Great update, can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/12/08 10:43 pm
Oh no you didn't just leave with a cliffhanger. That is just so unfair. Please, please update.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 08:45 pm
Ohhh...that was wrong to leave it like that!!!
Glad she found out because I was feeling bad for her because she didn't know.
Its about to get really good now.
Great update!
Reviewer: flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 07:28 pm
I couldn't wait up, time difference and all. Ohhhhhh, please please, cliffhangers are soooo overrated! Update sooner. I can't wait till these two are alone. The energy is insurmountable! You've really done well with portraying the tension and energy between Kia and Tony that I knew immediately that Adrian wasn't the one. In my opinion, that's how romances should be!. Sure there're some grammar and spelling errors, but because this is so good (and free) I overlook such. Know though, if you're ever published I will EXPECT quality grammar and pay for it with pleasure.
Update update update sooooooon!
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/12/08 07:22 pm
Great update
Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 07:03 pm
Great story..and all great couples..Now you need to find someone for Wilson..because Kia and Tony are a done deal! Loved him walking up to her and asking her why'd she leave! LOL..She was just in a godsmacked stupor! Next chapter please!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 06:54 pm
Nooooo! I need more please. Can't leave me hangin.
Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 05:13 pm
oh now you know these chapters are way to short, i am so in love with this story,awesome chapter, i loved their reunion, tony is not letting her get away, kia was in a state of shock, i knew something was off with wilson the way her pushed this so called relationship and still wanted her after he knew she was pregnant, well he can pretty much forget it now, tony is not having it, tony and kia are hot and have so much chemistry, bring on the next chapter, i`m dying here, lol
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 04:58 pm
ARGh! Please, Please don't leave me hanging! :D
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/08 04:36 pm
At least THAT mystery is solved.
Wilson doesn't stand a chance, but that ex-beotch girlfriend is gonna be trouble.
I'm about to give you a title that I do not like: Cliffhanger Queen. I woke up this morning to read Part 2 & what do you do?
Please update soon.
Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 04:22 pm
Ohhhhhh, you love to torture us. They finally meet and the chemistry is back on. Now does he think she is pregnant with Wilson's baby? Or does she tells him the truth? So Wilson's brother suggests he maybe gay too - a little too much revelation to someone you just met and your brother's girlfriend? Hope you update this weekend
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 12:50 pm
Wilson doesn’t strike me as gay. He’s quiet, intense, and maybe a little bit lonely but not homosexual. I dunno, I could be wrong. lol
Mark and Chad were a cool couple.
Loved Tony embracing Nykia and asking her why did she left him.
Dang it, the chapter was too short! Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 09:17 am
This story is amazing! I hadn't realized I had missed so many chapters!!
I was prepared to really dislike Wilson, especially for bodily dragging my girl out of the apartment...but it looks like he is about to fix things...
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 07:50 am
Michelle is Pathetic, thats all I have to say.
Can't wait for Kia and Tony to reconnect.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/12/08 06:45 am
Cant wait to see how this goes! Thanks for the update!
Date: 27/12/08 05:48 am
Nice update. I'm glad this other lady is gone. I hope she is gone for good.
Now, Nykia can get her man and tell him about their baby she has decided to have.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 05:09 am
This story is soooood. Michelle is a trip.
Reviewer: flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 04:10 am
ok now we are getting to when they finally meet. tony's old girlfriend is not going to let it go. I wonder if her father does something to nykia mafia related. can't wait for part two.
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 03:19 am
I am so happy Tony tossed that skank to the side, how desperate!!!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/12/08 02:39 am
Michelle is a desperate treasure troll. I'm glad Antonio didn't fall for her stunts.
I'm also glad that Wilson persisted about 'taking' Nykia to the engagement party, even though he was wrong in his assumptions and methods but still, at least the truth will come out...finally. I can't wait to Tony's reaction to seeing her again,
Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 01:59 am
Yay an update!. Thank you. I'm on pins and needles waiting for Naykia's and Tony's face off. Whew, will it be hot and steamy?....can't wait....will stay up till you post part 2
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 01:43 am
thanks for the update, i love this story, i am glad wilson and nykia ta;led in the car and she didn`t make a fool of herslef in the party, or mess up things for aiden, i can`t wait for her and tony to see each other, and i can`t for michelle to see he is going to be a daddy
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 01:16 am
I can't wait for the truth to come out!
Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 12:56 am
You have to post the second part now. i am soo into this story you have no idea. Wilson has been redeemed a little in my eyes, but i still think he is a jerk. Michelle needs to get out from under her father's thumb and grow up. I can't wait to see how Tony and Nykia react to each other when they meet up again.
Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/08 12:18 am