This story is exceptional, stong historical background. Supreb and please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/03/11 03:22 am
This story started off so sad. But I can't to see how this story progresses.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/10 10:17 pm
Please continue this story. And please add character pictures!
Reviewer: BellaFils Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/07/10 07:47 pm
Please continue this story.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/09 03:47 am
I'm liking this story.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/09 03:13 am
Good start.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/09 02:49 am
I love this story. Elizabeth and her grandmother have shown Cerise great kindness. But how long will she be able to keep this secret? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: YH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/02/09 03:14 pm
Glad to see another chapter up. I wonder if Mrs. Fitzgerald recognized that Charles was actually a 'she'. Plus, does she know Cerise's father's father. I think Cerise will have a friend not only in Elizabeth but protector in Mrs. Fitzgerald.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 01:18 pm
Wow it a good thing that she survie. Poor celie to lose her father and still hide the fact she a woman. My fav part of this story the dream she had of her mom and dad. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 06:04 am
Amazing story on so many levels. Cerise is proving to be a very strong, independent young woman despite all the obstacles she's faced.
People can be so cruel. To make a child sleep in a barn just because of the color of their skin is despicable!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 05:04 am
I really like this story...well done!!
Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 02:11 am
I really love the start to this story! Poor Cerise; I hate all the pain and hardship she's had to endure thus far. I hope things start getting better for her soon.
BTW, what year is this story set in?
Great start!
Date: 29/12/08 06:04 am
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/12/08 04:34 pm
Poor cerise all alone I don't know what i do if i didn't have my mom. I first thought that she finaly able to move alittle a reveal she a woman but she going to let people still think she a man. It good thing that they found her in time or something worst could happen. I'm lovine the story thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 09:54 pm
Her father loved her immensely but he certaintly didn't do her any favors by keeping so much from her.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 09:06 pm
Poor Cerise!
Hopefully things change for the better ofr her.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 07:18 pm
This is the beginning of a beautiful story!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/12/08 01:26 am
Your use of colloquialism, dialect, language and mannerisms make this period piece work. You’re very talented; by all means, please continue.
Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 01:16 am
RP, another great start! I hope you continue the story.
In my opinion, they need to move elsewhere so that Cerise can actually be a young lady in public. How painful it must be for her to have to hide who she really is.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 08:08 pm
WOW I LOVE IT ALREADY THIS REMINDS ME OF A BOOK I READ WHEN A WOMAN STOWED AWAY ON A PIRATE SHIP AND PRETENDED TO BE A LITTLE BOY WORKING IN THE CAPTAINS CABIN. WOW THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME.. PLEASE,PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON I JUST LOVE IT
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 07:32 pm
Oh please do finish this one day!!!!!
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 04:42 am
Great Beginning. Yes, you must continue this story.
Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 03:32 am
Definitely would like to see how this goes. Continue please :)
Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 02:58 am
This is a really good start. But one thing, I can't tell if the main characters are African American
Can't wait for the update
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! More becomes apparent through the following chapters, but I'll spoil a little to tell you that both she and her father are both black, but her father is very light skinned because he is biracial. Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 01:45 am
I think this is a nice start and look forward to more in the future.
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 12:54 am