Hi, are you ever gonna finish this story? I've read it twice now. Despite the grammatical errors, the story is really good. Just brilliant. It needs a conclusion.
Reviewer: bobbie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/06/15 07:47 am
I loved this story so much!! I am happy I decided to reread your stuff because it is really GOOD!!!
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/14 09:39 pm
i love this story so much. i wanna know what's going to happen next.
Reviewer: boop Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/08/12 11:36 am
Where are you, I can't wait to finish the story!! Please hurry up! Please!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/04/12 03:30 am
This story sucks balls
Reviewer: dodo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/09/11 09:25 pm
I miss this story
Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/03/11 06:49 am
Please finish it :(
Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/10 08:37 pm
i love it
Reviewer: tee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/11/10 04:40 am
Gurlie where u at?
Reviewer: Stars Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/10/10 09:19 pm
Where you at girl! The break is over and I'm ready for more drama. I luv this story, it's hella fun to read!LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/10 06:27 pm
It was good, I thought it was the end this is a crazy drama it gave too much whiplash I need a break lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/09 02:51 pm
Seriously, I'm getting a headache from one petty tina and chris thing to another I pray to GOD people don't act like that in real life.LOL
Author's Response:
GOOD THING IT'S JUST ABOUT OVER THEN.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/09 10:29 am
Now I'm getting tired of these petty kiddy arguments between Tina and Chris Sh*t is annoying
Truth be told LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/09 09:36 am
OH UH this keeps getting better and better Sexy Sonny is Tina's Father Wow...poor rhi rhi she was ridiculas...Finally Chris will know crazy Sorrell is stalking Tina!
Author's Response: I really really want to thank you for reading this long ass story and leaving comments as you go. I like that you give your true opinion, good or bad. Thanks alot. Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/11/09 02:46 am
Very Good!sexscene and I'm wondering about Chris and Raymond was that a set upor what? *giggles*
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/09 12:37 am
Awww Dayum breakup and makeup that's all they do...ole skool song
I'm glad they back together you write so well
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/09 11:42 pm
This is crazy good I think she needs to break up with chris for a while, and find some other dude. The sex scenes need to be a lil more detailed & explicit for example read the "The Lover" by Tokenblackgirl ...Awesome
but other than that you good
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been working on it. Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 10:50 pm
Good chapter
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/09 05:10 pm
Dayum she still with that crusty negro?
this is funny
Author's Response: crusty? lmao! Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/11/09 03:52 pm
OK Shalaylay betta shot the gonzo nose negro lloyd hahahaha
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 11:06 pm
Awww hecky naw this is so good it's hilarous firs lloyd than peaches saving Tina with a straw...omg it's crazy good
and Fathead earl in the other chapter had me rolling LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 04:56 pm
What is on that TAPE!!!!!!!!!!!thats what I wanna know
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 03:14 pm
It took me 2 days to read the whole story. I LUV IT! From the concept to the characters. Usually u get some1 who works 4 a drug lord and nt sme1 who is 1, I luv ths couple so mch. Tina really (x100) luvs Chris. plz add soon
Reviewer: Angel35 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 02:56 pm
so she back with that no good chris YUCK!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/09 10:14 am