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Title: The Proposal

YES, YES TONY PROPOSED AND DID SO SOO BEAUTIFULLY IT WAS JUST WOW.. NIC AND MELISSA ARE SOO CUTE CANT WAIT FOR THEIR STORY.. LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH.  FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 10:39 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

I loved it I love it I loved it.  I can't wait for Mel and Nick's story next but I so can't wait til you update "A Father for Xmas"

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 10:38 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

Great ending and I am glad that his father came around.  Looking forward to reading the next 2 stories up and congrats for completing your 1st story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 10:27 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

I really loved the story!  I am so glad they got through the misunderstandings and misconceptions and found true love together!  What a sweet couple!

Thanks also for making my dream come true; I was secretly praying for twins:)

Hopefully you'll write an epilogue, as I'd love to hear about them a little down the road, or maybe im Melissa's story....hmmm

Anyway, great job with the story and congrats on completing your first one!

p.s. I love London too!

 

 

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 08:40 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

I loved the story and am sad to see it end!  I am so excited that she is having twins!  I hope that Kia and Tony will make an appearance in Mel and Nick's story!!  I can't wait!

 

Congratulations on finishing your first story!  

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 07:29 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

First...congrats on completing the story!

Second...awww...that was sweet. So cute.

I hope we get to find out what they had in Melissa and Nick's story.

Reviewer: flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 06:07 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

Absolutely, wonderful story.  I am glad everything worked out in the end and they are so in love and starting a family.  Looking forward to Mel and Nic's story and hope to see Tony and Kia, too.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 05:56 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

I hate to see this one end.  It was a great story.  Loved Tony and Nykia.  His father was a trip.  Can't wait for Melissa and Nicholas's story.

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 05:47 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

yah! you are a great writer. I cant wait to see a father for christmas!

 

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 04:24 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

This was a great story and I can't wait to read Melissa and Nicholas's story.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 04:04 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

A happy ending - yep, I like it. Thanks!!

Reviewer: ghscrubbies Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 03:54 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

What a perfect ending. i thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish and I am excited for the next installment. I hope we can to see some of Tony and NyKia in Melissa and Nicholas's story. Great job.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 03:32 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

Wonderful.  Thank you!

Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 03:29 am

Title: Unexpected Forgiveness

This is fantastic story. I just wish I could witness the Capriatti downfall. After all their interference, I kind of feel let down. I really wanted to see Michelle get knock down a peg or two.

Author's Response: sorry for the disappointment...

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/09 03:28 am

Title: The Proposal

Are we going to get more of the story, or will it be a new story? Thanks!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/09 01:05 am

Title: The Proposal

Thank you for updating and I'm so happy that Nykia and Tony have found their way back to each other. I am also looking forward to reading Melissa and Nick's story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: karen timothy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 06:39 pm

Title: The Proposal

I am glad that everything has been straightened out!

 

I am excited to read about Nick and Mel!  I love that he already knows she is the one for him!  

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 05:46 pm

Title: The Proposal

awesome chater, thank you, i am so glad everything got cleared up and they are in love and he proposed and she excepted, they make a great couple. i hate to see their story end, i love them, i like mel and nick too, so they should be good too,

Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 07:18 am

Title: The Proposal

All I have to say is, it's about time!!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 05:25 am

Title: The Proposal

Great update, what a whirl wind romance.  So will Michelle and her dad try something along with Toni's dad to break Kia and Tony up?  I hope not beu they probably will.  Thanks for a great read looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 02:36 am

Title: The Proposal

Great update

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 01:34 am

Title: The Proposal

I loved this chapter; I am so glad Kia is done running and Mel helped make this happen!

 

 

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 09:37 pm

Title: The Proposal

Does any one else think Kia and Tony are rushing the marriage thing?

 

 



Author's Response: When you know you have a good thing you don't want to loose it. Tony knows what he wants and he's willing to do what it ever it takes to make Kia his.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 04:46 pm

Title: The Proposal

Whew, now i'm glad that everything is out in the open! Let's get to the wedding and mel's and nick's story! I can not wait! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 03:43 pm

Title: The Proposal

Great update can't want to see what happens next hate to see it come to an end.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 03:16 pm

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