That was so great. I'm so happy that Chris is goning to wait and see if Tina is strong enough on fight on her own.

I can't believe Chris said those things to her when he saw her.  He needs to get over all his insecurities dealing with their relationship.  She loves you! Get over your self.

Have I told you I love this story? I'm sure I have.  Well!  I love this story!

Girl you know this story is the BOMB!!!

I am actually proud of Chris, he has been showing a lot of maturity in this chapter!  The scene with him and Tina was heartbreaking!  I am glad she is fighting for her and the baby!

I couldn't beleive Tina's mom coming in with all that confusion!  That was a hot mess!  I am glad her sister stuck up for her!

I almost...almost felt bad for Rhiana when Chris told her he was taking her son...but I got over it!

I do feel bad for Shad...he is going to be heartbroken when finds out all that Lay has been up to.

Shalay is working my last nerve however...I am intrigued to see what is going to happen in the next chapter!

I am so glad to see an update to this story and can't wait for the next one!!! 

I think Lloyd is going to piss me off in this story.  He seems like he's going to be a problem for Chris or Tina.  Probably both.  Why is Chris Being so secretive.  It's not helping his relationship.

I liked this chapter.

I'll read more later on.

Oh!  I looked at your line up and I forgot to say that I like the length of your chapters.  You seem to make it worth your readers time. Can't wait to read more.

OMG!  DID SHALAY SLEEP WITH LLOYD?  THAT'S WHAT IT SEEMED LIKE.  SHE'S GOT MAJOR PROBLEMS.  I REALLY LIKED HER AT THE BEGGINNING BUT SHE'S ON MY SHIT LIST NOW. 

THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER SO FAR GIRL!  THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER.  HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH ALL THIS!  YOU ARE A GREAT STORY TELLER.  I THINK I'VE SAID THIS BEFORE BUT I'LL SAY IT AGAIN.  I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS YOUR FIRST STORY.  KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I can't belieave shalay.  That bitch!  She was rubbing up on Chris like that.  She's got some nerve.  Even after all of that Tina still took those bullets for her.  I want her and the baby to be okay.  Please let them both be okay. 

Now they got to call her mother.  If I remember correctly she's a major bitch!  This should be interesting. 

This was a really good chapter.  Add soon.

OMG. I have finally caught up with this story. I can't believe Shalay. I can understand her being jealous of Tina's connection to Shad, but putting her life in danger? That's pretty cold. I have a feeling when Shad finds out he is going to stick his foot up her behind. And Chris...Well she might not live if he finds out about her involvement. Lloyd is a psycho. He went completely off the rocker when Tina told him no. I hope that Chris finds them out in time. Great chapters...I s it wrong of me to hope that Riahanna is eliminated? LOL.

Author's Response: lol no it's not wrong of you.

:yay:  I have been stalking the boards all week hoping you were going to update this story!!! 

I loved Tina taking care of her man!!!  I am glad they are close to fixing things between them.

And can I say how much I dislike Shalay right now?  Everyone has put the Shad thing behind them except her...Tina has never made any hint she was interested in her man...that is foul that she would let the petty jealousy ruin their freindship!  Now her stupid butis trying to get them all killed!

Chris is going to go ballistic once he realizes she snuck out the house!!

I hope you post the next chapter soon!

This chapter was off the charts!  The meeting was well written Ms. Sherry.  Great job!  You had me leaning outta my chair.  I was so nervous for whatever was coming next. 

What's on that damn tape or dvd?

add soon please!

Lloyd is a grade A jerk! He is absolutely obsessed with Tina. I hope he does not kill Chris or have Cris killed. It's a shame that Chris can't change his colors for Tina. He is trying to prove that he can change and be the person that Tina needs, but it does not look like change is working well for him. Great chapter.

Author's Response: THANKS CHICA.

Good chapter! I heart Shalay... she's keeps it funky! LOL! Um, not really feelin' Lloyd.  He's too damn sneaky, trying to move in on her with Chris in jail.  No good! I laughed when Mya told him I like Uncle Shad but I don't like you.  Too cute... Honest but cute! I can't believe Megan showed up all cracked out and disgusting! YUCK! And you're right, Megan Goode is pretty and I can imagine there not being one ugly picture of her on the internet! LOL! Good update! :)

Author's Response: thank you!  i'm real excited that you're reading. yeah megan is a beautiful woman.

i just started reading it today, and what ive read so far is great. and it was only chapter one. so i cant wait to see where this is going.

dani