I like John/Teyla. Your story was very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks very much.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/08 01:38 am
It is so good to see your work here. I first read your stories at Wraithbait. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I've been a little lax about posting to Wraithbait but I'm glad to put my work here so people outside the usual channels get to read it.
Date: 09/12/08 04:10 am
Oh I loved this. I haven't seen a single episode of this show and it didn't matter. You're THAT good. I loved your description of the bout. Very, very well written. And that ending was great. I really liked this and hope you post more.
Author's Response: Hi there and thanks! I wrote Shatter about two years before I started training in Filipino stick fighting (escrima) and I'm very happy with many of the details about the fight that actually work.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/08 08:00 pm
I've read this before. I love it. Teyla is my girl. Love a chick that can kick A$$. There were so many small moments in this, that just got me. Thank you for posting it here.
Author's Response: You're very welcome. Teyla is my favorite character as well.
Date: 08/12/08 03:30 pm
I remember this show. That was a really good story. Thanks for sharing. There was a lot of real raw emotions in the story.. When I read the following, I knew it was going to be really good..
Teyla doesn't know the word, but the minute they clash and she feels the vibration all the way through her body, she knows. This man is here to kill her.
Teyla imagines she can hear that little bone in his spine shatter but that's drowned out by his scream.
But then I read: Her mouth works but there is no sound. Only when John's arms come around her again and he’s whispering her name over and over does she realize that she's crying
and then it made everything complete.. Really good .. thanks for sharing and welcome to the site.. Hope to see more stories from you ...
Author's Response:
Hey there, thank you so much for your review and your welcome.
Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/12/08 03:04 pm