I give the full story a ten, although it seems unfinished.

Still one of my favorite stories.

wow talk about misommunication. those two read each other wrong and don't take the time to talk to each other. this situation always happens in our world & relationsihips. in the end i'm happy they talked and worked on their coomunication. loved this.

I don't know how this stoy got passed me, but I absolutely LOVED this story (errors and all). I have a fascination with twins and that was awesome.

I wanted to hit Kia upside her head a couple of times but I still enjoyed the journey the story took.

Great that Antonio's father has met Nykia and discovered for himself what a wonderful person she is, that his racist stereotype against Black people was wrong! He also loved her home made cookies; I thought that was so cute and his delight in them made my mouth water for a bite, LOL 

Nykia's going to have twins! MHLoveless, you've said there will later be a story about Melissa and Nick; I hope to see the twins in their story. 

This story gave me much enjoyment; very well written, lots of fun and beautiful exciting love making.  It also very realistically told how a ONS can really be the true love of your life.  Usually, it does not turn out that way but, in Nykia, the first Black woman Antonio ever dated, he discovered in her special attributes, racial and personality; a fulfillment and happiness to a depth of his being not previously experienced nor conceived possible.  And that is Love, it is a wonderful mystery that is self-defined! 

Thanks MHLoveless for this wonderful story; very creatively and skillfully told!

Thank God both Nykia and Antonia have friends to give them good advice and have figured a way to bring them together and remove confusions. 

Glad to see Melissa and Nick are also going to meet again, I hope for romance. 

OMG!  I am swooning!  Their love making was so very beautiful!  I am breathless!

Well, Michelle is in deep sh*t; she and her criminal father!

Antonio is one strong man, he makes up his mind and that's it.  WOW!  If he were to decide he loves Nykia that would be it too!!..HMmmm! 

I adore this story!!!

Interesting that Nykia opts to keep the baby, many women would abort because, it came from a ONS. I guess she's of the group of women who cannot do an abort for whatever reason. 

Anyway, she can financially afford to have a baby and I'm happy for her because she already loves it, so she should have it!! Yayyy!.. Nykia! 

OKAY!  I know this is gonna be a way off the wall double date of Wilson/Nykia and Antonio's twin brother Adrian with his lady!  Because, Nykia is gonna be rocked:  thinking when she first see's Adrian, thinking he's Antonio!

This is a very exciting twist MHLoveless! 

WOW!  That is one of the most beautiful sex I've ever read!!!  And LOL, I felt like I was a part of it!  Yeah!  Gotta find me an Antonio now!  But, it can only happen in dreams I think!  The dream that your writing MHLoveless is giving me!  

SO THANKS!

Antonio and Nykia gave me a great trip!  WOW!  What a sweet magic elixir worth more than money can buy they made for and with each other! 

I think they are gonna become more than a ONS! 

Excellent writing MHLoveless!! 

WOW!  Nykia not only is dressed like a Slut but she is acting like one too.  I wonder if her ripped heart is driving her to destructive action, she had better be careful!

That's heavy, Antonio cancelled his intention to become engaged to Michelle because he found out she aborted their baby, and he did not know she was pregnant.  It's definitely true what he said:  that he did not love her nor she him, it was just a  suitable marriage for them both, almost a business arrangement with benefits.  Otherwise, he would not terminate any further relationship with her just because she aborted and without prior discussion with him.

But, he loves children and wanted them; also a business arrangement requires trust and she showed she could not be trusted because she did this very important action behind his back without prior discussion with him and she never even shared with him she was pregnant.  I understand his point of view about trust, what would she be like in a marriage.  So, best not to bind himself to her legally.  However, i also think he must been having second thoughts about marrying her before this surprise.