i loved it very much can"t wait for mellisa and nicholas story
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/03/10 07:35 am
This is my second time reading this story.
I still love it.
I'm not sure that I saw Melissa and Nick story posted here. I'm gonna look for it.
I can't wait to read all of your stories.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/03/10 06:58 pm
I loved that story. That was awesome, and I am looking forward to you finished A Father for Christmas. I can't wait to read Melissa and Nicholas's story. You are the bomb diggity.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/10 08:07 pm
Mhloveless, I wish you would come back and continue to write wonderful stories. i really really do love unexpected love.
Reviewer: theirdre Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/09 02:39 am
Hold up... Nykia needs to tell the dude that impregnanted her shes Pregnant Tony or Adrian? HELLO?
LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/08/09 12:11 am
I'm confused I thought she was with Tony not Adrian are they twins?
Reviewer: NiaZ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/09 11:55 pm
This was extremely well written. I was rivetted from the moment I started and stayed up to complete it. I hope that you've at least started on Melissa and Nick's story as well. I will certainly be on the look out for more of your works.
You are extremely talented.
Well done!!!
Reviewer: gg Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/07/09 08:28 am
Aww that was good. Im glad things worked out between the two of them and that Tony's father realised that NyKia wasn;t what he thought she was and that everyone's happy. Can't to read Melissa and Nicholas' story.
Bumps
Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/09 04:50 am
NO ....it was genuine...not made up like many others.
You wrote with your heart, and not like you read too many sweet valley highs...
YOU DID GOOD
Reviewer: cree Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/09 05:26 pm
great read
Reviewer: Daniella Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/09 02:27 am
Wow!! Your first story, I'm honoured to have read it and I look forward to Melissa and Nicholas' story
Reviewer: irreader Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 06:34 am
Well written sex scene, not a thing wrong with it or lacking, keep up the good work. I zipping thru this story- very well written
Reviewer: irreader Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 05:53 am
Gutsy move by little ms nykia - loving it!!
Reviewer: irreader Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 05:44 am
This is a great start - I love the how you've made the introductions for the hero and the heroine, can't wait to read the whole story
Reviewer: irreader Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 05:37 am
I want to say I loved this story it was well written and thought out. I loved all of the characters and loved how you blended other characters with the main ones. I will look forward to reading other stories you have posted. Thank you for sharing your talent
Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/09 03:57 am
No worries you did a good job with the sex scenes, it was hot and romantic at the same time
Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/09 02:53 am
I just finished reading this story. I loved it. It was fast-paced, romantic, sexy, funny, with much drama. Even the "bad guys" were harmless. Relationships and good friendships were key components. Nice story!! Congrats on completing one!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/09 07:26 pm
great great great story looking forward to reading melissa's n nick's story =)
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/09 08:04 pm
i got mad love for the short-tall relationship
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/09 07:30 am
MHLoveless, I'm so proud of you for finishing this story! Congratulations!
I enjoyed it immensely and look forward to reading Melissa and Nicholas' story.
Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/09 07:51 pm
Love your story!
Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/01/09 10:28 pm
I feel kind of sad that this lovely story has already come to anend. That's what happens when you like a story so much you never want it to end. So now I am going to start your other story which I know I'm going to love already. Thank you for gracing us with your forst completed story. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/01/09 11:39 pm
thank you for this awesome story, i loved it, loved tony and kia, tony`s daddy don`t want to mess with kia, he sees she won`t be messed with, i`m glad that his dad got it together, he didn`t want to lose his son, tony and kia got the beautiful love story and happy ever after, even though it started a little different, and i can`t wait to read the rest of a father for christmas, thanks for finishing this story
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/09 10:10 pm
Well done
Reviewer: ladi_pi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/09 09:26 pm
WOW NIC FATHER DISGUSTED ME, BUT I GUESS THE SCUM BAG REDEEMED HIMSELF A TINY BIT. I MEAN TO BE SO OLD AND YET SO IGNORANT.. LOVED THIS STORY.. YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 11/01/09 10:46 am