I do love Jailynn and Jarred together, but I had a feeling that she was going to get pregnet n4 the IVF took place, I have a feeling the drama is just beginning.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/04/09 01:29 am
Great update, I so love this story. The characters are very well though out. I see sadness coming to this story. I hope Jailynn and Jared keep there baby. They love each other. It seems no matter what someone is going to get hurt. Cant wait to read more
Reviewer: Paw00 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 01:18 am
Methinks Jailynn and Jarreth doth protest too much...sounds like they're trying to convince themselves that they won't develop an emotional bond to this child...but, how could they not...it is "their" baby...plans have a way of changing when love enters the picture...
Wow, so she's actually pregnant...the natural way, too...hmmm...a very interesting development indeed...
Jarred really is a keeper...how can their hearts not be involved in this when their love keeps growing by leaps and bounds every day...not talking about the baby is not going to make the yearning go away...I think Saige is right...feelings are going to complicate the situation far more than anyone is letting on...
Can't wait for the next update...it's getting really, really good...
Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/04/09 10:02 pm
yep i can't see them giving up this baby.
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/04/09 09:40 pm
Reviewer: attheritz
Title: Chapter 12 Nontraditional
Pokerdiva...I'm loving this story...still don't see how the surrogacy is going to be even remotely possible now...too many feelings are coming into play...how in heaven's name will Jailynn and Jarred truly be able to give up their baby...especially one that was conceived the first time they were together and with Jailynn giving her virginity to Jarred, the man she loves...if in fact she is pregnant...I foresee heartbreak for one couple...hope it's not for J and J...
Jarred is such a sweetheart...and Jackie's a force to be reckoned with...already putting him on notice that mama don't play that...glad Jarred is an honorable man and stepped up to the plate for his woman...
Looking forward to the next update...
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I agree with the above comments. With so many feelings involved, if she become's pregnant, will they be able to give their baby away. I am waiting anxiously for the next update.
Sigh...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/04/09 09:55 pm
I'm loving Jarred so much right now!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/09 12:12 am
Pokerdiva...I'm loving this story...still don't see how the surrogacy is going to be even remotely possible now...too many feelings are coming into play...how in heaven's name will Jailynn and Jarred truly be able to give up their baby...especially one that was conceived the first time they were together and with Jailynn giving her virginity to Jarred, the man she loves...if in fact she is pregnant...I foresee heartbreak for one couple...hope it's not for J and J...
Jarred is such a sweetheart...and Jackie's a force to be reckoned with...already putting him on notice that mama don't play that...glad Jarred is an honorable man and stepped up to the plate for his woman...
Looking forward to the next update...
Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/04/09 05:11 am
I totally agree with paw00! :)
Reviewer: meka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/04/09 12:00 am
Oh I just love this story. I check all the time for updates.Keep them coming this is a wonderful read. Thank you for the update
Reviewer: paw00 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/09 09:26 pm
Great update! So loving this story!
Reviewer: meka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/09 05:35 pm
Awesome update. How are the going to be able to give up there baby. I see saddness ahead for everyone. Loving this story
Reviewer: Paw00 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/09 07:12 am
Oh No you didn't just stop right when it was getting HOT, that is not right.... but I knew that it was going to happen between Jailynn and Jarred.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/09 06:20 am
Whoa...have these two really thought out actually going through with this surrogacy...especially as it appears that they are getting really close and the development of deep emotional ties to each other becomes more intrinsic and pronounced...I realize they are doing quite a noble thing for Saige and Jeffery but I fear what this all will mean for all of them when Jailynn and Jarred can finally admit what I can clearly see is happening right now...they are falling in love with each other...can they really go through giving up a child (though it will be technically produced artificially via invitro)...the child will still be a part of them...and no doubt they will probably start to bond with that shared child instinctively and subconsciously as they fall deeper and say what if they do go through with it and hand the child over to Jeffery and Saige...what if they (J & J) ever got married and later on decided to have kids of their own...how do they explain that to their children and to the child they gave up...I personally think that Jeffery and Saige should have looked elsewhere for donors once they realized that Jailynn and Jarred were starting to develop feelings for one another (do they know that yet?)...so many what ifs...so many things to ponder...
Love the story and can't wait for future updates...
Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/04/09 08:20 pm
Awesome update. those two are getting close how are the going to give up there baby. Hmmm
Reviewer: paw00 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/04/09 07:46 am
I really don't see Jailynn and Jarred giving up their child. I see them falling in love and wanting to raise any child they create together, as a family.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 04/04/09 06:22 am
hmm they might not invitro....I still say I don't know how this arrangement is going to work out with Jailynn's and Jared's feelings for each are growing. And it seems the Jeffrey is just using Jarred as a means to an end and doesn't really give two figs about him. I hope that's not true.
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/04/09 03:42 am
Thanks for the update the story is moving along quiet nicely. I wonder will they continue on with the fertility drugs and IVF or go all natural. I wonder if there is going to be a problem with Jailynn getting pregnant by Jarred then handing the baby or babies over....hmmm quiet interesting quiet interesting indeed can't wait for the next update to see what happens. Great writing....more plz.
Thanks
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 03/04/09 01:32 pm
Awww I wanted more, but i am greedy. i enjoyed the update
Reviewer: Paw00 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/04/09 06:46 am
I love this story. I have a feeling there is going to be a lot of heart ache but still a wonderful read. Cant wait to read more
Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/03/09 01:34 am
I’m digging Jarred and Jailynn although I must admit I thought Jarred was Jeffrey and that he lied to Jailynn when he said he was single. All this time I’m thinking ‘Jeffrey’ met Jailynn, knew who she was, and would expectations of ‘enjoying’ her as a surrogate. Now that I’m straight one thing, I’m not understanding how all this surrogate business is going to work.
It’s quite obvious that Jarred and Jailynn have chemistry. And if they start a relationship, it will totally complicate matters. Will Jeffrey impregnate Jailynn or will Jarred? If its Jeffrey’s swimmers, will she be inseminated or will they try the old fashioned way? (Makes for an interesting discussion between the four of them, lol) If Jeffrey’s swimmers are the problem, then I would think Jarred and Jailynn would want to keep ‘their’ baby, Saige would be devastated but she’d have to accept it.
Oh man, what a tangled web! I’ve gotta see how you work this. J Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/03/09 01:55 am
ahhh why so short? (pouts)
Author's Response:
Im not done. I have to cook dinner, I will finish after dinner.
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/03/09 12:11 am
I like the way this story is going. Please update soon
Reviewer: PAW Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/09 03:40 am
I know you didn't leave us hanging like this. Off to work..you did this on purpose. LOL
Nice update. What will she think? Aren't they twins. Lord Lordie Lord.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/09 02:19 am
I'm really not seeing how this surrogate business is going to work. Jared and Jailyn are going to start things and if they have a baby I'm pretty sure they're going to get attached and want to keep it...nope not seeing how this is going to end positively at all.
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/03/09 09:00 pm
OMG!!! I love it and the cliffhanger was mean very mean. Please update again soon.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 23/03/09 08:44 pm