnie were even friends.  I never see her on the show, well...when I turn there from time to time, I hardly see her.  This story was cute and I can so see that relationship going into a another direction....MORE please.  :P

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I stopped watching the show as well but I adore Roger in the role of paul. He and Bonnie were really close at one time but of course they never followed up. I will totally write another one with these two.

Reviewer: Vi Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 06:01 am

Title: Rain Dance

Do you know how much I want Bonnie to have a man in her life? A man that we see more than two times a year? I have definitely seen the chemistry between Bon-Bon and Paulie so this would work for me. I want Meg and him broken up so bad. Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I loved Bon's and Paul's relationship. I really hated that they didn't continue it.

I can only hope they get a scene in the future. 

 

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: cassion Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/11/08 01:45 am

Title: Rain Dance

“I’m on my way Bonnie.” Because that’s what best friends do. “Please hurry.” - so far I likey!

“You’re drenched." They both realized how strange it was, every time he came over it was raining. - more likey

He wrapped his arms around her and pulled her onto him as he lay back on the sofa. Because that’s what best friends do. - ok you got me going here - lol

He knew Bonnie well enough to know that she didn’t have another nightmare. He also knew he’d been waiting all week for that frantic phone call so he could come to her rescue once again. Because that’s what best friends do. - awww how sweet ws that.. me thinks I need a best friend like Paul.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Hey Zeta! Thanks for reviewing Complicated. I wrote this awhile ago then edited when I decided to post.

I know it's a short one-shot but it's one of my favorite stories that i've written. 

I loved Paul and Bonnie's friendship and of course I always wanted more...:)

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/10/08 06:07 am

Title: Rain Dance

This story was so cute. I really loved it and I wish you would do more of these shorts with Bonnie and Paul maybe even Holden...when can only hope...LOL!!!

Author's Response:

Hey There,

Thanks so much for reviewing!!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

I do plan on writing more for Bonnie...And I will definitely keep Holden in mind!

 

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/08 06:18 pm

Title: Rain Dance

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Maybe!!!:) Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/08 09:22 pm

Title: Rain Dance

Very nice one shot AshAli.  Loved the best friend dynamic between Paul and Bonnie. Great job.

Author's Response:

Hey BlackMamba, Thanks so much for the review. 

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 

They have always been one of my favorite non-couples and I totally enjoyed writing for them.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/09/08 01:11 am

Title: Rain Dance

This was great Ash, I'm so glad you posted this. I love the friendship between the characters, and I may be crazy but I feel like there's a hint of more between them. Which would be nice I think.:)

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing TBG!!!

I really like the friendship between them. I only wished that ATWA stuck with it.

With the old Paul and Bonnie, I always saw a hint of something more but you know daytime...

I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

thanks again. 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/09/08 11:13 pm

Title: Rain Dance

I know this better not be a one-shot, there must be more, b/c its good.



Author's Response:

Thanks LadyLiberty for reviewing!!!

I wrote this as a one shot but I like to write them with open ending...just in case:) 

I adore this couple and hope to write more for them.

I'm so glad you eoyed it. 

Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 11:40 pm

Title: Rain Dance

Nice, friendship that really comes through when times are rough. JV

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing JV.

I adore these two and hope to write more for them.

I loved their friendship. 

Reviewer: JV Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 04:28 pm

Title: Rain Dance

I love paul and bonnie. I remembeq the last paul ryan & the original bonnie had this amazimg chemistry. They could have been the tangeline of their day. But i love roger playing todd and u hooking him up w/ new bonnie.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I always wanted something more between these two.

They had a great best friend relationship in the making but never followed up. 

Thanks again for reading! 

Reviewer: KelleyLi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 08:31 am

Title: Rain Dance

I love paul and bonnie. I remembeq the last paul ryan & the original bonnie had this amazimg chemistry. They could have been the tangeline of their day. But i love roger playing todd and u hooking him up w/ new bonnie.

Author's Response:

Hey KellyLi, Thanks so much for reviewing!!!

I also loved the original Paul and Bonnie as well as the present ones.

I'm also a huge Roger fan and would love for them to write for these two.

Thanks Again. 

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 08:22 am

Title: Rain Dance

Aww as an old ATWT fan I miss Paul & Bonnie's friendship :(... Nice one shot!

Author's Response: Thanks you for you review!!! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I adored these two in the scenes they had together and ATWT should have definitely developed their friendship! Thanks Again!

Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 06:50 am

Title: Rain Dance

Okay I needed this. I always wanted to read a story about these two and it wa great also. I love hinted meaning as to why Paul and Bonnie has been helping each other because they are best friends. Now where I heard that before... :LOL: I know this was an one-shot, but I want more!! Thanks for writing this too.

Author's Response:

:) I'm really happy you enjoyed the story.

Paul and Bonnie are one of my favorite non-couples who should be a couple. I loved both their previous and present portrayers. I love writing the best friend helping each other out:)

I will definitely consider writing a part two.

Thanks so much for you review! 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 05:14 am

Title: Rain Dance

AshAli, can I say wow!!! I really and Truely enjoyed this, the guy who plays pretty boy Paul is one of my favs just because he use to play Todd's character in OLTL and Bonnie is just amazing at faking, I wish I had that effect on men.

God!! Dont tell me it's done, this two need to fall in love and I'm sure other readers would agree with me.

Okay, once I'm done with this review, I'm going to read this story one more time. Dont blame me, your story is refreshing.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I remember years ago when i first saw Paul and Bonnie and I instantly wanted them together.

The thing I like about my one shots is I always leave them open for 'mights'. I Might write a part two.:)

Thanks so much for reviewing and again I'm glad you enjoyed it.!  

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 05:05 am

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