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Title: Chapter Four

So ric and lainey like each other that so cute lol. Dam loz know how to get what he wanteds lol. Who was jerry talking too and is it the person who killed layla? so glad that you updated love this story thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey wwefan. Thanks for reading! So glad you're liking the story :-)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 05:04 am

Title: Chapter Four

I am a wet puddle of mush.

Author's Response: Ha. Excellent. :-)

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 01:32 am

Title: Chapter Three

WoW!!!!!cant wait for the nent chapter

this story is sooo grungy,.....I like 

Awsome cast

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/08 04:47 pm

Title: Chapter One

WOW!!! in the words of Martin " Dis be da bomb" ......LOL

 im about to finish these 2 chapter in about 20mins.....hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/08 03:59 pm

Title: The Cast

This cast is HOOOOT!!!!!!

Now if only the writers, producer & casting directors would get hip to some of these Messege Board, Fanfiction or what ever they want to call them , they all are better then the crap the have on tv.

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/08 06:57 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Still love the Evangeline/Ric relationship and banter.. it hasn't missed a beat. Alexis best listen to Spencer.. I have a feeling he isn't playing games... again.. what is up w/Zander.. Great Update!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 07:56 am

Title: Chapter Two

Forgot to mention Lainey  - so didnt see that one coming.. nice touch!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 07:53 am

Title: Chapter Two

So thoes are the Truman ... LOL.. great intro
Lorenzo/Evangeline/stripped searched - funny shit.. LOL and what in the hell is up w/Zander ?? Great update!

 

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 07:52 am

Title: Chapter Three

it's getting hot please update soon

Author's Response:

Thanks ellenangel.  Will update soon!

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/08 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Lorenzo is sex on a stick and I want to lick him. *breathes deeply*

So this was good. Real good. And I'm glad that Lo's back in town and shaking things up, can't wait for him to get out of that cell. Methinks Ric was right about Vange, she wants him. And who the hell can blame her.

Spencer is just *shakes head* Coke whores? In the limo. can't get enough of his crazy ass, love it.

But I think I'm already shipping Zander and Sam. I'm just intrigued, and not just because I'm in love with Zander (I am) or that you make me root for Sam in this fic (you did). Their dynamic intrigues me and I want to know what the hell is going on with them. And how it ties back to what's happing in Port Charles.

Nice little taste Black, but I need more. Of Lo's sexy beard in particular. :)



Author's Response:

Hey Token. Thanks for reading. Ah Lo's beard. It's my muse now I think. Mmm...sexy beard.

He'll be getting out of the cell with a quickness. And you're right about Van not fooling anyone. I mean really, how convincing would she be? 

I love writing Spencer. Can you tell?  So you're on the Zander/Sam ship eh? Nice. They're fun. They'll get funner.  You wait and see. Will update soon. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/08 05:09 am

Title: Chapter Three

"Ginger-headed cyborg"?  King Lo is the verbal slayer!  Mayor Truman is pulling up the rear, though!  Too funny!   Thank you for the sa-weeet update!

Author's Response: Hey Fearless! Thanks so much for reading. So glad you like :-)

Reviewer: Fearlessboom Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/08 01:11 am

Title: Chapter Three

A very intense chapter... is all I have to say.

Vange better be careful messing with Lorenzo, b/c IMO she maybe underestimating him.

I wonder if Spencer had something to do with Layla's murder.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey Shina.  Intense yes. Good word.  And Lorenzo is a little...angry at the moment. 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Hey Black!!

Long time no see.. :)

I am enjoying your story as always..esp the return of Lorenzo.

Keep it coming.



Author's Response:

Hey Sonny! I missed you :-( 

Thank you so much for reading the story and I'm glad you like it.  Hope I catch you online again sometime soon!

Reviewer: Mercy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Wow when loz threat he does it in the hot sexy way. the strip search to dam funny ok how she was looking at his dick and the comments he was making lol. some kill layla in a very bad way but who? I loving this story girl and thanks for the updated.



Author's Response: Hey wwefan! Thanks so much for the review! So happy you like it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter Two

Yes, I'm an idiot. Missed this update. LOL.

Now I get Zander and Sam. And I see Vangie and Lorenzo already had a groping session, eh? MMmm, yummy. Okay, I think I'm caught up now ;) Starruhs!



Author's Response: Thanks Madame Z.  :-)

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 06:33 pm

Title: Chapter Three

In the words of Dave Chappelle as "Rick James": you were cold as ice! Lorenzo Alcazar! Cold-blooooded

Talia - you and Lorenzo are like oil and water; mainly because you're a bitch and I generally don't like you. So glad she did what he told her ass to do: get on the horn and get me Evangeline, hasta pronto! LOL

Lucky - when you're not getting s*cked off by lizard lips, you are actually a pretty astute detective...or something; with your sexy ass. Like how he deduced her death was personal; flashes of "Brandon" laying all prostrate and mutilated on the hood of a car. *shivers* 

Layla - were you cheating on David? WHY? David (or the actor who portrays him) has a Dexter-like vibe about him...maybe moreso in terms of looks and of course humor. 

Ric - little man, stop drinking Vangie's booze! Interesting...he's 'always' worried about her. Have they made whoopie in the past? Vange will use her womanly wiles to ensnare Lorenzo into...leaving town? Borderline fictitious psychos are sexy. Mmmmm :) Can't blame Vange there.

Alexis - How I love thee. LOL. Really, I've always loved this character. But it gives me a great amount of 'pause' as to how she'd ever lower herself to the like of V.D. Sonny C.??? I mean, WHY did she go there? *cries* Truman is the perfect corrupt politican...slimey bastid. Feigning concern for his cesspool of a city. Get outta here with that mess, slick! LOL

Zander - ummm...is Zander crazy/sexy? 'Coz that's what I'm picking up on here. Must go back to last chapter and read. He likes gun-kink, don't he? Freaky m.f. Yeah, I've got to re-read the last bit to see why he's protecting her/holding her hostage. :)

Spencer - Beelzebub. Satan. Lucifer. Pimp. Nasty. Nasty. Nasty. I can only imagine the smells of in that space. *shivers* Ugh. LOL. Everyone in this town is corrupt or has benefitted somehow from the corruption of govt. with organized crimes and whatnot. Everyone's tainted, but to what level? what degree? What the hell did he do to Layla? Slimy, blood-sucking bastard. I seriously don't like this snake----though I'm sure I'm not supposed to. LOL.

Lorenzo/Vange - Jail-Cell Petting & Groping Seminar at 1:00. LOLOLOL With special guest speaker: Lorenzo "No Holds Barred" Alcazar.  Vangie should watch out before he uses her for demonstration purposes. LOL. Stil, very hot...I can't wait until these two get together and do the damn thing! Mmmmm. Delish.

Summary - Weird comment set-up, I know, but wanted to address each bit piece by piece. Great progression with the story; you've given more clues into Layla's murder; piqued our interests some more; basically added to the list of suspects making it harder to narrow down. LOL. And you've granted us the promise of 'the naughty' at least with one pair: L & V (and I don't mean Louis Voiutton). Thanks for the update :) 



Author's Response:

Hey Madame Z. So many characters right? I keep looking at the cast list asking myself why the hell I did that. But I'm greedy. I want them ALL.

It's funny, cause I think of Talia as my blank slate. I've written her good and bad. Bad in this fic. But in a cool way I think.  But she's not about to mess with Evangeline's man. Even though she wanted to. Who wouldn't want to.

I love David. I lurve him.  I told myself I wouldn't use him in this story because I always use him in my OLTL fics but I can't help myself. He's gonna show up. Get ready.

Ric and Evangeline are very close...but no whoopie.  I can't do it. I like him too much and it would muddle all my Lo/Van plans.  So no, no past sex.  Just really good friends. (who would be hot together).

I love Alexis too.  But I've never forgiven her for screwing Stumpy.  NEVER.  I shall throw it in her face in every fic I put her in. 

Spencer/Satan. Yesssss he is.  And yes, everyone's got their hands in the cookie jar.  Honestly, I always thought that's the way it would be with all those mobsters running around.  They never got caught which is just far fetched. You know the city council's having dinner at Sonny's house on the regular.

You won't have to wait long for Lorenzo and Vange. They're not the most patient pair. And once they start....

Thanks for the awesome review.  You as always, are awesome. :-)

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter Three

DAMN LORENZO COMES OFF SEXY AS HELL IN THIS STORY. WHOO. LUCKY IS SOOO STUPID, NOT A SMART COP AT ALL. DAMN ALEXIS BETTER WATCH HERSELF AROUND SPENCER.  I LOVE THIS STORY.  GLAD TO SEE IT UPDATED.  PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING.. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hey Hershey! Thanks so much for reading. Lorenzo is sexy isn't he? Poor Lucky is trying. But he's blinded by the sex I think.  So happy you liked the update. Will keep it coming I promise. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 04:25 pm

Title: Chapter Three

Yeah, I like that kind of threatening Lorenzo. I think Evangeline does too.

Spencer Truman--your ass is always up to no good. Is he David's brother in this story?

Hurry up and use Sam then kill her, okay? LOL

Talia, I think you now see one of Lorenzo's big appeals to Evangeline! LOL

Bring David to town--pretty please?



Author's Response:

Hey lovemboth. Yes, he's on the warpath. And yes, she thinks it's hot.  I can tell you in that moment she hated those jail cell bars. 

They're not brothers in this story.  I actually hadn't planned to bring David to town. But I don't think I can resist.  So look for him in the future....

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. It's very much appreciated.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter Three

I freaking love Lorenzo; actually, all of your characters are fantastically written.  And as much as I love Evangeline, I hope Lorenzo ‘sticks’ it to her this time. Whoever killed Layla is a sadistic maniac with vengeance as their motivator, but not Lo, that’s not his m.o.  Speaking of sick f*cks…Spencer…no other explanations needed. Lol

I could go on and on about this or that so I’ll just simply say I’m digging this piece, ready for the next update.



Author's Response: Hey JV. Thanks so much for reading.  Ah, so you're rooting for Lorenzo to stick it Vange this time.  Hmm..well he's certainly trying.  Spencer is...special. That's all I can say.  So happy you're liking the the story. Really appreciate the review and thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 07:36 am

Title: Chapter Two

Ugh Spencer and Faith, I kind of just threw up in my mouth a little bit.  Now there's a match made in hell if I ever saw one!  AJ is Spencer's bitch eh, how tragic.  I actually like original AJ so I'll just pretend this is the dark haired AJ because he seems more like he'd be Spencer's little lapdog.  Zander is going after Talia huh, that's interesting.  Lainey is a madam, too funny!  Love love love love love Ric and Lainey, already looking forward to some hot Rainey lovin.  Meanwhile, still hoping Lorenzo isn't so p whipped that he ends up getting his ass handed to him. . .again, that would just be tragic!  Love you for bringing this story back, this is how soaps should be written.

Author's Response:

Awww, I lurve Faith and Spencer. Get your stomach ready because they're coming back.  And yes, the AJ I picture is the Billy Warlock version.  Alas he is the Truman bitch.  So sad. And yes, Lainy is a madam.  See how she's putting her degree to use? That's a good thing right? She's helping people.  So glad you're on the Rainey train. More of them to come.  And as for Lorenzo...um...well let's just say he's well aware of your concerns.  He's learned, trust me he's learned. 

Thanks for reading it greatO. Really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/08 06:04 pm

Title: Chapter One

Okay not that I don't love badass Evangeline because I really, really do but Lorenzo needs to up his game a little bit, he's a little too damselly in distress.  I kind of would like to see him pull one over on her just once!  Poor Layla is dead, that seems to happen a lot around here hahaha.  Sam beating Zander's ass with the ice cream scooper is hilarious, actually Sam working in an ice cream parlor is pretty hilarious not even a bartender or something where she could make some tips hahaha.  Great start can't wait to see how this unfolds.

Author's Response:

Hey greatodin. Thanks for reading this one. All I can say is...... ummm nothing. :-) Lorenzo and Van have their dance that they do. All I can say.

I really like writing Sam and Zander way too much.  So glad you're enjoying so far. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/08 05:59 pm

Title: The Cast

Hmmmm, Faith Truman and Layla Vickers eh?  Interesting very interesting. . .

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Date: 24/11/08 05:52 pm

Title: Chapter Two

Sp Vange, Layla and Lainey are sisters I take it, and it seems the three didn't quite get along.... Lainey and Ric, could be interesting.

I thought that Vange would pounce on Lorenzo on the plane, I know she misses the 11 inches( I know I would) they are still HOT.

Faith and Spencer were funny.. glad that AJ is in this, I just hope he stays away from Mrs. Truman, she seems like a handful.

I wonder what Talia did to Zander... I do hope he and Sam make her suffer.



Author's Response:

Hey Shina. Yes the three are sisters.  And their relationship is...strained to say the least.  And Evangeline's distracted right now, and she meant what she said last time that Lo is bad for business. Plus she knows he's pissed and that's a dangerous condition for him to be in.  Faith and Spencer are fun to right.  I shall trot them out more as the story progresses.  And AJ was a last minute addition.  He will be a bit put upon, but he wants to get ahead.  And I see what side you're on in the Sam/Talia conflict.  Should be...uh..interesting how that all turns out.

Thanks so much for reading Shina and thanks for leaving a review. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/08 04:36 am

Title: Chapter Two

Oh, lord, I love the Trumans. They're some nasty, bitchy, sexed upt assholes, and I fucking love them. Poor A.J. he must get paid very, very well.

I like the new pissed off Lo, he's pretty damn entertaining. I'm already interested in Lainey, I really liked her introduction and the phone call with Ric has me intrigued.

*sigh* You're killing me with the Zander stuff, I'm doing backflips every time he shows up. And he hates Talia, which is fine by me. I like the idea of him and Sam teaming up, can't wait to see how that unfolds.

Loved the update, loved this story. LOOOVE Lo's Sexy Beard. :)



Author's Response:

Hey Token. Thanks for reading.  And how did I know you'd like the Trumans? :-)  And AJ gets paid well but he's more interested in where it all can take him.  And so he must suffer.

Lo is pissed.  Which is dangerous.  But fun. Lainey is different from her sister but the same in a lot of ways.  And Ric's got her number, trust me. 

I heart Zander. I shall write him at will.  Thanks so much for reading and the review.  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/08 07:23 am

Title: Chapter Two

I am SOOOOOO happy that you are writing this sequel. I've been waiting on it, and as usual you did not disappoint!!! I LOVE your cast, and I love how you've started. I can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: Hey Superstar! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  And yes, I know it took a while but I had to revisit this story at least one more time.  So glad you're enjoying it so far.  Hope you like what's to come as well! Thanks again.

Reviewer: Superstar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/08 01:46 am

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