That was wonderful poem. Will there be a chapter 2?
Author's Response:
Hey There,
Thanks for the Review!
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
There might be a chapter two as I love writing for these two characters!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/09 06:50 am
Great coupling!! And it could be the start of a very good story, the way it's being written. Leaves room for potential, well done!
I've always thought these two would make a great couple, great to see it written.
Author's Response:
I loved Nessa and was really sad to see her go. But I remember in the first few episodes they were always flirting with each other. This is my follow up:)
Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/09 08:29 am
Nice Job. Kudos to you chica. I really enjoyed your song fic. Very well done.
I opened my mouth, for I was about to speak his name. He opened his mouth for he was about to reclaim. - **faint**
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the review!!!
Again I loved these two together even though they weren't official together.
I love writing in this format and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
They would have rocked together *sigh*
Thanks again:)
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/08 06:03 am
I like your poem. So realistic with her avoiding him by looking in her purse for absolutely nothing! LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review lovemboth!!!
I really enjoyed writing this poem fic and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
I've also looked in my purse for nothing to buy some time to avoid eye contact. LOL
Thanks again!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/08 12:47 pm
That was really good AshAli! I'm so not good when it comes to the rhyming and you did it effortlessly! The poem really captured a sense of unspoken adoration and I loved that it was from her pov. Great job! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks again idj!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I've always enjoyed writing poem and I had a lot of fun writing this one because I loved these two together. The were my favorite 'couple' on the show.
Thanks again for the kickass banner. I can't stop staring at it. :)
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/08 06:45 am
This was great Ashi, I loved it. That last line was so cute, it's nice to have a bit of Danny back again. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews TGB!!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
I totally enjoyed writing it. I wish tptb did as well.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/08 03:38 am
Loved it. So sweet. You always have the best endings to your one shots. Love that last line:
Our relationship was underestimated and I thought no One ever truly wins. Then Danny spoke again. “So Nessa Holt I guess this is where Chapter Two begins.”
So romantic *sigh* Loved it.
Author's Response:
Aww, Thanks for the review!!!
The last lines are always the ones I write first, then I work around it.
I so enjoy writing poems and a poem fic was so much fun to do!
I'm glad you liked the quote. I felt it was a great 'beginnings' line. :)
Thanks again!
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/10/08 09:46 pm
awe that was cute....
2thumbs up ash....
Author's Response:
Hey Cma, Thank you so much for reviewing my story!!!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
I think poems fics are a idea and i really enjoyed writing this one!
Thanks Again!
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/10/08 06:04 pm