seems like seth means business, he really hurt mel, he has a lot to make up, he still has that affect on mel
Author's Response:
Hi MsLeLee,
Yes, Seth still has that affect on Melanie. There is both a lot of hurt and love between the two of them. Seth realizes the damage he has caused.
Reviewer: mslelee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/08 08:22 am
Good start, will enjoy reading more, Seth is a man on mission.
Author's Response: Hi Robin, Seth is a man with a purpose, now if he could just get Mel to see that. Thanks for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 19/12/08 08:46 pm
This was an excellent start Harlen, I can't wait to see how this plays out and if Seth can reedem himself in Mel's eyes. Looking foward to the next update Harlen!
Author's Response:
Hi TBG, Thanks so much. Seth is going to try his best to redeem himself; though it won't be easy!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/08 04:51 pm
Awww. I love Mel's friends and how they have her back. I wonder what Seth did that was 'so' bad and how he can justify it by saying he left 'because' he loved her so. Hmmm. But now Seth is back with a vengeance to claim that love...too little, too late? We'll see, I suppose. Love this :) Thanks for posting.
Author's Response:
Hi Madame Z, Yes, Seth is back with a vengeance. We shall see if it is too little too late.What he wouldn't do to be able to turn back time. We shall see :-) Thanks for your comments.
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 17/12/08 05:20 pm
I like Lauren- ride or die chick.
Mel- I see trouble..lol.. need to meet the fiance. See what hes working with.
Seth- Well from what Mel remembers..he's working with a lot. But he did leave so I can't wait to see how he tries to fit back in.
Very intriguing story. Next chapter please.
Author's Response:
Hi PBE06,
LOL! Yes, Lauren is ride or die. Everyone needs a cousin/friend like her.
Mel- memories can be bad if they are that good. The fiance will be coming up soon.
Thanks for the compliements, I will be updating soon.
Reviewer: PBE06 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/12/08 03:20 pm
Very nice start Harlen. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi BlackMamba, thank you for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 17/12/08 06:21 am
I like the premise of this story. You have set the scene and I can't wait to see how this will play out.
Author's Response: Cjaysmom, Thank you so much for your review. Talk to you after the next update.
Date: 17/12/08 04:50 am
I like this story so far. Seth definitely has some things to explain and prove to Melanie. This is going to be a interesting story and wedding LOL.
Author's Response: Hi Reeshemah, I am glad you like it so far. Seth does have a lot to prove...to everyone and especially Mel. Thanks for your review
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 10:29 pm
Wow what a great start... Lauren and Stacy are a riot.
Melanie/Seth, there is some serious unfinished business there, and I can't wait to read it.
I kinda want Tyler to be a jerk so I won't feel bad for him if Melanie goes back to Seth... but I have a feeling that Tyler may get hurt.
Author's Response: Hi LL, Everyone needs a Lauren and Stacey in their life. Mel wants to leave the past where it is and Seth has no intention on doing that...so we will see. Thanks for your comments. I hope you enjoy what's coming up. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 03:25 pm
Nice chapter/start. I am truly interested in seeing what happens, if Mel will marry Tyler and let Seth back in.
Author's Response: Hi Thundakat, It will be interesting with these two with what happens now that so much has changed. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 03:06 pm
Looking forward to the rest
Author's Response: Hi JCDeppfann, Thank you, I will be updating soon.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:30 am
Great start to the story her ex hasa lot of nerve to be pursuing her now that she is getting ready to get married to someone else after he broke her heart. Thanks
Author's Response: Hi Divsionred, I see that you and Lauren would be really good friends! Yes, Seth does have a lot of nerve. Thanks for your comments. Talk to you after the next update.
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:28 am
Well i realy like this story the charcters the dram and the love tringale and can't wait for more so updated soon. I wonder what seth next move. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hi WWEFan, I am so glad you like this story. There is definitely drama and decisions to be made. Thanks for your comments. I will be updating in the next few days. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 05:22 am
Nice start
Author's Response: Hi Gale, Thanks for your comments.
Date: 16/12/08 03:16 am
Excellent start Harlen! Seth is a persistent one... now! I wonder why he felt he had to leave her? I don't know. Looks like Mel's gonna have some difficult decisions to make in the near future. Love Lauren and her no nonsense attitude. She tried her best to check Seth but he's stubborn and it doesn't look like he's gonna budge. This was very good and I can't wait to see what's to come.
Author's Response:
Hi IDJ, thanks for your comments. Yes Mel will have decisions to make and Seth will not make it easy for her. Thanks so much for the comments and again for my banner.
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/08 02:30 am
WOW I'm intrigued, I sense that there is something deeper going on that a young boy making a stupid mistake.
Author's Response: Hi Luciangirl, Seth is realizing that it is hard living with regrets and trying to make things right is not as easy as he thought. Thanks for your review.
Date: 15/12/08 11:28 pm