Great chapter!! Sara is so bitter. they would not deny her anything. I was surprised at Drake sneaking in another kiss!! He had better be careful because Emilie is suspicious.
Author's Response: Hey bayoumomma, Sara is bitter because as the first born she feels that she is entitled and just because Drake is a boy their father seems to be giving him everything that should be hers. Emilie has a right to be suspicious...dont you think...lol! Thanks for the awesome review! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/11/09 06:18 pm
Alright, tongues just don't come out by accident Drake! Your fiance is in the same house. You know you and Emilie aren't meant for each other--why you playing with that girl's emotions? Kissing her on the forehead and then liplocking with Eliza. You wrong for that! LOL
Author's Response:
Love you know how it goes...LOL!
It's the times...it's the way things are back in those days...Drake will lead himself to the water to take a huge drink...;) you know what I mean...Once you go...nuff said!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 06/12/08 01:16 am
Just caught up with this one Choc. Love what you're doing with this historical piece. And your leads are perfect. :-) Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Black,
I think C will disagree with one of the leads lol!:) She hopes I write some original stuff soon...I promised her I will do it. Well for me going historical is not very easy but I'm trying and thats why I refer to it as a work in progress. Maybe I should also put up a disclaimer. Could you believe that I haven't even figured out the next chapter as yet and I've changed the ending once or probably twice...LOL! I told you guys I write by inspiration ;)
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/08 08:06 am
WOOHOO!! Keep the updates coming.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review JC! I'm glad you like it so far :)
[Report This]Date: 04/12/08 01:30 am
I say it agian that sister is a bitch lol. She proably don't know how to run a dishwasher let alone a bussiness lol. that so sad what happen to eliza mom and drake couldn't be there to say good bye. Eliza and darke are so cute together holding each other and being themselfs when it the two of them. I can't wait to see what happen next. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Well WWE,
Sara is made to be that way...LOL! Thanks for pointing out that dishwashers werent in those days...LMAO! As you can see Drake and Ms. Edith were very close first out of necessity but then it came to be a genuine son and mother relationship and it hurt to hear about her death. Of course Drake has a charming way about him that allows Eliza to come out of her shell...
Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 05:50 pm
Wow i am extremely impressed I loved this update....no more making sad tho ok....
but someone over there has been holding on out on us cuz those kisses have been popping...now keep taking that up a notch and i am gonna start blushing over....
GO CHAOS!!!!! GO CHAOS!!!!!!!
IM GONNA PARTY WITH CHOCOLATECHAOS....hehehe
(my plan is working muaahhh) *rubs hands 2gether wit wikked evil grin*
Author's Response:
C...you are impressed!
Eventhough though my other star is clear...humph...which you pointed out by the way...:)
What plan are you talking about C????
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: C Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 05:21 pm
Wow, great update Chocolate. I was heartbroken as Eliza and Drake were when Eliza told Drake about her mother's death. Yet both of the kisses they shared was hot indeed. It looks like these two are heading to a very strong connection that I believe nobody is going to break. I just see them falling in love with each other before either one of them knew it coming. As Emile said, it a distance between Drake and her and it just going to be bigger by the minute. Sara needs to get a life. She is a terrible sister indeed. Gloria got hers in this chapter with the dirty water. Excellent. Oh I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Hey Meg,
I had to write how both of them felt about Ms. Edith dying. Even with everything else Ms. Edith is one of the most important factors in their virgining relationship. Women always sense when something is going on with their man even if sometimes we don't want to admit it. Sara is Sara...she sure wasn't going to champion Drake coming home. She was too happy when he was far away and building another life.
That part about Gloria really wasn't in my first read but I decided that something needed to happen to her because her snotty behavior and so I thought Matilda would be the perfect person to do it ;)
Thanks for the awesome!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/12/08 04:50 pm