When I started reading this story I thought that maybe Mark did cheat on Monique but i don't think so anymore. Darcy is the one that needs to be slapped. Mark has some explaining to do and I hope eventually Monique will let him explain.
Author's Response: I can't wait to post Mark's chapter which will give more insight into his behavior. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 05:22 am
I need another update...pronto. This is reallly good. Lots of drama
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to be quicker with my updates.
Date: 31/12/08 05:06 am
That Darcy is a bitch and needs to be slapped herself. She obviously shouldn't have kids. Poor Monique I hope she can sort out what the hell is going on. Good update!
Author's Response: Yeah, Darcy is shaping up to be a maor pain! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 31/12/08 04:48 am
I'm so glad this story was updated, and I hope I don't 'have to wait long for another one. It's so intriguing with all the characters. There is nothing better than family drama. This is just with all of the Harringtons! Michelle's family hasn't even arrived yet. I cannot cannot wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I will try to be as quick as possible with my updates.
Date: 31/12/08 04:21 am
Darcy needs to be slapped six months into the future!big blabber mouth. I get the feeling that Mark is working on something for his wife and that he is not cheating.
Author's Response: Darcy is something else all right... As for Mark, well time will tell. ;)
Date: 31/12/08 03:56 am
Great update.:) I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I am glad you're into the story. Reviewer: Rashell Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 03:20 am
Darcy a major pain. She should have stayed in Texas.
Author's Response: Yeah, Darcy is a kind of character that you love to hate. Thanks for reading! Reviewer: juno Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/12/08 03:13 am
omg awesome i can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll try to improve on my updates.
Date: 31/12/08 03:04 am
I love the story so far, can't wait until you udpate.
Please udpate, i love married couple
Author's Response: I love married couple stories too. Sometimes the fun is reading about their lives -after- they've gotten together. Reviewer: anymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 08:15 pm
Great start ShanniC! You're awesome for answering the challenge and you did it with what's shaping up to be a great story.
I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Aww, you're making me blush! Thanks for reviewing! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/12/08 07:43 pm
really enjoying this so far! please update soon...the story is interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad that you like the story. I will try to keep it interesting.
Date: 10/12/08 01:24 am
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and for your kind words!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and for your kind words!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:48 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:48 pm
My heart goes out to Monique. Marital woes on top of family problems are not a good mix during the holiday. I'm with hershey_kisses; kick those annoying in laws out of your house.
Author's Response: Marital problems can be such a drag, especially with nosy in-laws, but I love complex family dramas. Thanks for reviewing! Reviewer: juno Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 08:05 pm
WELL I WOULD HAVE BLOWN MY TOP IF I WAS MONIQUE AN THE INLAWS HAD THEIR NOSE IN THE AIR. I WOULD HAVE TOLD THEM MARK IS NOT HERE AND SHOWED THEIR ASSES TO THE DOOR. BUT ANY WHOOO I LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, we all have family or know people with family like that! I am glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for revieweing.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:34 pm
LOVE THE PICS... OFF TO READ NOW
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to get the perfect people to represent the characters and I think that I did a fairly good job.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:27 pm
I really like it so far can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 09/12/08 06:36 am
Good start. I want Monique to put those bitches in their place wherther or not her husband is there. I would send their @sses stepping if they wouldn't lay off me. I hope Monique's family comes over soon if Monique's husband doesn't show up because then she will have someone on her side.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Monique's family will be arriving shortly and they will be bringing added drama with them!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 06:32 am
Great start
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 09/12/08 04:34 am