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Title: Chapter 5

Eliza was bold. She really surprised me when she took off her clothes. Loved it!! I bet Emilie's aunt was the one who saw her leave his room or maybe his sister.

Author's Response: Hey bayoumomma, Will is away and she does have that attraction to Drake. At least she had that pleasure before things change. The next chapter will reveal who saw her leave his room. Again thanks for leaving your reviews!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 06:56 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Oh my god who caught her? Was it the sister the finace or father? Updated soon i have to know. Drake and eliza are so good together. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Hey wwe,

I'm wondering who caught them myself...LOL!!! just kidding... Thanks for the great review as always!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 5

DAMN ELIZA SURE DIDNT PLAY HARD TO GET.  I LOVED HOW DRAKE PUT THAT BITCH GLORIA IN HER PLACE.  I BET IT WAS THAT WITCH THAT SAW ELIZA LEAVING DRAKE ROOM.  I LOVE THIS STORY,PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!

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Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh yes!! Chocolate, you have done it again. This chapter was on fire. I just love the whole set-up for Drake and Eliza making love to each other for the first time. They are so their real selves when they are together aren't they? I didn't even see it coming, but I'm so glad that is did happen though. LOL But now what?! Who saw Eliza leaving Drake's room and are they are going to cause trouble? I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job Chocolate and keep it coming.

Author's Response:

Hey M...,

Thanks for the review! I knew that it would surprise some people but I figured....Drake has restricted himself because of Emilie and Eliza because her man is away. Matilda helped to open her eyes on that part...LOL! I also wanted to show readers that they have always been comfortable with each other regardless of their status.

Answers will be revealed in the next update!!! 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh I can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review JC...,

Well hope to have that update ready soon...I hope...LOL!!

Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 5

Okay....first off: Thank you for the GREAT UPDATE!! 

I love that Drake and Eliza got to had that moment together because it's all going to hit the fan. I can not wait to find out who saw them.

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks Superstar,

It usually ends up hitting the fan in my fanfic...LOL! Maybe one day I will write a story that doesn't hit the fan...nahhhhhh....

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Superstar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 01:40 am

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