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Title: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

Oh no...don't tell me something has happened to either Jailynn or Jarred or both of them...Diva don't do this to me...now I'm afraid to read what happens next...

Author's Response:

attheritz i liked your comments. You are so passionate and not afraid to express yourself. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/09 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

Well Saige is a good one...and obviously she takes her marriage vows to heart...she really loves her husband...a truly remarkable and strong woman...I have nothing against those beautiful babies...like Saige said...they are innocent and they are pawns used in someone's sick game...but Jeffrey IMHO is hardly a 'victim'...stupid...dumb...remarkably bad judgement all come to mind...but victim...not so much...

Sorry for leaving so many comments for this one chapter...but I'm reading along as you post it...

Looking forward to what happens next...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/09 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

Glad to see you back. I have missed this story and the update sure was worth the wait. I am with Saige sounds like some kind of scam was ran on Jeffrey. Whatever it is I am glad Saige is going to be a mother. Look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/09 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

Pokerdiva...if what the woman said is true...then how is it considered 'not cheating' if he had unprotected sex with some stranger after becoming falling down drunk in a cheesy hotel bar...whether he was conscious or not of his actions...HE DID CHEAT...he chose to get sloppy drunk...nobody forced those drinks down his throat...he couldn't hold his liquor...and his own actions led to the consequence of him fathering children outside his marriage with a stranger...if I was Saige...I'd been highly upset...not only did he get that woman pregnant...he could have picked up a sexually transmitted disease and given it to his wife...I'd still get myself tested if I was her...and I personally hate the line...'one thing lead to another' as an explanation like it's supposed to excuse one's actions...Jeffrey's sounding worse and worse as he 'explains' the triplets conception to Saige IMHO...and it makes me even angrier that he's using his guilt as a reason for pushing his wife away...

Looking forward to the next update...for Jeffrey's sake...I hope Saige is more understanding and forgiving than I tend to be...'cause he'd be out on his rear so fast...his head would spin...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/09 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

Jeffrey's all over the place with this wild story...if he doesn't even remember having contact with the woman...then how could he have fathered her children...unless Jeffrey's lying or leaving out a few salient details...his story doesn't make any sense...

Looking forward to the next update...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/09 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

Saige is being really mature about this so far...don't think I'd be able to be so...calm...so Saige has already figured out that the triplets are Jeffrey's...interesting...bet it was a shot to the heart when he confessed that he'd been keeping secrets from her and not being honest with her all these months and would have kept her in the dark had the mother not have died...and what about this mysterious woman who died while giving birth to them...can't wait to read Jeffrey's explanation for this situation...will be looking out for the rest of this chapter...

P.S.  So glad you're back with this story, Diva...this is one of my favorites...

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Date: 22/07/09 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 21 Twist of Fate

Oh that was beautiful and I am happy that Saige decided that they should desolve the contract with Jarred and Jailynn and I was wondering if the babies could also be Saige and Jeffery...just a thought cause Jeff said he has never cheated and that he did not even remember being with the woman.  Could it be that she stole Saige and Jeff's embryo's and was going to contact them to exstort money from them for the babies....Just a thought :D.

Can't wait for the next update and this truly was a twist of fate...indeed.

:0)



Author's Response:

Thundakat

Thanks for the feedback and I love how you think. lol working on the next update.

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Date: 19/06/09 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 21 Twist of Fate

Thank you for updating 2x in a day that was awesome. So glad Jarred wants the kids. As for the triplets I think they will be the miracle Saige needs.Cant wait to see how Jeffery is the father of the kids if he didnt cheat. Look forward to reading more of this awesome story.

Author's Response:

Paw

Thanks for the feedback and I was excited about getting 2 updates in especially since it had been awhile. I m glad you like the story. The next chapter will be quite interesting.

Reviewer: pawoo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 21 Twist of Fate

Saige is amazing!!!...Unbelievable...but still amazing...let me get a little country on you,Pokerdiva...but I'd probably have cussed Jeffrey out from his rooter to his tooter...haha...

Glad she was able to concentrate on those babies and help settle them down before she and Jeffrey have a serious discussion which I'm assuming is coming in the next update...so Jeffrey has stepped out on Saige and had not one, but THREE babies with another woman...who died during childbirth...and you say he DIDN'T cheat...don't tell me this other woman pulled a Margaret Cochran on him (a storyline from OLTL where a former rapist got his comeuppance and was kidnapped and raped by a crazy woman, lol)..I don't know you're going to explain this one, diva...but I can't wait to hear it...lol...

Can Saige forgive Jeffrey...how will he explain himself out of this delicate situation...can their marriage be salvaged...will they get their miracle from an unexpected source...so many questions...can't wait for the next update...love this!!!!



Author's Response:

Attheritz

I love the little country remark. LOL Dont you worry there will be some fireworks. I love the feedback.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 01:36 pm

Title: Chapter 21 Twist of Fate

Oh oh, how did the situation with Jeffrey and the babies occur if he didn't cheat? he expects Saige to accept them after having a funky attitude over the last couple of months???? Wow, I guess this is gonna really test their love. I don't know see how she could be so calm after discovering these babies are Jeffrey's. Great update.

Author's Response:

baha malo

Thanks for commenting. Its amazing what children can make us do. I m working on the next update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 08:40 am

Title: Chapter 21 Twist of Fate

Can I play detective here...and you don't have to answer...could it be that Jeffrey has gone about trying to ararnge an adoption of a baby for Saige on his own...maybe he hasn't been as unaware as I thought previously and has noticed the growing feelings and bonding between Jailynn and Jarred over the past months...maybe he has realized like she has that the surrogacy plan with Jailynn and Jarred was probably not going to be viable anymore...I still feel that he probably has possessiveness issues when it comes to Saige...but he does really love his wife and is willing to do anything to make her happy...even try to be a father to a baby he knows she so desperately wants...could this be the reason for the clandestine hospital visit...glad Saige has decided to fight for her marriage...

I pray for Jarred's sake that with Jailynn's acceptance of his proposal of marriage it means she loves their babies too and wants to be a family with Jarred and their unborn babies...if not...I will be so disappointed in her...I'm still hoping for the best and that everyone gets their piece of happiness...now let me shut my big mouth and close my case...lol...



Author's Response: I will explain more in the next chapter but these babies are Jeffreys. He hasnt been having an affair he truly loves Saige. You will be surprised.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

I knew they were going to want to keep the babies!! However, I didn't expect the end of Saige and Jeffery.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

EEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!   I hope I didn't burst your cyber eardrums, LOL!!!!   But I'm about as happy as a pig in slop right about now...that proposal was simply...beautiful...and so heartfelt...Jarred is ready to COMMIT...and Jailynn said YESSSSS!!!!  I could cry, girl...

Jeffrey's message and text to Saige sounds ominous...wonder what that is all about...guess will see in the next update...and please, please make it soon...I'm Ritz and I'm a Fate of a Surrogate addict I'll happily admit...

TERRIFIC (I'm running out of adjectives here) UPDATE!!!!

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

Nice update.

Now is Jeffery and Saige getting a divorce?

what is wrong with Jeffrey?  Will Jailyn and Jarred want to keep the babies or at least one of them...

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

So glad you updated. I was missing this story.Cant wait to see what papers Saige has. I still hope Jarred and Jailyn keep the babies.

Author's Response: Paw  you will get your answer in the next update. P.S I added more to chapter 20 its important.

Reviewer: paw-- Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/06/09 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

Glad to see this story back, Diva!!!

When you said BIG changes for both couples...you certainly meant it...poor Saige...hate it had to come to this for her and Jeffrey...but I still believe they love each other very much...I think they need marriage counselling before they take this huge step...I still believe their marriage can be saved...how will this latest development affect the surrogacy...hmmm....

Lamaze classes...that's a bit personal don't you think...and certainly not one a person would consider if one truly had no attachment to said babies...interesting...as Jailynn and Jarred continue to bond...giving up the babies will become that much more difficult...and mama's there too...hope and kinda don't hope the surprise sends Jailynn into premature labor...hopefully the fetuses are mature enough to survive at such an early gestational age...but maybe it will serve as a catalyst to knock some sense into both Jarred and Jailynn and help them to see that those babies are theirs and they should be the ones parenting them...I hope all works out for everyone involved...looking forward to the next update soon...I love this story!!!!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Attheritz

I m glad to be back. I havent had alot of time to write. I love your thoughts and make sure you go back and read because I was still updating. I already have my next update.

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Date: 17/06/09 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

Ok that was to short, but I like it any way. I have a feeling old Jeff is cheating on his wife. I also have a bad feeling he is going to get the other woman preggers.

I think Jaylyn and Saige are sisters and her momma is about to faint when she see her at the party.

Just can't get the feeling they are sisters because Jeff said he choose her because she looked like his wife.

TY for the update. 



Author's Response:

Hi dimples

i did add more. I lost the chapter while  updating. I would go back and read the rest its good. Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/06/09 10:36 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Crossroads

Oh nooooo, where is the rest of the story? That wasn't nice to leave us hanging like that. I love this story so far. Please update soon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 07:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ty for the update. I hope you update son because I like this story.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/09 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter!!

The two couplesare certainly at a crossroads as one grows closer while the other seems to be drifting apart. The fate of these babies seem to be changing too.

Eagerly awaiting the next update!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/05/09 02:34 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Crossroads

I honestly feel for everyone involved.  I think the big thing is that these children were created no in a lab.  And Jailynn and Jarred are in this quasey relationship.  So you honestly can't help but slip from time to time. 

Saige can see that this may end badly.  She had such high hopes on this process working in her favor.  I just hope that everyone will be okay after all of this is over.  

 Jeffrey just has seem to deconnect from this whole expercience.  I don't think he really thought this through.  

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/05/09 02:10 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Crossroads

Wow this story is so full of different emotions. I hope everyone deals with all that's going on.

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Date: 25/05/09 05:50 am

Title: Chapter 19 Crossroads

Oh that was so heart-warming their excitment over the babies and them sharing it together then a tear jerker to realize they the would not be keeping the babies...Cry  I like Jake and Saige and all but....yeah this chapter was titled properly we are at a crossroad...Great story update again soon.

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Date: 24/05/09 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Crossroads

YESSSS!!!!  Jailynn's starting to FEEL!!!  And Jarred's just about  there already...they can no more detach herself from those babes than I can live without breathing...

"Just as beautiful as their mama..." says Jarred.

"Did you feel my..." says Jailynn.

Sweet music to my ears!!!!

Okay, I feel really bad for Saige...I really do...she's a very sympathetic character...and a good woman and I truly believe she's going to make a wonderful mother someday...but not to Jailynn and Jarred's babies...I'm sorry...but as I said...they (Saige and Jeffrey) should have really considered getting other donors once they realized the growing bond between Jailynn and Jarred...and especially after finding out about the hows of the twins' conception should have been a huge red flag that maybe this surrogacy idea with Jailynn and Jarred might not work out...and IMHO...it's a bit unfair and selfish  of them to expect J&J to hand over those babies knowing all the complexities to the situation...it's like you're setting yourself up for heartache...and heartbreak...

And all is not well in Saige's own home...I see Jeffrey is still as disinterested in his impending fatherhood as he has been all along...how could this possibly bold well for any child brought into that home...a loving mother, yes...but a totally emotionally distant father...not well I say...

I can't wait for Jailynn and Jarred to listen to THEIR babies heartbeats for the very first time and learn the sex of their precious bundles of joy...whether they know it or not (and I'm praying they are beginning to...)...they are irrevocably bound to those babies and each other...it's their destiny...it's their fate...

Loving this story...can't wait for more....

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/09 11:25 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Crossroads

wow what a messed up situation. and wth is Jeffrey doing. He needs to be bopped on the head.

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Date: 24/05/09 11:18 pm

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