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Title: Chapter 16 Author Comments

you doing good job on the story i understand to post something and hope they like it. you doing good job.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 15 Beneath the Surface part II

it going to be instering for all of them twins. his brother has a point will her treat them right or do what their parents did to them. i hope not.

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Date: 15/09/09 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 14 Beneath the surface

wow they going  to be great. they going to have twins but not suprise since they are twins lol. i wonder how jardar going to take the news?

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Date: 15/09/09 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 13 Life and Death

that great she having baby but something tells me that they wanted to keep this baby and not give it up. they love  each other and it going to be hard like the story girl.

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Date: 15/09/09 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

OMG!!! Is she going to be alright. No, daddy don't come for her (her dad's dead right)! Let her live to raise those babies.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 12 Nontraditional

wow jarad he growing on me he comes to help his brother out then he meest the woman of his dreams and then helps her while her dad is sick. that what you call a good man  just like his brother.

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Date: 15/09/09 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 11 Its Magic

wow that some hot hot hot loving lol. there no turing back for these two.  i hope he help her during her family proablms she having now.

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Date: 15/09/09 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 10 Good News

awww that so sweet holding each other arms . they realy like each other cool. i like he watch pretty woman you can tell a man  like a woman if he watch a chick flick with her lol.

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Date: 15/09/09 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 9 The Big Picture

wow you feel the connection btween these two wiitch is great and bad. what if they change there mind what if she wanted to keep the baby is he going to fight to be in the child life so many questions but know they be answer soon enough.

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Date: 15/09/09 04:02 am

Title: Chapter 8 Surprises

it going to be ruff i'm mean the donors falling for each other and here they going to make a baby for two loving people . it good that jarda likes someone she seems to bring out the light in him. i hope the couple get the baby they wanted.

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Date: 15/09/09 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 7 The Meeting

ok can i  tell you how much i like jeffery and saige the love they have with each other and he willing to do any thing for his wife nice. i can't wait to see jailynn face when she see that guy she like is  jeffery brother.

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Date: 15/09/09 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 6 Unexpected

wow who would thought that jared will come home to help his brother out to give him a child and he falls for the sugort mother. very intersting.

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Date: 15/09/09 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 5 The Club

wow this is werid jarred is meeting the woman his brother and wife pick out to be the sugot mother to their child that what you call strange.

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Date: 15/09/09 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 4 Should I or Shoudn't I

wow i hope everything goes well for the couple they get there baby. i can't belive the brother going to help him out but that good he going to do it.

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Date: 15/09/09 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 3 Picking and Choosing

wow that what you called a good husband who wanted ot give his wife the world and she going to have the baby she wanted. but how she going to reacted when the brother going to be the sperm donor?

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Date: 15/09/09 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 2 The Beginning

it so sad they can't have a baby. there people out there who dont' wanted kids and can pop out like fire works but those who will be great mom and dad can't

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Date: 15/09/09 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

nice cast.

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Date: 15/09/09 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

I hope everything turns out ok for both Jailynn and Jarred

Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 06:02 pm

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

Thank you for the update.  I hope everybody comes out okay.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 04:38 pm

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

Welcome Back!!

Yes, your updates have been missed.

I'm glad everyone is alive. I'm still hoping for a good outcome in the end, even if things are really rough right now.

 Thank you for the update. Waiting for more...

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 11:38 am

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

Well, at least Jailynn and Jarred and the twins are still alive...but Jailynn's condition seems to be extremely critical...I didn't like the sound of her brain swelling...but at least she's aware of what's going on around her...she sacrificed herself to save her babies...there's nothing like a mother's love...let's hope she gets to hold her two beautiful little babies in her arms and they are born healthy...poor Jarred...though he's so hurt himself...yet he still wants to be there for Jailynn and their babies...I'm praying for this little family too...the update was short...but we learned so much...there's still hope for them all and hope for a happy ending for all...however slim...can't wait for the next update...glad to see you and this story back...I love this story!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

Please update soon!

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

Thank you for updating.I really missed this story!! I hope Jailynn  is going to  be OK!!If so I hope she realizes she wants her babies with the man she loves.

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 05:52 am

Title: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

It was good - but short.  Why is she calling on her father for help?  Jarred needs to see her and make sure his babies are doing well.

What about these triplets?  I'm sure Jeffrey didn't sleep with anyone or did he.

I hope all works out...after this, I'm sure they will keep their babies.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 05:47 am

Title: Chapter 21 Twist of Fate

WOW!!  Just picked this story back up and Jeffrey has some 'slaining to do.

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Date: 14/09/09 05:39 am

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