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Title: Why Does She Love Me?

Hi, are you ever gonna finish this story? I've read it twice now. Despite the grammatical errors, the story is really good. Just brilliant. It needs a conclusion.

Reviewer: bobbie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/15 07:47 am

Title: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

I loved this story so much!! I am happy I decided to reread your stuff because it is really GOOD!!!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/07/14 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

i love this story so much. i wanna know  what's going to happen next.

Reviewer: boop Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/08/12 11:36 am

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

Where are you, I can't wait to finish the story!! Please hurry up! Please!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/04/12 03:30 am

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

This story sucks balls

Reviewer: dodo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 09:25 pm

Title: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

I miss this story

Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 06:49 am

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

Please finish it :(

Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 08:37 pm

Title: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

i love it

Reviewer: tee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/11/10 04:40 am

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

Gurlie where u at?

Reviewer: Stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/10 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

Where you at girl! The break is over and I'm ready for more drama.  I luv this story, it's hella fun to read!LOL

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/10 06:27 pm

Title: Chapter 31 – This Time Imperfect

It was good, I thought it was the end this is a crazy drama it gave too much whiplash I need a break lol

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter 29 – Volume Overload

Seriously, I'm getting a headache from one petty tina and chris thing to another I pray to GOD people don't act like that in real life.LOL

Author's Response:

GOOD THING IT'S JUST ABOUT OVER THEN.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 10:29 am

Title: Chapter 28 – Love Don't Come Easy

Now I'm getting tired of these petty kiddy arguments between Tina and Chris Sh*t is annoying

 

Truth be told LOL

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 09:36 am

Title: Chapter 27 - Secrets (Part 2)

OH UH this keeps getting better and better Sexy Sonny is Tina's Father Wow...poor rhi rhi she was ridiculas...Finally Chris will know crazy Sorrell is stalking Tina!



Author's Response: I really really want to thank you for reading this long ass story and leaving comments as you go. I like that you give your true opinion, good or bad. Thanks alot.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 02:46 am

Title: The Terminal

Very Good!sexscene and I'm wondering about Chris and Raymond was that a set upor what? *giggles*

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 12:37 am

Title: Love In This Club

Awww Dayum breakup and makeup that's all they do...ole skool song

 

I'm glad they back together you write so well

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 11:42 pm

Title: 2 Wrongs

WhoA! that was deep

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 11:15 pm

Title: Don't Let Me Get Me

This is crazy good I think she needs to break up with chris for a while, and find some other dude. The sex scenes need to be a lil more detailed & explicit for example read the "The Lover" by Tokenblackgirl ...Awesome 

but other than that you good



Author's Response: Thanks! I've been working on it.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 10:50 pm

Title: Can You Stand the Rain

Good chapter

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 05:10 pm

Title: Lights Out

Dayum she still with that crusty negro?

this is funny



Author's Response: crusty? lmao!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 03:52 pm

Title: Life Line!

OK Shalaylay betta shot the gonzo nose negro lloyd hahahaha

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 11:06 pm

Title: Dance! Dance!

Awww hecky naw this is so good it's hilarous firs lloyd than peaches saving Tina with a straw...omg it's crazy good

and Fathead earl in the other chapter had me rolling LOL

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 04:56 pm

Title: The Set Up

What is on that TAPE!!!!!!!!!!!thats what I wanna know

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 03:14 pm

Title: Why Does She Love Me?

It took me 2 days to read the whole story. I LUV IT! From the concept to the characters. Usually u get some1 who works 4 a drug lord and nt sme1 who is 1, I luv ths couple so mch. Tina really (x100) luvs Chris. plz add soon

Reviewer: Angel35 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 02:56 pm

Title: I Will Be

so she back with that no good chris YUCK!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/09 10:14 am

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