Please, please, please continue. I honestly don't think this story should only be 7 chapters long but that is just me.

I am requesting an update of the story.  Thanks

Please update. This is very good. I also love your other stories. I love how Cooper is determine to get what he wants. Great story!

I WAITING, I WAITING, I WAITING FOR AN UPDATE.  I CHECK THE BOARD EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU HAVE UPDATE THIS STORY.  PLEASE UPDATE.  PLEASE FORGIVE THE CAP.  JUST LOVE YOU WORK.  QUESTION:  DID THEY MAKE LOVE BEFORE THE CAR SCENE? 

Coop definetly has Veronica's number,. he had her all hot and bothered, and its only a matter of time b4 they HIT IT....I am glad that Coop didn't take Wyatt's childish bet.

Monica needs to slow her role, I know she has a crush on Coop, but she is still fast IMO.. I know she'll be PO'd that Coop is into her mother.

Wyatt is a riot, a Ho, but a riot.

Great update! I really enjoyed the moments between Coop and his family, especially the conversation with his Dad. It was a nice moment of insight of what makes this character tick. I feel like there's a lot of resentment and anger in Coop's actions, and a bit of overcompensating because of it. It seemed like he was almost acting out during his conversation with Wyatt (and with is father too,come to think of it), that interaction made him feel more in control, more confident in his life after being talked down to by his father.

This was excellent, can't wait to read more!

First off..I am so excited that it is going to be longer than you originally planned. There is a lot to tell btwn this unorthodox couple and so much to explore btwn age, race, family, society.

I am loving Coops new found confidence. I had to laugh when he said she is mine that she doesn't know it yet. I was like OK! Can't wait for the next chapter.

No worries, GreatO. I really like their connection via their shared love of photography. Surely Veronica must suspect that Coop has a crush on her. Most teenage boys don't want to hang out with an older woman they aren't related to unless their crushing big time. It may be flattering to her if she does suspect it.

I will NOT drink the kool-aid.

Veronica and Cooper circa 2006...the both of you were flirting all over each other!!! LOL. I mean, DAMN! They're blazing the seduction trail. FOR REAL. "She" got him interested in photography? "He" is sending her pics of him on vacay with his friends? Mmmmhmmm, ya'll ain't slick. *side-eyes the May/December couple*

My point is that this was good...good INSIGHT into how flirty these two were even back in the day. 

They were meditative times, sometimes they hardly even spoke to each other, each wafting into their own photographic world but every now and again one would catch the other's eye or they would look at each others shots and in those moments they seemed to connect in a way that was beyond words.  

Again, these two ain't foolin' me LOL Seriously. I love how you paint this; I really hear the character's talking...them *cough* rationalizing their 'friendship'...mmmhmm 

These two are crackling! HOT! HOT! HOT! I love it. 

He wanted to tell her because he liked being around her, he liked being with someone that he could talk to for hours without getting bored.  He wanted to say that he could be the one to make her happy again and that if she gave him a chance he could take some of her pain away.

This is...NICE. Coop is mature for his age; but then he's had his share of emotional turmoil with his dad and the divorce and things. I love these two together; want them to make hot sweaty dashboard love ASAP. Overall, this was good insight into them, as I've stated before. Well done; you get starruhs. On to the next one!

Loved it! What goes through Veronica's mind to make her finally give in to Coop? Hurry up with the next installment!

Author's Response: Two updates for ya lovemboth!  I hope you like, they've been done but I didn't know how I felt but I just decided to post them and see how it goes!  Veronica still has a ways to go to get to that point but they do have a deeper bond that I hope is shown in part iii.

Aweome update, I'm loving this story more and more. Really liked that Coop had to take Christina, put a damper on his seduction plan just a bit. Not too much though, LOL.

I'm really interested in finding out more about Veronica, I'm curious as to what would attract her to Coop, besides the obvious. He seems so young, despite his own view of himself, and I'm wondering what makes that appeal to her, especially because of the way she treated him in this chapter, ruffling his hair, implying that he wasn't an adult. I'm sure all this comes in the next chapters though, so I'll just wait semi-patiently for the next update. :)

I got chills with Coop standing so close to Veronica and her finally becoming AWARE of him. Lord have mercy *fans self* Seriously...this is going to be so good when they hook up! And I forgot to mention, I love Coop's nickname: Scooter. I had a cousin named Scooter growing up; real name Jermaine. LOLOL

Author's Response: Thanks Madame Z that's awesome to hear!  I love how confident Cooper is and how unsure Veronica is, it's a fun game to see play out.  I've known a couple of Scooters and they were always these big boys, I just think it's hilarious the idea of some tall, strong guy that still has the nickname he got when he was 5!  Christina calls him that just to piss him off and it comes from me calling my brother Boomer which was his childhood nickname, he hates it but it's hilarious to me!