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Title: Chapter 1

To Short!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry it just one shot deal.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/13 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hawt!!!



Author's Response:

Glad that you enjoy it. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/12 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

OH LAWDY WWE! That was on FIYAH!! I laughed when I read long, thick penis. I don't know but it brought a huge grin to my face. I almost susbsituted but didn't ;-) Damn Evangeline! girl was definitely not getting any good loving having a dream like that on a long flight. I feel your pain :D It was a great read wwe!



Author's Response:

Glad that you like it and girl when I read that part too I had to get a cold drink my dam self lol. thank you for the review put a smile on my face need it that today.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/10/11 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please more, make it a story



Author's Response:

At this time not going to make this more then a one shot deal but maybe down the line I'll might do it then. Thank you for review.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/11 04:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hi,WWEfanforlife, I really liked this story wish it was longer, I would like to know What in the world is going on. Who is this man and what does he want. You should write more,  THanks

Author's Response: Glad you like it. As for writting more  of these don't know that going to happen but who knows. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 1

Girl, why are you not writing more!  This is DA BOMB!  I LOVED how you made it so mysterious!

I wanted the mystery man to be John.  I can deal with Todd or even my baby Batista lol.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!  THE CHAMBER NEEDS IT!!

Chel

 



Author's Response: You just wanted to be all three husy lol. I"m glad that you  like it and thank you for leaving a review. As for writting more mmmmmmmmm I might not for sure. Agian thanks for the review.

Reviewer: miquerida Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 05:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1

WWEFanForLife what are you doing woman you need to write more. I haven't been a fan of OLTL in years but that would have sucked me back in if I had read it three years ago. So I can review you! That was hot!!!

Author's Response: lol girl you are a hot mess lol. But glad you like it jovan was my fav on oltl. Thanks for the review it very nice you left one.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/10 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was pretty good, is it Todd?

Author's Response: maybe maybe not lol. thank you for reading it put a smile on my face today.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 05:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this that very nice of you. I dont' know if i write something it very hard to do not as skill like other writers on the site.

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It didn't look like you were struggling to me. I personally think you are much better than you think are. I certainly enjoyed your writing style. Just keep on writing, keep honing your craft, soon your skills and confidence level in those skills will grow. It's like exercising - the more you do it, the easier it is to do it and the stronger you become.

Thanks again for blessing me/us with your talent.



Author's Response: you going to make me cry stop that lol. but thank you for the comment i try to see if i can come up with something.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You did it again, girl. You brought the heat AND the suspense. I truly enjoy your writing, Wwwefanforlife. I hope you post more stories...soon, please. :)

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this that very nice of you. I dont' know if i write something it very hard to do not as skill like other writers on the site.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/07/09 12:15 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I loved it even though I'm a die hard tangie fan. Could you please write about Tangie?

Author's Response: If i ever write agian  i try to do a tangie one girl if not sorry thanks for the review put smile on my face.

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/04/09 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

WoW!!! Fiyah! I love dream sequences...I get so inspired by them...lol!

I hate hate hate that OLTL broke them up...for gNAT...ugh! This one brings it!



Author's Response: Glad that they inspired you lol sorry it took me so long  to respond to your review.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

LMAO...a dream!!! :-) that was great!

Author's Response: glad that you enjoy it. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/09 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 1

can we get more?

 



Author's Response: glad you like it don't know if there will be more. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: stormyb28 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/01/09 01:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great one shot wwefan. Very entertaining and HOT.  Loved it. Great job!



Author's Response: thank you so much for review girl glad you like it.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/08 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was really good, I love that I was left wondering if everything was a dream, just like Evangline. This was sexy and cute, great job!



Author's Response: glad that you like it girl and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/08 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great one shot Trina!! I loved it

 



Author's Response: Thanks rhon glad you enjoy it.

Reviewer: rhondanicole18 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/10/08 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Well damn .. that was pretty HOT! damnI really enjoyed the his visit..

My only problem is that you msrked the story completed.. Say it isn't so.. I want more an I want more now  scenic   Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: Yeah that the end of it unless someone has a idea for another chapter. Thanks for the review zeta it means alot.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/08 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

You already know that I love this story. I hope you finish it!!

Author's Response:

I know girl and thanks for leaving a review agian.

Reviewer: Minx! Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/08 11:10 pm

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