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Title: Chapter 3

Drake can't keep his mind off of Eliza. Aunt Diana is going to cause all kinds of trouble!! Is Will  having fun out in he camp with the women they send to entertain them?

Author's Response: Hey bayoumomma, Yeah Drake is already smitten. Consider Aunt Diana from the older generation that is very intent on causing trouble especially if Drake is likely to hurt her niece. And to answer your last question Will is having lots of fun at camp...lol! Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 06:08 pm

Title: Chapter 3

OH MY I AM ABSOLUTLY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY PLEASE,PLEASE KEEP IT COMING... FOREVER A FAN!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hershey,

Thank you very much. I always look forward to your awesome reviews!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 01:05 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Choc, you brought me another Tangie tale! I know they have different names but they'll always be Tangie to me.

I'm intrigued by this storyline and look forward to reading more.

Gloria is a mess and Eliza should punch her in her mouth. Go head, let her do it! LOL



Author's Response:

Love...hahahaha...It is not a Tangie tale...shhhh

In later updates I will show why Gloria thinks she is the bees knees....:)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 3

I swear I would had slap that dam aunt ok she would got a face full ok knuckles lol. It good that darke has a friend who there for him.  Sara needs to get over it and act like an adult. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Congratulations WWE for winning reader of the month!

I thought about it :) but I knew a gentleman was suppose to behave like a gentleman back then...maybe I should plot a little revenge don't you think ;)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 3

You couldnt do it.....could you....but i am loving it all the same just blocking out Drake's face....so there :P

now update soon will ya...



Author's Response:

Hey C...

You told me not to call them Todd and Evangeline so I followed that advice...:) You can block out Toddikins as long as you like but he is still calling and reaching out to you..;)

Reviewer: C Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 3

Finally, I am able to read this new story of your Chocolate. It's great btw. I just love the setting and how everything is set up. Great choices of the cast too, especially Drake and Eliza *wink* I can't wait to see what happens next because is seems that there are going to be major conflicts are coming to play mainly with the matters of the heart.

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

I am so happy to hear you like it...I've had some troubles with the images but Z helped me out a great deal. Like I said this is a work in progress..I believe I figured out the middle and the end but lies in between those two is anyone's guest...Besides things are always subject to change :) In a way this story is leading me...

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/11/08 06:28 pm

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