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Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful chapter.  I like how he put her aunt in her place!

Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma,

In those days men still had great power over women but she was surprised that he could so easily defend Eliza whom she considered far below their status. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/09 07:24 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Not trouble, but destiny!!!!

Author's Response:

So you see it as Destiny....Sweet Pea

People have a way of mucking up destiny before it is reached...Thanks for the great review!

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/08 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

I'm a little ticked off at Drake. He's slept with Eliza--now what? Does he think that he and Emilie will carry on as before?

Emilie's aunt is going to be trouble. I just feel like we haven't heard the last of her.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Oh Love,

You are having trouble with my male lead...LOL!!!:) You haven't heard the last of a couple of characters that are watching these two so look out in the upcoming updates!!!!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/08 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 6

WOW I JUST LOVE THIS STORY.  DAMN WHEN DRAKE LAID INTO THAT NOSEY COW DIANA  IWAS SO GLAD.  POOR ELIZA THINKING SHE LOST HER LOCKET.  DRAKE IS SUCH A SMOOTH ASS MAN NOW I CAN SEE HOW ELIZA COULD FALL EASILY INTO HIS ARMS.  MATILDA IS A TRIP.  GLORIA IS JUST A JEALOUS STANK AS HOE... I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey,

You know I'm happy to see that I'm giving you enough juicy characters and tidbits....LOL!! Drake had to defend his 'friend'. I hope to always keep your enjoyment of my story...Thanks a great deal!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/08 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 6

Oh, this was great Chocolate. Now, I see that Aunt Bessie was the one who caught Eliza, but it's good that Drake set the old hag straight about Eliza. Oh I feel for both Eliza and Drake, they are starting to fall in love with each other and they both know that they shouldn't because of their race and class. But love knows no color or class, just the  a person's heart inside. I loving how things are getting set-up again Chocolate. I can't wait to see what happens next.  Btw, they broke the locket?!?!? That was so good lovin' wasn't it. LOL

Author's Response:

Hey M,

Thanks very much and of course our man Drake will always defend his 'friend'. The times are complicated back then but you are right in saying that love always finds a way...

So M...they broke the locket...I don't quite remember...LOL!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/12/08 04:40 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Drake and Eliza need to be more carefully before someone else see them. I'm gald eliza stood up to that bitch of a aunt talking to her like she a dam aminal. Their love is so sweet and can't wait to see what happen at the pier. loving this story thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Thanks wwe,

Even though she is strapped by her circumstance but something had to come out of her mouth. She has worked for the Brodies for years and has never been spoken to in that manner so she had to take a small stand for pride at least :) As always thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/12/08 04:20 pm

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