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Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

This story is exceptional, stong historical background. Supreb and please update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

This story started off so sad. But I can't to see how this story progresses.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/09/10 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

Please continue this story. And please add character pictures!

Reviewer: BellaFils Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 07:47 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

Please continue this story.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:47 am

Title: Chapter 2 - A different path

I'm liking this story.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:13 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

Good start.

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Date: 11/08/09 02:49 am

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

I love this story.  Elizabeth and her grandmother have shown Cerise great kindness.  But how long will she be able to keep this secret?  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: YH Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

Glad to see another chapter up.  I wonder if Mrs. Fitzgerald recognized that Charles was actually a 'she'. Plus, does she know Cerise's father's father.  I think Cerise will have a friend not only in Elizabeth but protector in Mrs. Fitzgerald.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/01/09 01:18 pm

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

Wow it a good thing that she survie. Poor celie to lose her father and still hide the fact she a woman. My fav part of this story the dream she had of her mom and dad. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/01/09 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 3 - Richfield

Amazing story on so many levels. Cerise is proving to be a very strong, independent young woman despite all the obstacles she's faced.

People can be so cruel. To make a child sleep in a barn just because of the color of their skin is despicable!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/01/09 05:04 am

Title: Chapter 2 - A different path

I really like this story...well done!!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/01/09 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

I really love the start to this story! Poor Cerise; I hate all the pain and hardship she's had to endure thus far. I hope things start getting better for her soon.

BTW, what year is this story set in?

Great start!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/12/08 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 2 - A different path

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!  

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/08 04:34 pm

Title: Chapter 2 - A different path

Poor cerise all alone I don't know what i do if i didn't have my mom.  I first thought that she finaly able to move alittle a reveal she a woman but she going to let people still think she a man.  It good thing that they found her in time or something worst could happen. I'm lovine the story thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2 - A different path

Her father loved her immensely but he certaintly didn't do her any favors by keeping so much from her.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 2 - A different path

Poor Cerise!

Hopefully things change for the better ofr her.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

This is the beginning of a beautiful story!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

Your use of colloquialism, dialect, language and mannerisms make this period piece work.  You’re very talented; by all means, please continue.

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/08 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

RP, another great start! I hope you continue the story.

In my opinion, they need to move elsewhere so that Cerise can actually be a young lady in public. How painful it must be for her to have to hide who she really is.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 08:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

WOW I LOVE IT ALREADY THIS REMINDS ME OF A BOOK I READ WHEN A WOMAN STOWED AWAY ON A PIRATE SHIP AND PRETENDED TO BE A LITTLE BOY WORKING IN THE CAPTAINS CABIN.  WOW THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME.. PLEASE,PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON I JUST LOVE IT

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 07:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

Oh please do finish this one day!!!!!

Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 04:42 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

Great Beginning.  Yes, you must continue this story.

Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

Definitely would like to see how this goes. Continue please :)

Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

This is a really good start.  But one thing, I can't tell if the main characters are African American

Can't wait for the update 

 



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! More becomes apparent through the following chapters, but I'll spoil a little to tell you that both she and her father are both black, but her father is very light skinned because he is biracial.

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Changes

I think this is a nice start and look forward to more in the future.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 12:54 am

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