oh she was all the waqy wrong, she should have discussed this with him, i don`t blame him for dumping her
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/12/08 08:21 am
I'm enjoying this story, I cant wait for them to meet up again..
Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 08:18 am
oh that was a great chapter, i feel so bad for nykia,
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 08:13 am
OH MY GOSH NYKIA WAS BID ON FOR 50 GRAND DAMN AND BY A CLOSE FRIEND OF ANTONIOS BROTHER. WOW THIS IS GOING TO GET CRAZY.. I LOVE THIS STORY; PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:31 am
WOW NYKIA MIGHT TOOK A LITTLE GIFT HOME FROM ALL THAT HOTT SEX!! OH AND MEL GIRL YOU NEED TO GO OUT WITH NICK!!!!!! DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:26 am
OKAY OKAY THATS IT YOU ARE GOING ON MY FAVORITE AUTHOR LIST I MEAN DAMN THIS STORY IS FREAKING AWESOME.AND THE SEX SCENE WAS MIND BLOWING WHOO I NEED A DRINK!!!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:22 am
WOW THIS IS SOOO GOOD I AM SCREAMING INSIDE!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:16 am
DAMN NYKIA IS BOLD ONCE SHE GETS A LITTLE DRINK IN HER. MAN WHAT A WAY FOR HER AND ATONIO TO MEET; I LOVE THIS STORY WHOO!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:11 am
DAMN NYKIA HAS AWESOME FUCKING FRIENDS. I MEAN WOW!!!! LOVE IT...
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:08 am
Yipee! We got an update. So Antonio was upset that Nykia left him. She met Wilson is going to have dinner with Antonio's twin. Boy-o-boy she is going to think it's Antonio. You need to update pronto. thanks
Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 07:03 am
OH MY THAT WAS AWESOME. POOR ANTONIO HE DID DESERVE TO KNOW ABOUT THE BABY EVEN IF THE TURD MICHELLE WASNT PLANNING ON KEEPING THE CHILD!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 06:56 am
DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY NYKIA WENT HARD ON THOSE SLIMEY BITCHES. WHOO WHEN SHE SLUNG THAT HOT KETTLE OF WATER I WAS LIKE DAMN YOU GO GIRL. NOT ONLY WS THAT HOE CLARISSA WAS FU*CKING NYKIA DOG OF A MAN BUT THEY HAD THE NERVE TO FUCKED IN HER BED. WHOO THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE AWESOME. I AM SOOO EXCITED!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 06:49 am
Oh oh, I smell competition and future tension amongst friends.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 06:00 am
Wow, dinner is going to be very akward...I can't wait
Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/12/08 05:26 am
Oy vey! Dont let her get away from tony! :D
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 05:08 am
Loved the relationship between the brothers...is it bad that I hope things don't work out for Nykia and Wilson???
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 05:05 am
Great update. But I need more, this is getting good
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/12/08 05:04 am
This was absoultely wonderful. I love the way the story flows...Now tell me... will she see Tony again at the auction...and will Melissa go out with Nick. I hope so....she needs a date...just like I do. LOL
Nice! You are a wonderful writer.
Reviewer: Moco Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/12/08 08:47 pm
I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 05:05 pm
Man that was cold. I can't believe she did that. I'm sure she felt she had the right but he has a point - they should have discussed it.
Great update.
Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 04:24 pm
Great beginning. Can't trust anybody can you?
Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 04:15 pm
Just found this story and I love it! Your first sex scene was HOT!!! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: ebnyobrien Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/12/08 02:28 am
Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who has posted a review. Its really appreciated and I do take the time to read them and answer questions when asked. I will try to get at least two more chapters up before christmas but I've been focusing on finals and the Christmas story.
Once again Thank you!
MHL
Reviewer: MHLoveless Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 09:53 pm
This story is the bomb. I can't wait til you update. I am so happy that you posted at TST with your other story. I like your writing style very much. OK enough of my rambling can't wait for the next :update: on both stories.
Peace, Love & Hair Grease
Thundakat
Author's Response:
Hey Thundakat.
I haven't forgotten about this tsory and I will try to get atleas two more chapters up before christmas but i right now I'm just focusing on the Christmas story. I just want to get it out of the way plus i have final papers to complete. Thank you for your interst in the story i'm really glad that you like it.
MHL
Reviewer: Thundakat Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/12/08 02:09 am
I LOVE LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. I NEED MY NEXT FIX. I HOPE YOU DO GOOD ON YOUR FINAL.
Reviewer: Safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 09:51 pm