Interesting update. Can't wait to see if they survive.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/09 05:13 am
This is a great story. Had my interest from the beginning. Can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. I hope to update this weekend. Reviewer: OCW Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/08/09 10:49 pm
Woah! Nice twist girl!
I cant wait to see what happens next. Im bracing my self for a death or a coma
Gosh Jarred pay attention to the road boy!
Date: 08/08/09 09:13 pm
Thanks for the updates!!
I'm envisioning total chaos, mayhem, and madness with five kids the same age running around as the two Steele brothers and their wives wonder what the hell they've gotten into. So, I'm hoping everyone is alright.
Also, I'm dying to find out what Charlene, the triplets mother, was up to with Jeffrey.
Until next time...
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/08/09 05:05 am
Come on, you really can't just leave it like that. What really happened?
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/09 04:55 am
Oh my stars!!!! They both have serious injuries!!!! This not good, not good at all. Just when things were looking up for these two, this just had to happen. Please this family make it!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 07:19 pm
Cant wait to finish this story, I hope everything work for Jarred and Jailynn.
Reviewer: loveisreading Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 05:43 pm
Ohh nooo. I hope they pull through.
Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 08:45 am
Hmmm, interesting update. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 07:50 am
dramatic much, and then you leave a sistah hanging.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 07:05 am
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, this was TOO SHORT! Please hurry up and update. I'm hoping for the best.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 06:54 am
Oh my gosh!!!! I hope everyone is OK. Thank you so much for updating. I am glad Jared wants to keep the kids so I hope they get to be a family.
Reviewer: PAW Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 05:34 am
Pokerdiva...oh please...this can not be happening...all of their lives are in danger...Jarred...Jailynn...the twins...this is the worst possible scenario...and if Jarred survives and Jailynn and the twins don't...I can't imagine how he would live with himself...just a few moments changed all of their lives in an instant...you've cranked up the volume on this story for sure...I'll be on the look-out for the next update...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 05:19 am
You left us hanging. Will she lose the babies and how about her life.
Well, this is awful.
Author's Response:
Moni
I know things are not looking to good but there is more to come. Please stick with me on this. I appreciate the feedback.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/09 04:45 am
this story just gets better and better. I just have one question, that had me wondering. Why did he say the babies looked like Saige??????????
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/08/09 06:21 am
Dang there seems to be so much going on in all these people's lives. It's so hard to believe that Jeffrey has trilets. Something is surely fishy, or at least so it seems to me.
Reviewer: karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/07/09 12:12 am
Well I've missed a lot...what on earth is going on with Jeffrey.??
Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/07/09 09:12 am
OMG! No you didn't leave us hanging! Hurry up with the next chapter. Pretty please!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. Im working on the next update.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/09 11:55 pm
Glad to see this story back, and this was a deep chapter, but as I was reading it I knew that Charlene's story was as transparent as Saran Wrap, it was too neat and pretty, my 8yr old cousin couid come up with a better story... I love how saige listened to Jeffery and she showed how much she loved him and the babies... btw love the names.
I wonder what the accident is.
Author's Response: Great observation. Wait and see thanks for the feedback. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 10:07 pm
They're such a sweet couple.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/09 07:46 pm
Aw, sookie, sookie now! I can't wait for them to meet at his brother's home.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/09 06:11 pm
Well, at least the child will be blood related. Great start to this story.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/09 06:03 pm
WTF!! That was beyond crazy! He's lucky because I would have been to pissed to even listen to him at first. I would have needed a 24 hour cooling off period.
Let me start praying now that Jailynn, Jarred, and the babies are okay. It has to be bad for Jeffery to have had such a bad reaction to the news.
Author's Response: Love your comments I think most people would have needed 24 hours. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/07/09 06:02 am
OMG!!! No not a cliffhanger. I wonder who has been in an accident. Was it his P.I but then again I don't think Jeffery would have had such a violent reaction to that news or was it Jared and Jailyn.
I still think that the babies are Jeff's and Saige something just doesn't sound right with Charlene's story and like Saige said it sounds like he was targeted.
I am on the edge of my seat I so need another update.
Please! Please! Please! Update again soon.
Author's Response:
Dont worry I am definitely updating asap. I have to give my little one a bath. But my plan is to update tonight.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/09 06:02 am
I know you didn't leave us hanging. Don't tell me something has happened to Jarred's children.
Please don't.
Author's Response:
Dont worry i wont leaving you hanging to long. I really do hate cliffhangers, LOL
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/07/09 05:27 am