This is really well written. I like this story so far and it's interesting.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/12/09 05:53 am
I thought that it was ironic that he was at the same restaurant that she was meeting her fiancee. I have a felling that this wedding will not happen because Seth is very much still in love with her and she probably is still in love with him to. Also she needs to tell her fiance that she has run into her ex twice in one day. Once he finds out that she has been secretly meeting with him, all hell is going to break out. I know that the meetings weren't a secret but her not telling her fiance makes them seem that way. Thanks for a great read. Take Care.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/02/09 05:46 pm
Seth is a little late to the party, and Tyler is much more stable, and seems to fill a need in Mel. She's sure about him, but her rationale for keeping the return of Seth is a little lame even to me. She needs to fess up and quick. If Tyler runs into Seth or a situation between the two Mel has no one to blame but herself. Nice of Seth to apologize (idiot), but Mel has I think unresolved feelings for him so in a way it is good he came back before the wedding hope it is resolved before she's standing in the church....LOL
Reviewer: johnandvan Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/09 03:12 am
Very nice update! Seth gettting wasted and puking was no good. You'd think that if the guy was trying to win her back he wouldn't go drown his sorrows with whiskey... but he also didn't know she was gonna be there! I like how him returning to Providence is throwing her off a bit. Seems very realistic that people return in our lives at the most inopportune times. Anyway, great job and continue the good work. :)
Author's Response: Hi IDJ, Yes, Seth's return is throwing Mel off balance. His return and consequent stay in Providence will prove to be a test for Mel that she was not counting on. Seth's presence will definitely cause external as well as internal conflict. Thanks for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 26/12/08 10:41 pm
well she better not count seth out, and lauren acts like he dumped her, she is taking this worse than mel, if mel still has feeling for seth, it`s nothing she can do about it,
Author's Response: Lauren means well and has Mel's best interest at heart. Seth and Lauren were friends as well, so his leaving affected not just Mel, but both their families as well. Thanks for your comments. I hope you enjoy the next update.
Date: 23/12/08 08:43 am
seems like seth means business, he really hurt mel, he has a lot to make up, he still has that affect on mel
Author's Response:
Hi MsLeLee,
Yes, Seth still has that affect on Melanie. There is both a lot of hurt and love between the two of them. Seth realizes the damage he has caused.
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 08:22 am
Melanie and Seth need to stop the madness and get it together. Well, I guess she does have a man and Seth did hurt her, but I can't help but want them back together.
Author's Response: Mel and Seth have a lot of history both good and bad. It is hard when love and hurt occupy the same heart. I am glad to see you back Sweet Pea, TTYL.
Date: 21/12/08 02:51 am
Good start, will enjoy reading more, Seth is a man on mission.
Author's Response: Hi Robin, Seth is a man with a purpose, now if he could just get Mel to see that. Thanks for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 19/12/08 08:46 pm
I'm so glad to see this updated. Seth need to make a choice either fight for her or let her go to be with tyle but I hoe he fights for her. She should listen to her cousin and tell him the truth by hiding it it makes things worst. love this story thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hi WWE, Melanie isn't the only one that has to make some decisions about their future. It's hard when you see someone you know making a mistake even if they think they are handling the situation right. I appreciate your feedback. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 19/12/08 06:09 am
Great update...I agree with Lauren it'd going to come back in bite Mel in the ass for not telling Tyler about Seth. For one with them being in a small city and everyone know everyone else's business it is bound to get back to Tyler and then and this could just be me and then Tyler is going to feel like there is some unresolved feeling between her and Seth and he should be worried about their relationship and her feelings for him. Again great update and I can't wait til the next.
Author's Response: Hi Thundakat, It is complicated for Mel. She is trying to straddle the fence and spare everyone's feeling. She will realize you can't make everyone happy. Thanks for your comments...much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 19/12/08 12:29 am
Great chapter..Seth has some issues that he needs to take care of, and he needs to stay away from the Johnny Walker.... btw, is it me, or is Tyler kinda boring.
Mel needs to tell Tyler that Seth is back b4 he hears it from someone else.
Can't wait to see how this unfolds.
Author's Response: Hi LL, Seth has been dealing with the guilt of this for a while now. So hopefully he can forgive himself. Thanks so much for your review. TTYL. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/12/08 11:34 pm
This was an excellent start Harlen, I can't wait to see how this plays out and if Seth can reedem himself in Mel's eyes. Looking foward to the next update Harlen!
Author's Response:
Hi TBG, Thanks so much. Seth is going to try his best to redeem himself; though it won't be easy!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/08 04:51 pm
Awww. I love Mel's friends and how they have her back. I wonder what Seth did that was 'so' bad and how he can justify it by saying he left 'because' he loved her so. Hmmm. But now Seth is back with a vengeance to claim that love...too little, too late? We'll see, I suppose. Love this :) Thanks for posting.
Author's Response:
Hi Madame Z, Yes, Seth is back with a vengeance. We shall see if it is too little too late.What he wouldn't do to be able to turn back time. We shall see :-) Thanks for your comments.
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/08 05:20 pm
Gorgeous cast :)
Author's Response: Hi Madame Z, Thanks. I think they fit together really well.
[Report This]Date: 17/12/08 05:01 pm
I like Lauren- ride or die chick.
Mel- I see trouble..lol.. need to meet the fiance. See what hes working with.
Seth- Well from what Mel remembers..he's working with a lot. But he did leave so I can't wait to see how he tries to fit back in.
Very intriguing story. Next chapter please.
Author's Response:
Hi PBE06,
LOL! Yes, Lauren is ride or die. Everyone needs a cousin/friend like her.
Mel- memories can be bad if they are that good. The fiance will be coming up soon.
Thanks for the compliements, I will be updating soon.
Reviewer: PBE06 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/12/08 03:20 pm
Very nice start Harlen. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi BlackMamba, thank you for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 17/12/08 06:21 am
I like the premise of this story. You have set the scene and I can't wait to see how this will play out.
Author's Response: Cjaysmom, Thank you so much for your review. Talk to you after the next update.
Date: 17/12/08 04:50 am
I like this story so far. Seth definitely has some things to explain and prove to Melanie. This is going to be a interesting story and wedding LOL.
Author's Response: Hi Reeshemah, I am glad you like it so far. Seth does have a lot to prove...to everyone and especially Mel. Thanks for your review
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 10:29 pm
Wow what a great start... Lauren and Stacy are a riot.
Melanie/Seth, there is some serious unfinished business there, and I can't wait to read it.
I kinda want Tyler to be a jerk so I won't feel bad for him if Melanie goes back to Seth... but I have a feeling that Tyler may get hurt.
Author's Response: Hi LL, Everyone needs a Lauren and Stacey in their life. Mel wants to leave the past where it is and Seth has no intention on doing that...so we will see. Thanks for your comments. I hope you enjoy what's coming up. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 03:25 pm
Nice chapter/start. I am truly interested in seeing what happens, if Mel will marry Tyler and let Seth back in.
Author's Response: Hi Thundakat, It will be interesting with these two with what happens now that so much has changed. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 03:06 pm
Looking forward to the rest
Author's Response: Hi JCDeppfann, Thank you, I will be updating soon.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:30 am
Great start to the story her ex hasa lot of nerve to be pursuing her now that she is getting ready to get married to someone else after he broke her heart. Thanks
Author's Response: Hi Divsionred, I see that you and Lauren would be really good friends! Yes, Seth does have a lot of nerve. Thanks for your comments. Talk to you after the next update.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:28 am
Well i realy like this story the charcters the dram and the love tringale and can't wait for more so updated soon. I wonder what seth next move. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hi WWEFan, I am so glad you like this story. There is definitely drama and decisions to be made. Thanks for your comments. I will be updating in the next few days. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:22 am
Nice cast can't wait to read. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hi WWE, Thanks for the comment. I will be updating soon.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:08 am
Nice start
Author's Response: Hi Gale, Thanks for your comments.
Date: 16/12/08 03:16 am