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Title: Mistakes

Kia definitely needs to talk to Mel.  Wilson is stepping up and wants to continue seeing her.  I wonder how he will feel when finds out who the father is.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 02:16 am

Title: Just A Week Late

Wonder why Tony is acting that way?  I hope he's festering a bit inside.  Well, talk about having a reminder of your night together.  He is definitely going to want that child.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 02:12 am

Title: Mistakes

Oh you must update this soon, real soon.  Can't wait to see Kia's reaction when she finds out who Adrian really is and I certainly don't wanna miss it when Tony finds out.Tony would spoil Kia and his  baby rotten before its even born.

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 02:11 am

Title: Mistakes

Thanks for the fantastic update. 

Reviewer: juno Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 01:37 am

Title: Mistakes

Keep them coming! I cant wait to see what happens!

 

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 01:11 am

Title: Mistakes

I really like this story but I wish the chapters were longer (what can I say I am greedy).  Needless to say I can't wait for the confrontation but I wonder how will they fall in love without any ongoing meeting/relationship.  Wilson seems to be willing to be with her even knowing she is pregnant with another man's child.  I give it to any man to be willing to continue in a relationship under those conditions.  Awaiting the next update.

Author's Response:

Sorry the chapters aren't long because I write when I get into the moode and most of time its at work so i have to stop when I have a new task to do. Not to mention studying for finals. But i'll try to update more often so they don't seem too short.

Thank You for reading and I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: ghcrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 12:58 am

Title: Mistakes

Man this is like an episode of Three's Company, there are misunderstandings all over the place.

Kia should come clean with Wilson so she can see that she was actually having dinner with Adrian and not Tony.

Her and Melissa need to have it out.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 12:15 am

Title: Just A Week Late

More...More...More...Please...This is a great story I love it to death.  You know I usally catch things like the no protection but I totally missed it this time and I didn't even see the preganancy part but I am pleasantly surprised and it was a nice twist I'm happy about it.  Oh granddaddy is going to sh*t a brick for sure. LOL!!! I hope Tony and Kia are able to find each other and she finds out that he is a twin shoot it would even be nice to find out she it carrying twins but I am getting ahead of myself and the story.  Can't wait til the next update...I am so excited to see what happens next I hope it is soon.

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 05:44 pm

Title: Just A Week Late

Dang, I wasn't expecting this. I hope Kia keeps the baby and tell Adrian.

Reviewer: juno Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 04:39 pm

Title: Just A Week Late

Great update.. Kia has a lot do deal with, but the first thing she needs to do is talk to Tony b/c she is jumping to way too many conclusions, and IMO she is letting what happened with Robert effect her.

I also hope that she didn't ruin her friendship with Melissa.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 01:47 pm

Title: Just A Week Late

Waiting for the next chapter! Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 01:27 pm

Title: Just A Week Late

Someone who should better had sex without a condom. Forget about possible pregnancy imagine the stds she could be facing. But enough of that you would think she would slipped up and called Adrian - Anthony. Can' wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 10:59 am

Title: Two Brothers

Time to update this story.  We need to have them interact again.  Hopefully, you have time in your busy schedule to give us our daily dose of Tony and Kiki

Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 09:39 pm

Title: Two Brothers

Thanks for the update! Things are getting pretty complicated. Wilson's in 'love' with Nykia who just happens to be Tony's one night stand. Hmmm. Can't wait for the meet and greet! LOL

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/12/08 03:49 am

Title: Two Brothers

Great update!

Please update asap loving this story!

Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/12/08 07:10 pm

Title: Two Brothers

I feel like I'm on a tight leash.  I am waiting for Kia and Tony to meet again. I wonder what dear old dad will say about his new love interest.

Reviewer: juno Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 06:37 pm

Title: Two Brothers

OMG some drama is coming up big time... I can't wait for Adrian to find out that his best friend and his brother are into the same girl.

And could someone slap Michelle please.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 05:01 pm

Title: Two Brothers

Great update.  Who did Wilson meet?  Kia - maybe.  Is there going to be a little love triangle?

Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 04:16 pm

Title: Two Brothers

oooh i sense drama. great update. i can't decide which of your two stories i like more.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 02:35 pm

Title: Two Brothers

ok wilson sounds an little loopy, lol marriage, wait until antonio sees this woman, they both will freak,

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 09:20 am

Title: The Morning After

ahhh, she has already fallen for him, i can`t wait until they hook up again

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 09:11 am

Title: Sexual Healing

this may have been your first love scene, but it was hot hot hot,  these two were steaming

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 09:04 am

Title: His Little Red

antonio sounds hot, i like him, he stood up to his dad and let him know he was not going to be pimped, i loved it, i think he and kia will be perfect for each other, they both want each other badly

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 08:49 am

Title: Letting Go & Being Bold

nykia mean business, she is so funny, she has claimed her man

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 08:36 am

Title: The Bet

it seems like she is on her way to funville

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 08:30 am

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