This is really well written. I like this story so far and it's interesting.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/12/09 05:53 am
I thought that it was ironic that he was at the same restaurant that she was meeting her fiancee. I have a felling that this wedding will not happen because Seth is very much still in love with her and she probably is still in love with him to. Also she needs to tell her fiance that she has run into her ex twice in one day. Once he finds out that she has been secretly meeting with him, all hell is going to break out. I know that the meetings weren't a secret but her not telling her fiance makes them seem that way. Thanks for a great read. Take Care.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/02/09 05:46 pm
Very nice update! Seth gettting wasted and puking was no good. You'd think that if the guy was trying to win her back he wouldn't go drown his sorrows with whiskey... but he also didn't know she was gonna be there! I like how him returning to Providence is throwing her off a bit. Seems very realistic that people return in our lives at the most inopportune times. Anyway, great job and continue the good work. :)
Author's Response: Hi IDJ, Yes, Seth's return is throwing Mel off balance. His return and consequent stay in Providence will prove to be a test for Mel that she was not counting on. Seth's presence will definitely cause external as well as internal conflict. Thanks for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 26/12/08 10:41 pm
well she better not count seth out, and lauren acts like he dumped her, she is taking this worse than mel, if mel still has feeling for seth, it`s nothing she can do about it,
Author's Response: Lauren means well and has Mel's best interest at heart. Seth and Lauren were friends as well, so his leaving affected not just Mel, but both their families as well. Thanks for your comments. I hope you enjoy the next update.
Date: 23/12/08 08:43 am
Melanie and Seth need to stop the madness and get it together. Well, I guess she does have a man and Seth did hurt her, but I can't help but want them back together.
Author's Response: Mel and Seth have a lot of history both good and bad. It is hard when love and hurt occupy the same heart. I am glad to see you back Sweet Pea, TTYL.
Date: 21/12/08 02:51 am
I'm so glad to see this updated. Seth need to make a choice either fight for her or let her go to be with tyle but I hoe he fights for her. She should listen to her cousin and tell him the truth by hiding it it makes things worst. love this story thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hi WWE, Melanie isn't the only one that has to make some decisions about their future. It's hard when you see someone you know making a mistake even if they think they are handling the situation right. I appreciate your feedback. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 19/12/08 06:09 am
Great update...I agree with Lauren it'd going to come back in bite Mel in the ass for not telling Tyler about Seth. For one with them being in a small city and everyone know everyone else's business it is bound to get back to Tyler and then and this could just be me and then Tyler is going to feel like there is some unresolved feeling between her and Seth and he should be worried about their relationship and her feelings for him. Again great update and I can't wait til the next.
Author's Response: Hi Thundakat, It is complicated for Mel. She is trying to straddle the fence and spare everyone's feeling. She will realize you can't make everyone happy. Thanks for your comments...much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 19/12/08 12:29 am
Great chapter..Seth has some issues that he needs to take care of, and he needs to stay away from the Johnny Walker.... btw, is it me, or is Tyler kinda boring.
Mel needs to tell Tyler that Seth is back b4 he hears it from someone else.
Can't wait to see how this unfolds.
Author's Response: Hi LL, Seth has been dealing with the guilt of this for a while now. So hopefully he can forgive himself. Thanks so much for your review. TTYL. Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/12/08 11:34 pm