I hope he isn't having an affair. His family is a trip. Great first chapter.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/09 03:32 pm
I love the story so far, can't wait until you udpate.
Please udpate, i love married couple
Author's Response: I love married couple stories too. Sometimes the fun is reading about their lives -after- they've gotten together. Reviewer: anymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 08:15 pm
Great start ShanniC! You're awesome for answering the challenge and you did it with what's shaping up to be a great story.
I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Aww, you're making me blush! Thanks for reviewing! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/12/08 07:43 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and for your kind words!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and for your kind words!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:48 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:48 pm
My heart goes out to Monique. Marital woes on top of family problems are not a good mix during the holiday. I'm with hershey_kisses; kick those annoying in laws out of your house.
Author's Response: Marital problems can be such a drag, especially with nosy in-laws, but I love complex family dramas. Thanks for reviewing! Reviewer: juno Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:05 pm
WELL I WOULD HAVE BLOWN MY TOP IF I WAS MONIQUE AN THE INLAWS HAD THEIR NOSE IN THE AIR. I WOULD HAVE TOLD THEM MARK IS NOT HERE AND SHOWED THEIR ASSES TO THE DOOR. BUT ANY WHOOO I LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, we all have family or know people with family like that! I am glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for revieweing.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:34 pm
Good start. I want Monique to put those bitches in their place wherther or not her husband is there. I would send their @sses stepping if they wouldn't lay off me. I hope Monique's family comes over soon if Monique's husband doesn't show up because then she will have someone on her side.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Monique's family will be arriving shortly and they will be bringing added drama with them!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 06:32 am
Great start
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:34 am