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Title: Chapter Two

Can I just say that I looove the mayor and his wife? Boy oh boy they were wicked! 

Anytime Lo and Eva have a convo--about anything---you feel all the anger/desire/pain/passion/humor/hunger/love/hate those two emit.  Insane!

Now we have Lainey and Ric as well as Sam and Zander---everyone has a Rapier sharp tongue!  I loves it!



Author's Response: Hey Fearless. thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  Ah, so you're a Truman fan? Excellent because they shall return.  And Eva and Lo have a seriously intense relationship going on.  It shall only get worse.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Fearless Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/08 01:11 am

Title: Chapter Two

Wow so van has another sister? didn't see that coming. Who wanted to kill van sis? I think it someone they all know who did it.  I love the hate love thing btween van and loz is sexy ass hell. thanks for the updated.



Author's Response: Hey wwefan! Yes, there is another sister.  And the mystery of Layla's death will be revealed eventually.  Until then lots of freaky naughty.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 06:15 pm

Title: Chapter Two

Love that Lo isn't letting Evangeline pull all the strings. He's still got his cajones--no worries there! LOL

I just love the dynamic of two headstrong and determined people together. Neither one wants to give up the control. I have a feeling Lo has something up his sleeve.

So Lainey, Layla and Evangeline are sisters. Interesting. How come everyone only knows about Layla?

Zander and Sam teaming up to get Talia. I like Zander; Sam's a different story. LOL Not sure if I want her to get over on Talia.



Author's Response:

Hey lovemboth. Thanks so much for reading.  And no, Lo isn't letting Eva run  him this time. Well...to some extent.  They're running and being run by each other I should say.  And yes, they will but heads and uglies all in one breath. Isn't it fun?  They are sisters, but each one has different names and different lives.  More on that front to some.  Glad you like Zander. He's one of my fav GH castoffs.  And as for Sam...hmmm...well you'll see. :-)

Thanks again for reading and thanks for reviewing.  I always look forward to reading them.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 04:28 pm

Title: Chapter Two

WOW THIS FREAKING STORY IS AWESOME I CANT WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE!!!!!!!!!FOREVER A FAN........

Author's Response: Hey hershey. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it and so glad you like!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 12:15 pm

Title: Chapter Two

"....whiff of golden snatch?"  Damn, Lorenzo.

 These two together are so intense.



Author's Response:

He's such a potty mouth.  Sexy asshole.

Thanks so much for reading Robin.  And thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 06:57 am

Title: The Cast

Hey Black, Im slowinf working my way through your stories. WOW I love this series. Van and Lo are the SHIZNIT!!!. I had to stop reading Posession at work. lol..

Great first chapters, really pulls you in. So sad about Layla. Oh well back to Van and Lo. My two favorite lines are in this chapter. Everyone already mentioned them so you know of what I speak.

 

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey PB. Thanks so much for reading this one.  This is a really fun series for me because Van is so different. And yes, Possession is not for the workplace. Best read, alone in the dark.  Thanks so much for reading and your review. Will update soon.

Reviewer: PBE06 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/11/08 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter One

 I don't watch soaps any longer don't know the background on half of these characters but because it was a story written by you I decided to give it a chance and as usual was not disappointed.   

Evangeline is bad ass in this story and whatever is going on with or went on with Lorenzo seems mighty interesting.  I def want to know how she is going to get him out of this and what actually is going on.                          



Author's Response: Hey peanutsmom. Thanks for reading.  I'm like you, I don't watch soaps anymore. Most of these characters are either dead on their shows or written out.  As for Van and Lo it's a contiuation of the first story Possession.  Lots of history between those two now.  Thanks so much for giving it a chance.  I appreciate the review !

Reviewer: peanutsmom Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/11/08 04:41 pm

Title: Chapter One

My girl is back in town! That's right folks, BadAss, GrownAss Evangeline Williamson is in the house YaY!    bird I was so excited to see this damn story show up. I was doing M'Freaking back flips. And rightfully so!.  eqyptian

The story did not disappoint. The story picked up with the same pace and the same intensity. The freaking cast selection had voices in my head. Starting the story off killing Layla.. Cut throat and priceless all in one. Damn what a way to grab someone's attention.

Sam and Zander.. wtf..What is he doing there? What does he know about Sam? What does he want with Sam? Who in the hell does he work for? Is he a good guy, or a bad guy..?  So many questions. I need a reveal and I need it now! please

Nice touch having Rick tell Evangeline about Layla and I think Talia actually got choked up over Layla being dead or she was nervous about what Evangeline would say or do once she found out.  I see Alexis still has a hard on for Evangeline and Lorenzo.

And Speaking of hard on's. Lorenzo's reaction to Evangeline voice.. Freaking loved it. Priceless.

"Layla Vickers." It was a new voice. He thought she was a hallucination at first-she looked the same-wearing that expensive black suit, tailored so perfectly to her body it almost looked like a second skin. She flipped her hair, sending the scent of her perfume in his direction. His mouth twisted in anger.

Obviously the bitch was real.

Lorenzo looked at the agent. "Is the ass raping still on the table?"  lmao

 

But the part I really love was Evangeline and Lorenzo conversation regarding Layla.

Lorenzo's jaw tightened. "Your sister."

"Yeah," Evangeline said.

"I'm sorry."

"Don't be," Evangeline said. "I hated that fucking bitch and she felt the same way about me." She leaned back. "But she was still family. I need to know who did this and why."    shameonu  Its not nice to fool with Evangeline Williamson. thats all I'm saying!

AWESOME!  Can't wait until the next update. Kudos!  takecare



Author's Response: Hey zeta! So glad you're on board for the sequel. How long did that take huh?  So yes, finally here.  Had to start off with a who done it the way I did in the last one.  Only this one's a little--um---darker? And Ric was the bearer of the news to Evangeline.  I think he's the only one who has the guts to do it honestly.  And yep--Lorenzo and Van are back in play.  Little hostility there  to say the lease.  Thanks so much for reading and hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 04:12 pm

Title: The Cast

Love the cast.. Many of my favorites are returning..and some new one's.. YaY! Can't wait to see this story.

Author's Response: Thanks zeta. So glad you like it. All my favs too.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 04:01 pm

Title: The Cast

Okay, so I'm invested. LOL.

Layla's body. First off, ewwww. Secondly, *flashes of the Wire* Seriously chica, I saw Brandon (Ginger) during that intro. Pretty shitty what they did to her. And I'm reminded, I read another Lo/Vangie story on here...but didn't finish it; maybe I should so I have more backstory.

Lucky getting blowed in the car...ahh, Lucky = sexy, but oafish. LOL. Sam and Zander; wow, so she hates cops or pegged him for a gangsta? Either way throwing the ice cream scoop...priceless. 

And Lorenzo, probably the ultimate reason I'm like 'here' with this story. The man oozes power and sex and danger. Can't wait for another update; in the meantime, I reckon I'll give the other a looksee. ;) And of course you get starszzzzzz ;)



Author's Response:

Hey MZ.  Thanks for reading.  Yeah it was grusome right.  Start off with a bang I have to say. And this take up where the other left off a little bit. So lots of backstory for what's happening here. Mainly with the Van character. Lucky is very much a "dude" in this one.  He'll wake up soon I think.  Sam pretty much saw a gun and wasn't having it.  And yes, Lorenzo alone can make a girl swooon. Love writing him.  Thanks for the review. Greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter One

Okay, what the hell happened to Layla? Damn, she got the shit kicked out of her and more, who wanted that chick dead that bad? Or was it about her at all, maybe this is tied back to her sister.

Speaking of, hello kick ass Vange, I've missed you! Loved the scene in the jail with Lo and his kick ass sexy beard. Very nice and very hot.

So Lucky's screwing Talia and will once agian have his ass handed to him I'm sure. That guy has horrible taste in females.

Except for Sam of course, who is AWESOME.  Loved the scooper and her first impression of ZANDER F*CKING HARRIS! Thank you thank you thank you! That is all.

Loved the first chapter, thank you so much for postin! I can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Hey TBG! Hmmm...poor Layla right? Someone was very determined.  And could it be about Van?? Very big possiblity.  And I love kick ass Evangeline.  I channel my frustrations at what they did to this character though this fic. And yes, the beard is back.  He shall be stroking it among a few other things (tee hee)

Lucky is...misguided.  Tis all I can say.  Sam's going through a change. :-) The good kind I think. And hell yes, Zander is in the house. He lives dammit! He lives.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Very much appreciated.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 05:53 am

Title: The Cast

Okay, I love the cast, but where in the holy hell did you get that awesome pic of Chad Brannon? *faints*

Author's Response: Ah, can't reveal my secrets.  :-)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 03:37 am

Title: Chapter One

Great beginning. I love Eva and Lo! And I love how the characters are written. I also love reading anything Ric:)

Looking forward to reading the rest. 



Author's Response: Hey AshAli! thanks for reading and so glad you like the story.  I really like writing this pair this way. Both of them are pretty dangerous so together they're something else.  And I love Ric too.  Lots, and lots of Ric in this fic.  Thanks so much for reading and for the review.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: AshAli Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 02:09 am

Title: The Cast

Great Cast!! If only this were a real soap

So glad to see Dara in this. I loved her character!!

Off to read. 



Author's Response: Thanks AshAli.  And yes, Dara is back.  She just popped up out of nowhere, so I had to keep her. :-)

Reviewer: AshAli Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 02:02 am

Title: Chapter One

OH MY I LOVE IT.  IT IS GOING TO BE AWESOME.KEEP IT COMING..FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hey hershey! So glad you're enjoying it so far. More to come and hope you enjoy! Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/11/08 01:42 am

Title: The Cast

OH MY GOSH I ACTUALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE SEQUEL TO POSSESION.  I AM SOOO FREAKING HAPPY RIGT NOW I CANT STOP SMILING!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL. So glad you're excited.  I am too, I'm happy to be writing this again. Thanks so much hersehy.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 11:22 pm

Title: Chapter One

Great start Black, I have been waiting for the sequel to Possession, Vange and Lorenzo are still Hot together, I still hate Sahid for coming between my Lusam, but I know she'll get what she deserves.

Sam and Zander humm... seems like they are off to an interesting start.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey Shina. Thanks for reading.  Sorry it took so long but it's here thank goodness.  So glad you like the Lorenzo/Van action. And all I'll say about Sahid and Sam is there is more to come....

Thanks so much for reading and the review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 07:41 pm

Title: Chapter One

I'm ROFL at Sam hitting the cop with the ice cream scoop and Lo asking if the ass raping was still on the table.

So glad to see kicking-ass-not-taking-names-Evangeline and sexy-ass-Lo back. I don't think Port Charles will be able to handle these two in the same vicinity again. I can't wait!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey lovemboth! So glad you're enjoying the story. You picked two of my fav moments.  I was smiling when I wrote that.  And I love writing the kick ass Van and sexy ass Lo.  And Port Charles is going to have to deal with it in a major way. 

Thanks so much for reading and the review.

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 07:29 pm

Title: The Cast

yay another evellorenzo story i love these two together im suprised theres not more fics about them i can't wait to read

Author's Response: Hey ellenangel. Hope you enjoyed!

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 07:24 pm

Title: Chapter One

Yeah!!!!! They are back!!!

Author's Response: Hey Robin! Yes they are. Hope you like :-)

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 04:45 pm

Title: The Cast

It's up!!!! So excited!

Author's Response:

Hey bella. Finally up. Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: bellamafia08 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 04:44 pm

Title: Chapter One

Wow who wanted to kill layla in such a cruel way? So van is sexy lorenzo lawyer it going to be good. I can't wait to the the next chapter. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey wwefan. Pretty bad right??? The mystery begins. So glad you like it so far.  Thanks so much for reading and for the review. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 03:24 pm

Title: Chapter One

Sorry I didn't read Possession cause this chapter has definitely given me pause. One because I miss Eva so much I decided to take a peak.

Two she is free of the 'goodie-goodie' role most that ship for her put her in. Also Cause I got a raging hard-on for Lorenzo and the two of them being bad ass - well let's just say *fanning* myself. But even better is my girl Alexius is on the scene and Rick Lansing - oooo-lala - also gots to love Sam working at Coldstone. That bitch is the Natalie Vega of GH, serve her up right. Also the edgy talk from Evangeline is something I might be able to get used too.

Damn can't say it again. Evangeline and Lorenzo - finally a pairing with her thats new and decandantly sublime! Gotta have more.



Author's Response:

Hey Minx! Thanks for reading. Yeah, this is def a different version of the character--spawned from one of those "what if" moments. As in, what if they hadn't changed her character from the take no prisoners chick who defended Mitch Laurence when she first came on the scene. Take it to another level, add a bit of R rating and presto chango, there she is.  It's fun to play with her I have to say.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 03:22 pm

Title: The Cast

Well hot dam love the cast girl and love the first part of this amazing story I know this one is going to be good. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Thanks wwefan!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter One

Whoo hoo! The sparks coming from Eva and Lo were enough to ignite my monitor!  Lo still cracks me up!  Talia and Lucky--daammn!  Should I feel guilty for not being sad about Layla?  LOL 

Can't wait for this mystery to unravel!  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Hey Fearless! Thanks so much for reading and reveiwing.  So glad you're like it so far. And as for Layla..eh..well it was a sad way to go.

Reviewer: Fearlessboom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 12:29 pm

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