WOW what a perfect ending to a great night for them. I can't wiat for them to actually come face to face once the full intent of the meetings they are going to have come to light.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 28/12/08 04:23 am
This is very interesting and I can already see the complications this relationship will cause. There are few grammatical errors that need to be fixed (watch where you put quotation marks), but that didn't stop me from enjoying the story. Keep it coming!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/08 04:05 am
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 05:50 pm
Yay!!! You're back with this story!!! I'm so enjoying this. I definitely sense a love connection between the two unknowing surrogates. My, my, things are starting to get interesting and I daresay getting a bit complicated. Can't wait for Jailynn and Jarred to realize that they are to be the surrogates for his brother and his wife. How are their growing feelings and their undeniable chemical reaction to one another going to affect the surrogacy? Will they be able to go through with it? A thousand and one questions swirling around in my head. You've got me hooked, lined, and sinkered on this story. Hurry up with the next update (jk...well, not really...take it as compliment to your literary skills...a captive audience in me you've got)...love it!!! Ritz
Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 04:15 pm
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 03:32 pm
Great update...so they meet at a club...I hope that they don;t have a one night stand and she ends up pregnant before they really meet and she ens up pregnant. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/08 04:47 am
I thought that she worked at one of their law firms? Also why didn't he have his brither stay at his home? Great story looking forward to reading more. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/08 04:43 am
I so can't wait to see what happens next. I am so intrigued that they met in a club.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/08 04:27 pm
Needs to be longer. Other than that no complaints. Waiting to see how this last scene plays out.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feed back. Im still working on this chapter.
Date: 23/10/08 05:51 am
Doesn't she work for the company? I can see some sparks flying. Thanks
Author's Response:
Divsionred
Yes she works for the company and I will address that in a future chapter. pokerdiva01
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/08 04:11 am
So the twin brither and Jailynn will donate their eggs and sperm for their baby. Can't wait to read how all of this turns out. Thanks
Author's Response: Im glad you want to stick around and see how this turns out. Pokerdiva01
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 04:09 am
My heart goes out to any couple that wants to have children and can't. Thanks
Author's Response:
My heart goes out to them as well. pokerdiva01
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/08 04:05 am
THIS IS SO WEIRD. DOES JEFFREY WANT JARRED TO HAVE A CHILD WITH THE SURROGATE?
Author's Response:
Dear Anonymous
First the reason Jeffrey asked his brother to be the sperm donor is because this would give jeff and his wife a biological connection to the child. Jailynn resembles Saige and because of this they want to use her egg because Jarred is Jeff's identical twin. Let me just say as the story continues it will make sense. I hope you continue to read and I appreciate the feedback.
pokerdiva01
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 03:10 am
okay I am so intrigued. I can't wait for all of them to meet face to face. They all seem to have the best of intentions right now.
Author's Response: Thank you letitia for your feedback Im glad you are intrigued. pokerdiva01
Date: 22/10/08 02:42 am
Wow, this is heavy stuff. Very emotional story, but I'm enjoying it so far. Hope you update again soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. pokerdiva01
[Report This]Date: 21/10/08 06:40 pm
Oh wow very interesting.....im liking this story....keep posting i need more....seriously i want more and soon....i cant wait for the next update...i need chapter 3 like tomorrow...please please please....
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/10/08 01:26 am
Very intense. Interested to see how this plays out. Good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you BlackMamba for your feedback. pokerdiva01
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/08 10:45 pm
Sad! Nice beginning
Author's Response:
hopieland
Thank you for your feedback. pokerdiva01
Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/10/08 09:50 pm
Good Start. There was a lot of good raw, true emotions in the first chapter. you have my attention. Can't wait to see where you go next.. Again.. Nice start!
Author's Response:
zeta
Thank you for your feedback. I have so many ideas. pokerdiva01
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/08 07:55 pm
Hmmm.... curious. I want to see more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for being curious. I just completed chapter 2. I appreciate the feedback. pokerdiva01.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/10/08 06:28 pm
Pokerdiva..The premise for your stoty sounds very interesting. I look forward to reading your work.
bty - Welcome to The Chamber Chica! 
Author's Response:
Thank you, Im excited about beginning this journey. I appreciate the feed back. and thanks for the Welcome.
pokerdiva01
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/08 05:36 pm