This was a sweet chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey bayoumomma,
I enjoyed you taking me on this journey again with this story. Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/11/09 03:55 am
Thanks for the update! I just knew they would have to leave family and friends in order to be together. Now I wonder where they'll go...Europe? Canada?
Author's Response:
Hey Love!
Happy Belated Birthday...I had to acknowledge that since I missed it!
Just read the next update and you will be sure to find out! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/09 07:57 pm
yo choc, tell me it aint so?!! Now, this is what i call wickedness, you sucked me right in just to tell me there's one chap left? Well I really hope they have a very happy ending, love is a very wonderful and powerful thing
Author's Response:
Dye what have I done?
It is the job of the author to suck you in and then let you anticipate an ending...:) I didn't want my story to linger and you guys wonder when will everything be resolved.
I'm sure you will love the ending! I hope you write again Dye because you know I'm a Tangie fanatic and I need a lot of fixes...LOL! PLeaseeee...
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/09 08:14 am
They finally really get together and he has to leave! Life back then was so unfair for interracial couples. Thank goodness I live in this century.
Author's Response:
Hey Sweet,
Thank goodness we all live in this century. There is still some ways to go but at least I don't believe there is a law that outrightly bans such relationships. Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 08/01/09 07:02 am
I am in love with this story. Excellent update! Please, please, please give Jonathon a chance to have his own story. Let something happen where his young son comes to find him because his mom is seeing really hard times, and come under their employment. Then let the sparks fly from there. I know you said that he loves his wife but I have two options for that obstacle. A: she dies or B: she had a master plan all along to keep Jonathon from his true love. Just think about it okay? ahahaha.
Author's Response:
Hi brown_mocha,
I appreciate your support. So you really have some ideas about a Jonathon story....LOL! Your ideas really sound great so here is an idea...you have my permission to write it...;) Do we have a deal or what?...LOL!
Alright I'm giving it serious considerations but it will take some time to get my head wrapped around it and start the process. I'm sure one of your ideas will be involved in it ;)
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: 08/01/09 06:32 am
I'm so glad to see this story updated it one of my fav. I gald they finaly talked and relize they love each other no matter what and he going to fight to keep his woman. the love making was hot hot hot. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey wwe,
If they didn't talk they both would have go on having the wrong concept about their feelings for each other. The love would always be there but what would be missing would be the trust and the belief that they could make it even with the times that they were living in. Thanks for the great support of my story!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 08/01/09 06:19 am
WHOO I LOVE DRAKE HE IS SUCH AN ROMANTIC... ANTICIPATING THE FINAL CHAPTER. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Hershey,
Hope you are having a wonderful New Year! Thank you very much for the awesome review!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/09 01:55 am
Wow!! Drake and Eliza are so beautiful together. Goodness I really did love this chapter Chocolate. You could really tell that Drake finally understood why Eliza was fighting their love for each other, their relationship and giving her whole self to him. But I believe Mr. Brodie make things right for him and Eliza after their talk. they are truly in love with one another and it was so sweet to see them show their love for each other too. I of course love the making-up scene. Very hot indeed. Oh I'm hoping that Drake comes back to his love safely. I would hate for anything to happen to both of them. Great update Chocolate and I can't wait to read the ending too!!
Author's Response:
Hey Megumi,
I want to thank you for all your support that you have given me through my stories. We all understand that it was a battle that she couldn't win...LOL!!! because all he needed to do was show her that he was serious about starting a new life with her and of course have a plan. I've been going back and forth with this ending but I believe that you will love it as I do!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/09 05:54 pm