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Title: Sweet Little Lies

Great chapter, I think this is how falling in love should be, good friends who cannot live without each other.

Thanks!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/12/11 04:52 am

Title: Sweet Little Lies

First question: when exactly did you write all this? Have I just been asleep?

Second question: ....um don't got one.

This is too funny. Love is friends. Love Padma. Love the opening of this chapter. Priceless. I can't believe they are all going to go on this trip just cause he said so. Where did he get these friends and can I have some? (guess that counts as second question)

Oh oh, third question: will there be a show down between EvRen and the ex? Cause that feels like it would be hilarious especially if Padma was anywhere near.

Keep them coming!

Y tambien, me gusta las gotas de castellano!

One more thing. Were you channeling Fleetwood Mac for this title?



Author's Response:

all these questions! i wrote this all between yesterday and today, just struck me so i had to go with it. i might actually update again before the night is over. i'm glad you're enjoying this though. all that Spanish!!!

Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/11 01:54 am

Title: Sweet Little Lies

Awwww that was a cutie moment!!! Can Ceaser find out about sunday morning *eyebrow lift*

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/11 01:23 am

Title: Sweet Little Lies

Really enjoying this story.  Love all the characters and the fun interractions.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/11 01:00 am

Title: Sweet Little Lies

Wow, can't wait to see what happens on the trip

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/11 12:46 am

Title: Trickle

hot damn...i like this hahaha

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 07:15 pm

Title: Trickle

I am really enjoying this new tale; thoroughly entertaining as always!

OMG Evan and Caesar are so perfect for each other!  It's funny how EVERYONE but them can see that:)

I am totally rooting for them, and can't wait to see what happens when they go on vacation; hopefully sparks will really fly while they are away!

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 10:30 am

Title: Trickle

So I'm holding a logical review ransom until I get another update...get with it woman...do you want your review?

Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 06:56 am

Title: Trickle

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 05:56 am

Title: Whipped

They're so cute together even though they aren't together. I love how they genuwinely care for one another. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 03:06 am

Title: Whipped

I love how Caesar is taking care of Evan. Love their relationship! Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 02:01 am

Title: Whipped

Love the story can't wait for the next chapter.  HAPPY HOLIDAY :)

Reviewer: Tracy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/11 12:58 am

Title: That's What Friends are For

you are off to a very nice start, my dear.  characters sound very interesting.

Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/11 09:56 am

Title: We're All Friends Here

This story is soooo super cute so far! I LOVE it. I love your grammar. The way you write is poetic minus the cursing. Be careful with that, too much cursing tends to make the dialogue undearable sometimes. But the phrases are beautiful. When you talked about the intimacy of the sun and her skin because of the open roof of her jeep (paraphrasing of course) that was truely beautiful. There was something else you said that stuck out to me but I can't remember. I just remember liking the way it sounded. Cesear (spelling) is super cute. I love his relationship with Evan. And I adore her name btw! But anyway keep it up girl!!! You'e got a fan in me! Update soon!!!

Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/12/11 07:12 am

Title: That's What Friends are For

lets c where this goes

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/12/11 12:49 am

Title: That's What Friends are For

LOL..this is awesome!

I love the obvious closeness with Evan's family and Ceasar. I can only guess its the same with his family and her as well.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 06:43 pm

Title: That's What Friends are For

Whats this, whats this, whats this??

Intellectual Tit Mouse! (when your being stern a theres got to be three names)

You didn't tell me bout this when I was whinning about my story! Damn your modesty!

So.......

I'm liking the vibe. Erotic and Humorous is good. 

Y después?

Reviewer: puertaobierta Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 05:58 pm

Title: That's What Friends are For

I'm loving this already! Caesar is hot!

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 02:49 pm

Title: We're All Friends Here

Seriously you thought this was bad? You're kidding...right...

I can picture them together and the whole Saturday morning scene playing out. Toss in mom and it was a hilarious exchange. Why oh why is Miss Evan lying to herself? She knows who and what she wants. Silly girl.

Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 02:29 pm

Title: We're All Friends Here

Ceasar is hot!!!  Me likey!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 07:42 am

Title: We're All Friends Here

What dance do you want me to do...The Running...The Reebok...I'll mosh pit dive...so happy right now

Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 06:32 am

Title: We're All Friends Here

Intrigued already. I can't wait until the first chapter is posted.

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 06:27 am

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