Kevin you and Leah are much too young to thinking about marriage. You are enlisting in the army changing you plan and Leah's plan. I hope that this story has a happy ending.
I totally agree with you. But hey, that's what Kevin wantsReviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/12/11 08:16 am
great start so far I like your use of flashabacks to tell the story
Thank you. I really appreciate it.Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 06:01 pm
Dang, girl. That's beast, hon. Nice job, you got me wantin more. I look forward to your writing. You say you're a better editor than writer, but I don't know. You DEF got me wanting to read more. Good job!
thanks beta.Reviewer: Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 04:21 am
Please tell that Kevin survived and that he comes back home to Leah? I can't wait to read more. You are off to a wonderful beginning so please continue!!
you were the very first reviewer of my story. I appreciate that. I had a burst of creativity this week, so I hope to finish it before December is overReviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/12/11 06:39 am