I don't think that Mark was cheating I think that it was gift for Monique at least I hope that is the case. Please update soon,
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/02/11 02:52 am
Please write more i saw how you publish it on fictionpress
Anywho im in love with this story
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/11/10 10:44 pm
This is a great story I hope you finish it.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/06/10 04:04 am
I hope that that isn't the end of the story, please tell me that you wiill finish it.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 05:05 am
This is really good and I like the plot of it. I just have this to say. Your pictures aren't showing up anymore. Also sometimes you kind of switch between first point-of-view and third point-of-view. I don't know if you were trying to make these thoughts and they just weren't highlighted or anything. I just wanted to bring it to your attention, and that's all. I really enjoy the charaacterization you have. I think it's really great.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: 03/01/10 09:35 am
Too bad this story wasn't finished.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/09 05:42 am
She should have stayed and talked to him. Darcy doesn't know what's going on besides the fact she knows Darcy doesn't like her so why listen to anything she has to say. Great update!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/09 03:44 pm
I love this story!!! When is this story going to updated again?
Reviewer: aquaBLUEpetals Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/09 04:27 am
OMG.. I just love this story. Christmas this time will be one memorable event for all of them.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/09 03:23 pm
ok can i kick Darcy arse please.....
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Don't worry Darcy will eventually get her comeuppance.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/09 05:10 pm
wow! i love ALL of your characters (kinda reminds me of my in-laws) please update ASAP!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! If I had inlaws like this, I would head for the hills.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/09 03:30 am
I meant to give you four stars but it didn't work that way. Will try that aqgain.
Reviewer: Vi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/12/08 07:58 pm
Thanks for posting this chapter. This family has some SERIOUS issues! I agree the shit has hit the fan. This is getting good. I can't wait to hear what Mark has to say and I can't wait for Monique's family to arrive. Very interesting in deed. I'm dying to find out who this mysterious woman is in Mark's life. So, Jeremy may have a thang for Monique.....sweet. So much issues and drama, one can't help but to ask for more.
Author's Response: Yeah, this family does have serious issues! ^_^ Who knows what else can happen... Reviewer: Vi Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 07:54 pm
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to be quick about updates.
Date: 31/12/08 05:13 pm
Thank You for the update. It was interesting to say the lease. I don't think Mark is cheating and Lady M my have had a package for him that he was getting for Monique. How can Monique believe Darcy one may ask and not have faith in her husband well he has been acting a bit distant...coming home late....strain in there love life or lack there of...so what is a woman to think. I hope all will be revealed.
Update soon
Author's Response: Thanks you for reviewing, and yes all will be revealedd in due time! Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 09:52 am
She should have given him a chance to explain himself. Darcy is a *itch and I can't stand her.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Things do happen for reason... and yeah, Darcy is pretty dislikable.
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 06:45 am
Darcy is an uppity bitch!
Looking down her nose at them when she needs to be paying some attention to her own life. That was just mean and nasty what she did.
And poor Monique, I was worried she was gonna crack with all those crazy people.
Mark's people dont like Monique but they stuck up for her why I wonder.
This family is something else. Cant wait for what happens next.
Author's Response: Darcy is pretty much an evil wench, but there is good in everyone... As for Monique, well will see about her mental stability soon enough... Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/12/08 06:30 am
When I started reading this story I thought that maybe Mark did cheat on Monique but i don't think so anymore. Darcy is the one that needs to be slapped. Mark has some explaining to do and I hope eventually Monique will let him explain.
Author's Response: I can't wait to post Mark's chapter which will give more insight into his behavior. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 05:22 am
I need another update...pronto. This is reallly good. Lots of drama
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to be quicker with my updates.
Date: 31/12/08 05:06 am
That Darcy is a bitch and needs to be slapped herself. She obviously shouldn't have kids. Poor Monique I hope she can sort out what the hell is going on. Good update!
Author's Response: Yeah, Darcy is shaping up to be a maor pain! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 31/12/08 04:48 am
Darcy needs to be slapped six months into the future!big blabber mouth. I get the feeling that Mark is working on something for his wife and that he is not cheating.
Author's Response: Darcy is something else all right... As for Mark, well time will tell. ;)
Date: 31/12/08 03:56 am
Darcy a major pain. She should have stayed in Texas.
Author's Response: Yeah, Darcy is a kind of character that you love to hate. Thanks for reading! Reviewer: juno Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 03:13 am
omg awesome i can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll try to improve on my updates.
Date: 31/12/08 03:04 am