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Title: Character Pics

*lovemboth examines the fingernails on her right hand* Ya know, I really started to get an attitude at how this ended but as I read other reviews, I remembered that this is an extension of BN...I hope for your sake.

You killed Buffy and Giles!? Sacrilege!

Kendra and Layla were too funny. The good cop/bad cop vibe was cool. Hope to see these ladies soon.

As usual, GreatO, it was fantastic!



Author's Response: Sorry, it needed to be done for the story. . .plus I was having some anger issues when I wrote that hahaha.  Glad you liked it, these ladies will be in Before Nightrise story - as soon as that gets back off the ground ugh!  Anyways thanks for reading and the great review!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/08 06:24 am

Title: Story

Very nice. Really liked the back and forth with Layla and Kendra. Once again your writing has made her tolerable for me. Layla reminded me a little of Faith from Buffy.  I'm guessing we'll see more of her in Before Nightrise.  And Kendra too maybe?

Great job with this one. Nice addition to the series.



Author's Response: Thank you Blackma, I'm glad I could get you to open up a bit to Layla I am kind of fond of her, I think I feel about her the way you do about Talia.  And yes Faith was hands down my favorite slayer so I was definitely channeling that a bit into how I envision Layla, minus the evil tendencies of course!  Layla will shortly be arriving in Llanview and Kendra may not be too far behind.  Thanks for the review and stars!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 10:10 pm

Title: Prologue

Very exciting start.  Love the Buffy reference and the nod to how being a slayer pretty much screwed her over.

But oooooooohhh...you are so on my list for killing Giles. 

*glare*



Author's Response:

Yeah killed Giles, sorry bout that I was going through somethings. . .

Yeah I really wanted this story to focus a bit on the slayers perspective not only because it comes into play in BN but also because it was a nod to how Buffy became increasingly darker and more cynical during the show.  Thanks for the review and the stars! 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 10:01 pm

Title: Story

Excellent job greatodin, loved the Buffy mentions of course, though I'm sad so many had to die. The banter between Kendra and Layla was very cute, and the backstory was great as well, very well done.  I can't wait to see how this ties into the overall series. Great work all around :)

Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah a lot of people had to die but no worries the Buffy peeps live on in reruns hehehe.  The tie in is coming in the next couple of chapters.  Thanks for the review and stars and reading!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 04:38 am

Title: Prologue

This was a great start, I loved the convo between Giles and Travers. And the Buffy mention was very cool, loved that. :)

Ummm.....did you just kill Giles? *weeps pathetically* :(



Author's Response: I did kill Giles hehehe.  I'm not a Buffy expert but even though it's an extention of Before Nightrise I couldn't write a Kendra fic without trying to stay at least somewhat true to Buffy folklore.  Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 04:03 am

Title: Character Pics

Woo, hoo Kendra fic! Kendra fic!

*Dances around excitedly*

Thank you for this, and thanks for answering the challenge. :)



Author's Response: It was a long time coming I wish I was happier with the outcome but thanks for the support!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 04:00 am

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