Thanks for a short but great update! Hope to read more of this story in the near future. It is off to a great start. I am enjoying your writing style and how you are setting up everything. Please update soon. Thanx!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments! I am glad you are enjoying my writing style! I am hoping to have some more free time in the near future to update this story more frequently!
[Report This]Date: 28/05/09 08:53 am
Great beginning...are you planning to update your story anytime in the near future.... I have been waiting and waiting. 
Author's Response: I am so sorry...I have been so swamped with real life I have not had the time to write...I have not forgotten about this story and will update as soon as I can! I sincerely and honestly do appreciate that you have missed the story!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/05/09 05:02 am
Love the storylines. It's so intriguing, looking to read more. Good job! Hate the photos!!! My vision is Paula Patton & Colin Farrell.
Author's Response:
Glad you like the story line...sorry you hate the photos...don't know too much about Paula Patton and I know of Colin Farrell never seen his work though!
Hopefully this won't prevent you from enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/03/09 11:01 pm
I LUV these women........sexy & powerful.
Thanks for this update.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story! I also liked that Martha's associates are all independent, loyal and powerful in their own right! Thanks for reading! Reviewer: Lykeroses Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/09 07:13 am
hmmm I would have cut both Tyler and Alisha off completely. You can't have people in your circle whom you can't trust.
Author's Response: LOL...glad you enjoyed the story! I think the only person Travis can trust is his other brother Danny...
Date: 01/03/09 04:03 am
Wow, this is getting good
Author's Response: Thanks for responding...glad you are enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/09 02:19 am
Wonderful...and funny!
I like what Martha is doing to Travis...he needs to be humbled.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! We will see how long Martha continues to have the upper hand! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/02/09 11:12 pm
Love this story, and Love Martha & Travis.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you are enjoyin it! :)
Date: 21/02/09 10:19 pm
Wow
Author's Response: Thanks Gale...I am glad you like teh story! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 21/02/09 04:11 am
I really think I am not going to like Travis at all in this fic...lol!
If he thinks Martha is going just roll over and let him take over he has a rude awakening coming!!
I cannot wait to read more...this is a very good story and you can't help but be drawn in to each character!!
You done good Red..love it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Nene!
I can always count on you to support my writing!! I am glad you are enjoying the story! I don't think you will like Travis much in this story either!
Thank you so much for all of the compliments!
Reviewer: neneburge Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/02/09 02:41 am
Dum da dum.........
Travis is such as ass.
When are Travis & Martha gonna have some more interaction.........love their sparring.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it!! Travis is just warming up!
It will be chapter 7 before Martha and Travis interact with each other again!
Thanks for reading and comenting!
Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/09 11:49 pm
I should have commented earlier, but better late than never.
OOOOHHHHHHHH
I'm loving this story(totally love smart, strong women); Martha is my She-ro (lol).
I hope you update often.
Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/09 06:15 pm
Wow, update soon
Author's Response: Thaks so much for reading! I am glad you are enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/09 05:55 am
I so love this story. Thank you for the anticipation with Travis.
I do hope he mellows some for her before she dominates him. At least in their private relationship. He is ruthless as hell.
Up Date soon
Ro
Author's Response:
I am glad you like the story!!
Travis is definitely ruthless and is just warming up!! :D
I will try and update this soon...I do have a few more chapters that are already done!
Reviewer: Romantic81 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/09 05:01 am
Awesome as usual Red..I cannot wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01/02/09 11:43 pm
Maybe riding you until I collapse from exhaustion would help me better.
Ha! That was kinda of awesome. I loved that scene. :) This was a really good update, I already like the back and for between Martha and Travis. I can't wait for her to take him down a notch or two, she seems like she's up for the job. Great chapter, I'm so glad I got a chance to read finally. Can't wait for the next!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 03:53 pm
Great story Red..I cannot wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nene! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 24/01/09 08:31 pm
GREAT UPDATE CANT' WAIT TO READ MORE.
Reviewer: EAGLES#1FAN Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/09 04:07 am
He is an arrogant jerk, and I can't wait until she knows him down a peg or two.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 11/01/09 01:29 am
Just read , and it is very good.
I like the way it is going and working out between the two. Loved Martha...when she told him about what she would do with the remainder of 23 hr and 50 mins. Travis is a beast. He needs to begin to be nice and consider of his men. I'm sure they will turn on him as he has abused their women. Basically he is raping them. What a Bastard.
Nice story...can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/01/09 08:07 pm
Great chapter redbird. Thanks for updating this story. I'm really enjoying it.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/12/08 05:30 am
LOVE the update!! Can't wait for the two of them to come face to face.
Reviewer: EAGLES#1FAN Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 03:17 pm
Great update! I loved the backstory on the familes and the descriptions of the bordello, very nice. LOL at this..
"Horse back riding?" Fiona asked confused.
"Uhm yeah, I noticed the riding crop and the riding trousers and chaps," Travis said frowning himself.
So funny. This was excellent, I'm so glad you updated this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter, which will come soon? Maybe? Possibly?
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 06:10 am
Great Start! I'm new to Benjelle, but I love a good mob story and a good story. Since you have both, count me in! 
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