OK I am sooooooo waiting for this update!!! Damn good story, almost as good as one of Black's, and in my mind that is frickin platinum!!!
Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/08 10:07 pm
I like it. Very much in fact. Generally, dislike "uncalled for" drama just to prolong a story, but yours is right on point and it moves along nicely. Can't wait till you update and clear up this misunderstanding. Good job. Looking forward to more of your talent.
Reviewer: cccH Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/12/08 02:01 pm
OMG!! I just read the entire thing and I love it! The engagemwnt party scenario is great! I cant wait for you to finish this.
Reviewer: flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/08 04:17 am
Okay, I don't like Wilson. That's not how you treat a woman, pregnant or not! He handled that all wrong. It may get the ball rolling but his style is extreme to say the least.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/08 03:00 pm
Wow! How much more twisted and complicated can it get? Kia thinks Adrian is Tony. How painful and difficult it must be to look into the eyes of a man and think he wasn't as touched by what went on between the two of you as you did. That he's a cheating liar. *ay yi yi*
Now she's dating Wilson and she's pregnant! *slaps forehead* What's a girl to do? I know Kia isn't going to be like Tony's ex-fiance and abort the baby, right? I can just see her talking to Adrian about it thinking he's Tony and Adrian going WTF? This has the potential of being a Three Stooges moment. LOL
Great update!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/08 02:32 pm
Great update!
Kia in for a surprise!
Date: 24/12/08 11:02 pm
DAMN WILSON TAKE IT EASY. WHEW MY GIRL NYKIA IS CONFUSED SHEY MET TONY'S BROTHER AT THE DINNER NOT HIM WOW I JUST CAUGT ON. SO ADRIAN IS NOT THE MAN SHE HAD A ONS WITH; WOW I JUST LOVE THIS STORY. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 02:50 pm
WHEW WILSON IS SOME KIND OF FANSTATIC, BUT NIKIYA NEEDS TO COME CLEAN TO HIM BEFORE IT BECOME EVEN DEEPER BECAUSE WLSON DOES NOT DESERVE TO BE HURT!!! LOVE IT AS ALWAYS.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 02:45 pm
WOW THAT WAS AWESOME; POOR NYKIA DAMN MELLISA IS SOME KIND OF FRIEND, NYKIA NEEDED POSITIVE SUPPORT NOT NEGATIVE FEEDBACK.. I HOPE NKIA KEEPS HER LITTLE BUNDLE OF JOY!!! LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 02:41 pm
Very good start. I LOL at Kia chasing those two ingrates out of her apartment with a kettle! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: brinagal Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 05:50 am
Wilson seems to be crazy, but at least his actions can bring these two craxy kids back together.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 05:05 am
Great update again, keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 04:59 am
I feel like a freaking idiot. I was not paying attention to the names in the last chapter...twins! LOL. The brothers even had a chapter together...how could I have overlooked...sorry.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/12/08 03:47 am
This is a very good story that shouldn't be rushed to finish. An update is always appreciated but not at the expense of the story.
Wilson doesn't believe her. She doesn't mention the name Anthony he used. Old Anthony's girlfriend wants him back at all cost. This is a big explosion in the making.
Thanks for bringing these characters to life.
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 01:53 am
I am desperate for and update now. I'm glad Kia came clean with Wilson. Wilson sounds like stand-up guy and deserve the truth. As it is, so many other people are going to affected by the truth.
I knew Michelle was no good. Her father's using her like a prositute and I am beganning to wonder if the baby she aborted was even Tony's. Even now Michelle is showing her selfishness. I wonder what will happen to her plans once Nykia makes her appearence onto the scene. Since her family so seedy I wouldn't put it past them to hurt Nykia.
Tony's father is also another issue. He should be wondering why Michelle's father once this merger so bad. I also have a sick feeling that he isn't going to be so welcoming to Nykia. Nykia does noty fit the image of this daughter-in-law, let alone the monther the next generation of Bronsons.
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 01:04 am
Ok I think Wilson is taking a little bit too much upon himself. It's clear she's mistaken that Antonio is Adrian however why did Wilson make the crack that he doesn't fully believe that's she's pregnant. Is it bc she named Adrian as the father? And he can't believe Adrian's supposed infidelity?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 11:15 pm
thanks for the update, good luck on your final, i am loving this story, i can`t wait until she and wilson get to the party, and she can see she has the wrong brother before she ruin the poor man`s life, and oh my can michelle catch a clue, HE DOESN`T WANT YOU ANYMORE, she is making a huge fool of herself, and i`m glad, i can`t wait for michelle to see he already has a baby coming, he doesn`t need her, everything is coming out at the party
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 10:38 pm
I can't wait for Kia to find out that Antonio and Adrian are Twins...
As for Michelle, she gives a new meaning to the word Desperation.
I hope all went well with finals.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 09:53 pm
First you get me all worked up seeing two chapter updates, and then you leave me hanging, i know, i know, your at work, but could you update soon...lol dangling carrots in front rabbits, thats just cruel lmao, but thanks for the story, i can't wait to see what happens when she learns adrian is not antonio, and Wilson is a little pushy but means welll oh well back to work,
alex
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/08 09:24 pm
That was a great love scene. You should be proud of yourself. I know it's difficult. I had trouble writing my first but I didn't and you did a wonderful job. Well done.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 08:14 am
great chapter, i can`t wait until she finds out she has the wrong brother
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 07:54 am
poor nykia has gotten her men mixed up and is pregnant,
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 07:48 am
Great update, can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 05:48 am
Wonderful and thank you for two updates in one day. I will be happy to see Tony and Kia back together and the misunderstanding out to the way about Adrian and Anthony.
Smooches
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 05:35 am
There is so much going on that I can't help but get attached to this story. I MUST find out what happens once she realizes that they are twins.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 04:48 am