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Title: Chapter Six

From the bottom up:

-Who in the freaknik just blew their brains out!?!?!?! Don't leave us hanging! Cruel, cruel woman you are. ;)

-Lorenzo and Vange, *sighs* DAMN! They are just so sexy together. That poor roast, all neglected and growing cold because they'd rather make the whoopie on the dining table than eat....I don't blame them. The chemistry you have established between these two is volatile and electric and I get tingly when I come upon a scene with them. Very delicious this time.

Tracey and Ric, Okay, Tracey Quartermaine, back in the day, was always, always a favorite. So I was very pleased to see her and to witness the back and forth with she and Ric.

-Jax and Dara, *woah* he's already laid claim to that ass, hasn't he? Methinks he will indeed make the sweet boink. I'm both envious and fearful of her nethers. LOL. Jax...very sexy here; love his cocky, love his confidence.

-Scott and Lorenzo, love seeing Lorenzo in action, taking charge *cough* on the business front 'coz we know he takes charge in le bedroom, or backseat of a limo, or on a desk in an office or in an elevator or public bathroom or an alley or ... well you get my picture. Dude exudes the sexy, exudes power and I'm just in love with him. Ted King rocks my socks.

Ric and Lainey, must this cast be so attractive? must these characters be so in sync sexually? I mean, I feel like were I to be placed in a room with all these m.f.ers, somehow, an orgy of gigantic proportions would ensue. LOL. If not, I know I'd most likely be 'affected' by their sexy, their chemistry with one another. Just pure naughty, this entire cast. LOL. And I love it.

We're getting closer to finding out who did what and damn you again for that cliffhanger! Arrrgghhhh! LOL Great update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Madame Z. Big cliffhanger will be answered soon.  I always liked Tracey and I love writing Jerry.  So glad you like him too.  And Ted King is just walking sex to me. I love him.  Lots of pretty people doing sexy things.  :)

Thanks so much for rthe review!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/09 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter Six

I love the cameos by Tracie and Lulu because I wasn't expecting them at all, very nice touch. Poor Ric is damn frustrated isn't he? LOL, I'm wondering what happened to Laniey though, that'll be pretty intresting to find out. Lo and Vange were hot as ever and I'm loving him and Scotty and the banter they've got going. Dara and Jerry was a nice surprise as well, I have no doubt Jerry's ideas about her will pan out. At least I hope they do.

Nice cliffhanger there, I just have a bad feeling it's A.J. I don't like it when A.J. dies. *shakes head*



Author's Response: Hey token. Happy you like the cameos. Poor Ric is frustrated. It's been a while.  Lainey's thing will be revealed in time.  So glad you like the the goings on :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/09 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter Six

DAMN THIS UPDATEWAS WELL WOTH THE WAIT.  SHIT LORENZO IS JUST FREAKING HOTT AND STEAMY AND HIM AND VANGE ARE EXPLOSIVE.  RIC AN LAINEY I M LOVING IT SOOO MUCH AND I EVEN LIKE THE THOUGHT OF DARA AND CREEPY JERRY WHOO I NEED SOME ICE AFTER LORENZO AND VANGE LOVE SCENE.. OH AND I WONDER WHO WS SHOT IN THE ALL WAS IT DVID.  WOW I JUST LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH, FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hey hershey. Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/09 08:02 am

Title: Chapter Six

I say it agian loz and van was hot hot hot. what kind of plan does loz and van ? Ric and laniely are so cute together i first thought he was going to take her there and back. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey wwefan. Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/09 07:21 am

Title: Chapter Six

Wait, what was that at the end! Another mystery already!!! I don't care what anyone says, Ric is so damn sexy. He push me up against anything, as long as he takes care of business.

Author's Response: Hey Sweet Pea. I'm so with you, I love Ric too :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/09 03:20 am

Title: Chapter Six

What a cliffhanger... I wonder who got shot.

Vange/Lorenzo are just too HOT for words, this push and pull between them is so exciting.

Love Ric/Lainey,I can't wait for them to "finish" what they started... btw love how you made Lulu just as annoying as she is on the show.

Jerry and Dara, that will be interesting to see unfold.

Excellent update, can't wait for the next.



Author's Response: Hey Shina. So glad you liked the update.  And happy you're liking Ric/Lainey. And yes, Lulu grates on my nerves too.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/09 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter Six

i always liked lorenzo on gh, he just needed a little chocolate to make me love him!

Author's Response: Love Lorenzo. :) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/09 01:05 pm

Title: Chapter Five

Loved this update.

Zander...is he a bit of a psychopath? 'Coz m.f. just straight up asked Sam if she was a whore. That shit was so funny to me. LOL. I love their dynamic.....they are 'sizzling' together. I remember the actor; he was good. Those were the true heydays of GH, I tell ya.

Lorenzo and Vangeline slay me with their awesome sexcapades. I love his cool, cool, come hither and let me wear that out demeanor. I love that Vangie is his equal and knows how to handle him just right.

Faith, I recall from years ago...she was a mobster herself, no? Bitch is bad; love her, but obviously she has a problem with that wool over her eyes; she LIKES it there...knows Spencer is Superfreak 2009 and is boinking the ladies down at the titty bar, prosititutes on the street, secretaries, various constituents, and hell, probably even Gabriella. LOL. He's a manwhore; Faith wake up and realize and kick his chiseled chin to the curb!

Love Lainey and Vange together. God, that Layla was a real bitch---her own sisters couldn't even stand her.

Love Talia and Ric together. Love how the plots of story are merging even as they are told side by side. It's a mystery and like I was somewhat sure who killed Layla during last update, I'm back to square one now.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for David. "My sex slave...she wanted me to call her Lay-lay 'coz it sounded Polynesian." LMAO. David just...I know dude is grieving (or is he, hmmm?) but he's so fucking hilarious to me. Anyhoo, thanks for bringing him into the fold.

Ohhhh Jerry...why must you be so sexy, love? I mean really. And your sharp comebacks:  "Lovely thought, but I honestly wouldn’t know what to do with two dicks in one bed." I am slain with this. Dead to the world. LOL.

Great update; the story, she progresses! More half-naked Zander and freakycircussex Lorenzo please. :) Great job.



Author's Response:

Madame Z, you make me smile :)

Zander is...a mystery isn't he.  What's going on with him will tie back to Port Charles. But I love sexy/crazy.  And writing him with Sam is fun.  I was such a big Zander lover back in the day, you have no idea. I think his death is when I truly stopped liking GH.

The Lo and Eva sexcapades.  *sigh* I lvoe writing this man.  Too much. I'm trying to get him out and about in Port Charles but he really, really just wants to sex Evangeline. Maybe next chapter... Evangeline loves that he's an ass. If he was nice she's kick him to the curb.

Faith was a mobster's wife.  He died and she took over. I love putting that persona to a politician's wife. She's still ruthless. And there's a lot more to her and Spencer than we've seen so far. 

Yes, Layla was a bitch *whistles*

Merging plots, everything coming together.  It is a whodunit.  I hope you like the reveal :)

Jerry is sexy isn't he? A  bit crazy too *looks at Zander* I think I'm sensing a pattern.  And yes, the story is moving.  More sexy bad men on the way!

Thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/09 04:26 am

Title: Chapter Five

I so love bad ass Evangeline and Lorenzo! These two are so combustible when they're together.

Okay, the burritos comment was wrong on sooo many levels and I laughed my ass off! I would have had to kick Faith's ass for that slap. Psycho twit!

Yay, David's in town! Mystic tan--you're killing me! He adds such insanity to the mix. Glad you decided to include him.

Loved the update!



Author's Response:

Hey lovemboth! Thanks for reading and so glad you're feeling Eva and Lorenzo. Yes, they're pretty good together, I have to agree.

Ah, Faith is so NOT PC.  Horrible woman. Horrible *snickers*

You know I couldn't resist adding David. I tried but it didn't work.  But I'm glad he's here too. :-) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 05:42 pm

Title: Chapter Five

I loved this chapter. Ric has my heart! He is very slick, but has Vange's trust. Loved when he called Talia a cunt, priceless moment.

Love that drama that is Lo and Vange, will these two just admit love already!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Sweet Pea. Ric has my heart too.  I've always loved him and he's fun to write.  Glad you're feeling Lo and Van too :) Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 06:33 am

Title: Chapter Five

OMg when van finds out who killed the sis and why she going to hand him his balls to him. Loz and van keep playing the games and loving every mintue of it.  So zander is feeling sam itnersting love this story girl thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey wwefan! So glad you liked the update.  And yes, the game playing continues. They do enjoy the back and forth. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 06:29 am

Title: Chapter Five

DAMN ALCAZAR IS SO FREAKING SEXY WHOO.  SPENCER IS A SNEAKY SON A BITCH AND HIS SLUTTY SEEMLY RACIST WIFE.  LOVE VANGE AND LAINEY BANTER BETWEEN EACH OTHER.  I LOVE THIS STORY KEEP IT COMING!!!!!

Author's Response: Hey hershy! Yes, Lorenzo is a bit too sexy for words.  And Spencer and Faith are both a piece of work.  So glad you like the sister bonding. Thanks so mcuh for reading!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 02:09 am

Title: Chapter Five

Man if this were a soap opera, it would be #1, this story is keeping me on my toes... loving Jerry Jacks being devious, and I have a feeling that I'm going to like Sam/Zander.



Author's Response:

Hey Shina. Thanks so much for the compliment. I'd be over the moon if this were a soap. So glad you're loving Jerry. I've always had a soft spot for him.  Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 09:01 pm

Title: Chapter Five

I really like the push and pull between Evangeline and Lo, the way she enjoys him and all his assholish tendencies. Something tells me these two will eventually realize how well they fit together. Because they really, really do.:)

I still think Vange has something up her sleeve however. I don't trust her...

I liked Lainey in this, her matter of fact reaction to her sister's death. And her Slickback comment was genius, loved that too.:)

Jerry is a man after my own heart, along with Ric of course. Both of them had fantastic, snarky scenes, it was awesome. But I'm still Zander's girl all the way, the stuff between him and Sam was fantastic and I want more. Pizza. Heh. Sexy as hell, that man.

Loved the update Black, but I need more. Update soon? *she begs.*



Author's Response:

Push and Pull. Yes :)  She does enjoy his assholish tendecies. She thinks they're sexy and he loves trying to get to her. And yes they're a perfect fit.  And no one should ever trust Evangeline.

Glad you like Lainey. And who doesn't love some Jerry and Ric? I know I do.  And yes, the Zander sexy-fest continues. Pizza indeed.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 08:23 pm

Title: Chapter Five

OK, OK.....I'm intrigued. I love how your story is coming together. I can't wait to see where you take this. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Hey Superstar! So glad you like the story.  Thanks so much for the review :)

Reviewer: Superstar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 04:41 am

Title: Chapter Five

Great update.. very, very funny. I laugh thoughout the whole read - first .. David is back - "Probably a screamer." - LOL

Zander - yep - still saying wtf is up w/Zander - you have me on this one?

Just call me Slickback." - Just all kinds of wrong..

freaking loving Spencer & Jerry banter.. Never knew thoes two could be so funny, but damit you sold it and I love it.. good stuff..

Ric. boyfiend is more then protective. His interaction w/Talia makes me raise my eyebrow at both of them.. You know how men like to piss on their tree, and Lorenzo is back in town.. It makes me wonder..

Time will tell - Good Update!



Author's Response:

Hey zeta. With David come the laughs! And Zander is a bit of a mystery isn't he? :-)  Spencer and Jerry are really fun together. Got to get those two back in a room soon. And Ric is def very protective of Evangeline (and also Lainey as you're see).  And no, he's not happy about Lorenzo being back.  They'll meet soon, I promise.

Thanks so much for the review. You rock!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 03:39 am

Title: Chapter Four

Ric and Lainey are hella interesting. It seems as if Ric is attracted to Lainey, as it seems as if there was some past interaction or attraction on someones part. However, I wonder. Time will tell.

This story, there is more under the surface of this story then what we are seeing. Evangeline lost a bit of control in my opinion to Lorenzo. She was soft and pink and in her postiion that could be very dangerous. Great Update. Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/09 05:30 pm

Title: Chapter Four

i don't watch GH but if Lorenzo was as gansta as this I know I would have been hooked. 

Van is laying in on him and keeping him wanting more and I am caught up in the mystery of everyone else.



Author's Response: Hey peanutsmom.  He was damn close.  LOL thanks so much for reading and the review.

Reviewer: peanutsmom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/08 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter Four

Jesus!

LOL

*phew!*

Lord have mercy. Lorenzo....aaaaaahhhhhhh achee kachee!

That was *gulp* delicious. Thank you. Ummm... yeah. LOL.

David Vickers is funny, even on a recorded message. "He's SHORT. And...not tall!" I LOLed off that one. Poor thang. Layla really had him whipped didn't she?

Love how you tell the tale; little vignettes, these characters, those characters, the groupings all which connect and fit and will ultimately piece this puzzle together. I love also how within each of those we get a little bit of the characters; not just names and images but attributes and well, characteristics of each. 

So Lainey and Ric had a lil' sumthin, sumthin going on, eh? Can't wait to see how that will transpire in the telling. Spencer is still a snake, lacivious and evil as ever; slithery bastid. And Jax...hmmm...what's your deal, man? I'ma thinking you might be the hired-gun in all of this. hehehe Lorenzo is such a smartass. "My dad gave me this watch...no really, it's expensive that's the type sentimental value I put on my shit". LOL.  Love how this is progressing; loving these characters as they remind me of the times I used to watch them and love them. Thanks Black :)



Author's Response:

Mmmm, Lorenzo. *sigh* What can I say. He's inspiring. :-)

I love writing David. I tried not to put him in this story and it didn't happen. *sigh* I should just put him in the freaking cast list already.

Glad you like the arraigement. I think you have Token to thank for that bit. She's the queen of short scenes. I am just her pupil. 

Lainey and Ric had a little almost something. Unrequited. Simmering. I love writing Spencer. Good times all around.  And Jerry is a hired gun.  You are correct. And a bit...off. But in a hot, sexy brit way.

Thanks so much for reading Madame Z. It's much appreciated.

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 05:14 am

Title: Chapter Four

Wow that was a HOT chapter, Vange and Lorenzo, in the back ofthe limo was SMOKIN', its going to be fun to see them battle for control and which one will " Surrender"

Ric and Lainey seem promising... and AJ is holding on to some dangerous secrets.



Author's Response: Hey Shina. Glad you liked it! thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 01:50 am

Title: Chapter Four

Jerry Jacks is walking sex. *grins* They went bad. Heh.

Loved the update, especially Lorenzo getting his groove back. Car sex is hot, but limo sex is even hotter, somethin Evangeline knows, or at least she does now. I don't believe that the only reason she's brought him back is for the sexing, though it is hot. There has to be more to it then that with her I think.

Anxious to know more about Laniey and Ric is love as always. And why am I so titlated by the A.J. angle, I love that you're bringing him back into this, probably because I love A.J. so damn much. Awesome update Black, even without *sniff* Zander. *grins* Can't wait for the next one. :)



Author's Response:

I lurve Jerry. :-)

Lorenzo definitely has something back. Angry, sexy, beared sex.  And Evangeline always has some angle. But this time he knows it.  More Lainey and Ric on the way. She's um...well, she's been through some thing.  And yes, AJ has snuck into this story.  *sigh* another cast pic to add.  Zander shall return..

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/08 04:26 am

Title: Chapter Four

Lainey & Rick, let's go there, shall we? Please? I want more.

This had me dying! That little hobbit looking mother fucker. He’s SHORT! And…not tall. Call me back goddammit! I can't wait for David to get to town.

Evangeline & Lorenzo: hot, hot, and more hot! That limo scene was smoking. These two are such hard asses but touching in their own unique way. Both of them celibate during their time apart; saving all that pent up sexual frustration for each other. Evangeline likes it when he takes control in certain situations. The daytime ball buster gets tired of being in control all the time. So glad these two are back. 



Author's Response:

Hi Lovemboth. More Lainey Ric coming right up :-)

David's coming. I tried to keep away but I can't. And so glad you're feeling Lorenzo and Evangeline. I'm having fun writing htem. 

Thanks so much for reading and the review. It's much appreciated!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/08 01:44 am

Title: Chapter Four

King Lo went to work like he was Big Daddy Kane, didn't he? Dayum!!!  Those two made that limo blaze!  Thank you and please give us more!

Author's Response: Hey fearless. thanks for reading! More on the way :-)

Reviewer: Fearlessboom Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter Four

HOT DAMN! I am truly enjoying this story and pairing. Lorenzo and Evangeline is one sexy/dangerous couple. And this is coming from a big time Jovan fan. LOL  

Thanks for the steamy update.    



Author's Response:

Hey Kay. Thanks so much for reading and for the review. I'm glad you like the story.  From this Tangie to a Jovan ;)  What can I say, It's Lorenzo. 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Kay Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter Four

DAMN THIS WAS AN AWESOME UPDATE.  MAN LORENZO AND VANGE ARE SMOKING.. RIC AND LAINEY ARE SIMMERING, AND I JUST KNOW WHERE THERS SMOKE THERES FIRE.  WOW DO I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!FOREVER A FAN.....

Author's Response: Hey hershey. Thanks so much for reading. Smoking and simmering. I love that. :-)

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 06:25 am

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